Reviews For Jealousy
Name: ChiyoChan (Signed) · Date: 17/04/07 - 08:38 am · For: Chapter 1:Inconvience
I agree with a vampires butterfly- it's an awesome idea, this pairing would be HOT, but could do with paragraphing
Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 07/04/07 - 05:04 pm · For: Chapter 1:Inconvience
Oh my gosh! I would so love to read this, but umm could you please separate it a bit? You know paragraphs? Not just one big block? It would be really much better if you did! So just break it up a bit, maybe make a bit longer and I will be back for more! I just love Shika with anyone so yeah. With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
Author's Response: O.Osure