Reviews For MFA: Mafia
Name: XD (Anonymous) · Date: 29/03/08 - 05:29 pm · For: Chapter 1
good i love this! Can't wait for the next chapter
Name: Fangurl4ever (Signed) · Date: 08/03/08 - 09:21 am · For: Chapter 2
Omg! i luvles this fic! And I also love narusasu update soon
Name: saya (Anonymous) · Date: 14/09/07 - 03:28 am · For: Chapter 2
im actually looking forward to the next chapter just wish itachi was nicer to sasuke
Name: Nicola258 (Signed) · Date: 31/08/07 - 08:23 am · For: Chapter 2
Wow!!! So intense, can't wait to find out how they both handle this. Xxx
Name: recita1717 (Signed) · Date: 27/06/07 - 07:30 pm · For: Chapter 2
Yay! Kankurou is in this fic, he dosen't get enough love! Happy happy keep writting!
Name: sasuxnarulover (Signed) · Date: 19/06/07 - 09:31 am · For: Chapter 2
i like it.
Name: ANBU Captain (Anonymous) · Date: 08/06/07 - 12:19 pm · For: Chapter 2
I like the story! Please update soon!
Name: HeartOfIce (Signed) · Date: 20/05/07 - 06:05 pm · For: Chapter 2
Please update it soon, it's really, really good.
Name: SquareBallProduction (Signed) · Date: 20/05/07 - 01:05 pm · For: Chapter 2
Awesome story..... ^^ I love it!
Name: Blood and Ink (Signed) · Date: 20/05/07 - 02:56 am · For: Chapter 2
Why must you have so many good stories... and be so wounderful. TT.TT
I like this story from the first moment I read the first chapter... which was a little while back.
I can't waite to read more!!
Name: Ero_Jiraiya (Anonymous) · Date: 19/05/07 - 07:41 pm · For: Chapter 2
Write the next chapter :)
Name: Ero_Jiraiya (Anonymous) · Date: 19/05/07 - 07:29 pm · For: Chapter 1
Hah the Bios made me laugh! :P
Sasuke a prostitute :)
Niceness I like the story already.
and takahiro8 not trying to flame ya or anything but you say you're the perfect speller and all that yet you spelt repetition wrong :P hehe just wanted to mention that 'cause I thought it was ironic and funny ^_^
Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 19/05/07 - 07:19 pm · For: Chapter 2
I love this chapter! Revelations are always fun, especially when it being between two rival mafia gangs, hehe. Poor Naruto...and Sasuke too for that matter. I am so looking forward to more on this fic.
And no worries about the heights, I get over things. ^.~ Ever saw 'Knockaround Guys'? It's a great movie about the sons of mafia bosses who don't get accepted either in the mafia or in society.
Name: Oni_Chan (Signed) · Date: 19/05/07 - 07:07 pm · For: Chapter 2
*huggles* Sama what kinda person do you think I am? I wouldn't get pissy over that! Sheesh ><
I love the chapter! Ita is such a bastard >>
Oh and by the way Sama, Aniki=older brother Otouto=younger brother
Name: Monica (Signed) · Date: 08/05/07 - 03:50 pm · For: Chapter 1
*eye visibly twitched*
You.. ended it.. MAY YOU WHOME STOPS THE STORY BE SMITED D:<
Anyways, cant wait for more
Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 21/04/07 - 06:42 am · For: Chapter 1
I like it, I definitely do. Every since I saw Bugsy Malone as a kid, I've been a huge maffia-fan, haha. The only thing that bugs me slightly is their heights...only two guys below 1.90...seems a bit...extreme. Then again, that's just me. Part from that little detail, I really, really like the beginning of this.
Name: Holy Angel Sakura (Signed) · Date: 13/04/07 - 06:08 pm · For: Chapter 1
oh my i love it please continue with the story and Update Soon!!
Name: moon master (Signed) · Date: 13/04/07 - 04:32 am · For: Chapter 1
omg
it was so cute i cant wait tilll sasuke finds out who naruto is
ha that will ba a laugh
anyways please update soon ^_^
Name: Adela (Anonymous) · Date: 12/04/07 - 09:16 pm · For: Chapter 1
ooh that is hot, inform me when you update
Name: Nao_angel (Signed) · Date: 12/04/07 - 02:13 pm · For: Chapter 1
*drools*
of course i LOVED it^^
that's awesome!!! keep up the good work;)
Name: Oni_Chan (Signed) · Date: 12/04/07 - 12:27 pm · For: Chapter 1
*huggles* Anything for a friend Sama ^_^
You and Animehead make an awsome writing team ^_^
Name: takahiro8 (Signed) · Date: 11/04/07 - 08:47 pm · For: Chapter 1
really good plot, and i loved that there were only a few grammatical errors and that word repittions were only limmited to 7.( yes im a grammar freak, i have to be since my spelling would make 3rd grade teacher cry. Just for the record it made her scream once)
I feel like hugging you because of the low ( and sorry about counting, i like to show examples) errors. I have been reading stories of fanfiction.net............
OMFG, most of those stories would make my eys bleed because of the lack of plot and grammar usage. Not to metion that it lack any vocabulary greater than a 5th grader's. The smut there just was.....afwul. I love you. aAn excellent storie and great back up story line can be used in case of authors block. The whole intruduction gave the story a well thought out appreance. The bio's, the gave me the feeling that they were being taken pictures, like the police parol thing( i forgot what it is called.) Maybe I just have have a big imagination.
Please continue writting. I shall wait upon you next posting.
P.s. I love you Oni, for making this story not lack greatness, and have good grammar.
And Sai's fetshi.........that part made me blush, ME! I dont blush. OMFG, am i going soft. NO!
- That which one looses, cant be recovered. Love falls in this criteria, no matter how much we say otherwise.-
Name: katana_uchiha (Signed) · Date: 11/04/07 - 08:29 pm · For: Chapter 1
this looks like its gonna be really interesting