Reviews For Strength In Love
Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 07/08/07 - 02:19 pm · For: Learning to Lose pt 1
Ooooomg, I'm so glad you wrote another chapter to this story. I have no idea how long it's been up here, since I haven't been around for ages. This fic is very interesting, I adore how you let me see a different side of Itachi and Deidara. They're both so cold, though one is loud and the other death silent, but here they are warm and loving towards each other. They're human, and I like that.
The only thing that'd make this story even better is if you divided it into paragraphs. It's make it loads easier to read, and that'd probably make it even better. That is my only complain, the content is perfect and I can find nothing that is not to praise.
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-- Usagi : IT USED TO BE DIVIDED INTO PARAGRAPHS!! WTF!! AHHHHH!!!! I guess they want the < br > codes now. darn it!! darn it!!! Ill fix that then. I do write in paragraphs. the other parts of the story are in paragraphs!! Grrr....anyways : ) I'm glad you like it and I'm happy that I allow you to see other sides of Itachi and Deidara. : D Thank you for your revieww <3333
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 02/08/07 - 02:53 pm · For: Learning to Lose pt 1
Very nice. I wonder what Itachi's going to do when he catches up with everybody. I have the feeling that there's going to be some blood spilled here.
Will this have a happy ending? I hope it will. But then again, it's your story, so do what you want. I'll understand if it has a sad ending.
Good job. Can't wait for your update.
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-- Usagi : I'm not even sure what kind of ending it's going to have. When I write, it's more of my fingers doing all the thinking and my brain just saying, "Good job!" : D haha