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Name: Zelman (Signed) · Date: 17/04/07 - 12:34 am · For: Everything in Your Hand
Wow, you seriously pair everyone single in this story up. Half of them with Naruto ;D

*giggles* I would have liked a little different kind of a battle with Itachi ;DD Too bad he's with Kisame T_T [ITANARU ALL THE WAY BABY!!! *throws confetti*]
JAAMATANEESHIT *is on a bad mood after she bumped her head on the doorhandle* (yes that is possible. As true as the pain in my head [note to self. don't ever walk with three mugs of water and try to take your shoes off the same time -.-']

Author's Response: Waaaah, no!! I didn't pair Itachi with Kisame!! No, NO, NOOOO!! It's just...you know, ADMIRATION!! Itachi is MIIIINE!! Seriously I plan to make baby Uchihas with Itachi as the father!! He can't be GAY!!


Name: Zelman (Signed) · Date: 16/04/07 - 11:55 pm · For: Brothers Reunion
Uwah... You jumped over the smut O_O'

Huh... What a shame... There goes Sasuke's free (and cool~) tattoo. such a waste T_T

Haha... I was hoping that maybe we'd have some Hyuuga or Kakashi sweetness, but... I'd bet that Naruto could handle it though! XD Sure. He's strong. Few... or actully 4 (or more XD) guys are nothing to Naruto. The guys would kill each other pretty soon, though ;D

Jaa mata NEEE~~~~~ *with annoying grin*


Name: Zelman (Signed) · Date: 16/04/07 - 09:20 pm · For: Revealing the Information!?
Ha... Interesting twist ^_^ So... I take it that the Akatsuki leader wants to see Naruto, more than take his bijuu..? Ku ku ku ku *giggling maniacly*

Don't try to stuff the smut there, if it doesn't seem to fit. When there is this much fluff and loving already, that the yaoi will come there when it fits. Remember, that good smut can be found behind every corner, but long, good fanfictions are rare.

Jaa mata nee~~~~!!!


Name: Zelman (Signed) · Date: 16/04/07 - 08:49 pm · For: Surviving the Battle
*sob* *sob* that's so sad T_T poor Naruto... Now he has to live with it that he "killed" Sandaime... But I'm glad that Orochimaru died ;D

Hmh... What Sasuke will do with the seal if Orochimaru died...? Ô_o Well, it looks cool, if nothing else XP

Gaara has grown pretty much more emotional and I guess Naruto is the one to blame, but that's seriously a hell of an lot changing...

Jaa mata!


Name: Zelman (Signed) · Date: 16/04/07 - 08:22 pm · For: The Explosion of Power
... *is too excited to speak* ...

SUGOI! ... KYAAAAA!!! *runs to read more* Sorry, gotta go XoX Damnit, I wanted to write more, but.... *is already gone*


Name: Zelman (Signed) · Date: 16/04/07 - 08:05 pm · For: The Exam...Begin!!
Ha... Orochimaru... As sexy as ever ;D

I'm beginning to wonder if Naruto is all right... Seems like he's turning into what Sasuke would have been, little different though :D

This chapter wasn't that boring :D Short it was. I've started to appriciate long chapters when reading this :)

Hmh... I'm beginning to wonder if I'm reviewing this too much :D Especially cause my reviews aren't that constructive :D Just blabbering XD Well, what the heck. There isn't anything you could do better (yay for absolutely perfect fanfictions ^_^ *is very critisizing, but when finds a fic that she absolutely loves, goes mad* XDD

Author's Response: No no NO!! I love your reviews!! They're really funny and I love THEM!! Please don't stop reviewing!! Please review me moooore!! THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR THE REVIEWS!! XDDD!


Name: Zelman (Signed) · Date: 16/04/07 - 07:23 pm · For: Make the Enemies Your Allies
COOOOL~! Damn, I've always cursed that kishimoto made Naruto look too stupid in some situations :D You've fixed that, thank you!!!


Name: Zelman (Signed) · Date: 16/04/07 - 06:54 pm · For: 2nd Mission Starts!! Join The Chuunin Exam!!
Tee hee... What would Lee do if he'd hear about Ino? XDD...

Aw~ Naruto is such a knight.. (Ehehe... Does that make Sasuke a princess? XDD *imagines Sasuke in a dress xDDD*)

Haha... Neji. He'd probably wake gay thoughts even in a straight guy :D Our little Neji is so gorgeous ^_^

Uh... I wonder what the heck will Haku and Zabusa do in the chuunin exam? :D Serve some juice and sell cookies? XD Probably not...

Jaa mata nee!


Name: Zelman (Signed) · Date: 16/04/07 - 06:24 pm · For: A Date before the Chuunin Exam
Awww.... fluff... So fluffy ^_^ *melts*

I'm always sad that there isn't very much threesome smut fics T_T

*giggles* Lets see if I'm spirited (or awake) enough to review in most of the chapters till 26? XD

Author's Response: Err...smut in threesome...? Honestly I don't know how to write sex with three people *embarrassed*. Well, i will learn somehow later...thanks for the review!


Name: Zelman (Signed) · Date: 16/04/07 - 05:59 pm · For: Sasuke's Jealousy!? The Bijuus and Jinchuurikis
"At that time…Gaara had fainted because the shock was too much (Naruto: wait, he can’t faint! Shukaku will take over his body!! A/N: Let say Shukaku fainted as well…^_^;)" What? Are you trying to kill your readers by laughter? XDD No... Seriously.. Your writing is the funniest! Now I have really bad looking teethmarks in my arm, because I had to bite it so hard to prevent me from totally cracking and screaming 'cause I don't want to wake anybody up XD (clock: 3.45 am XD)

This story makes my fangirl mode go full power, every pairing till now has been in my ultimate favorite pairings-list XD (I'm seriously starting to wonder, if this might have some effect on my mental health, I've never giggled, shocked, cracked and fangirlied in one night XDD *has read this till here with no break @_@

But yeah. This is a good way to spend free nights :D Keep it up! I'll definitely catch to the latest chapter tonight (oh... today is alread tomorrow..? XD)

Whoa! Alomst forgetted! Thanks for the japanese lesson this story gives XD I've learned A LOT of new words :D Only thing that bothers me in those, is that you lefted/forgetted the dattebayo away from Naruto. Yeah, and that the japanese words are coming rarer and rarer T_T I thought that they fit really well in this story.

Augh. Long review XD sry

Author's Response: Ahaha, I'm glad if this story can make you laugh *coughs* a LOT. Well, I'm just trying to do experiment with lots of pairings though it's still focused on Naru/Sasu. Well, i didn't forget, it's just too troublesome to write them down, you know. It's too long, believe me. Well, I'm still studying some Japanese words too, and I lost all of them already. Please bear with it, I shall write more Japanese in later chapters. Thanks!


Name: Zelman (Signed) · Date: 16/04/07 - 05:13 pm · For: Meet The Red Head!!
KYAAAAAA!!!! *is a gaanaru fan* Haha...
OMG... That was totally unexpectable

XD This story is so good *jumps around* Especially the fact that you left Haku and Zabusa alive!! There's just enough tension, little more, and I'd explode XD

But there's never enough yaoi. I don't mean just in this story, but everywhere ;D Enough and yaoi don't fit in the same sentence, there should be always more XD (except after major bloodloss from nosebleeding XDD)

But don't worry about non-yaoiness, your great storyline and writing style covers it perfectly ^_^

Gah... I'm always irritated, because you can choose only from liked or disliked it or none -.- WHERE IS THE LOVED IT??? XDDD o_Ox

Author's Response: Ahahaha, I think you'll explode soon! That's really nice! Oh, thanks for the review. Well, I shall say that I am pretty embarrassed to write this kind of story, you know...because some of my friends read it too and CRAP!! They told me to stop writing right away. Of course i will not give in. I love it anyway...*grins*


Name: zakkarian (Signed) · Date: 14/04/07 - 01:49 am · For: A Week Without Naruto
i was busy, and i didn't want to finish the story yet, so i was thinking of how to make it longer. so i was thinking of making naruto go back in time, like your story....so yeah....but he's gonna use a jutsu to go back. ^_^

Author's Response: Go ahead and use it. i don't mind anyway. Please to do so! Good luck with your story!!


Name: Keyblade222 (Signed) · Date: 13/04/07 - 05:52 pm · For: A Week Without Naruto
now please dont reply I MEAN IT!!!!!Ive waited t and a half weeks or maybe more just to read a chapter that took so long,jeez its going to take me a long time to feel i like this storie again.


Name: zakkarian (Signed) · Date: 12/04/07 - 11:51 pm · For: A Week Without Naruto
....:) i really like your story. i was thinking of using your concept of going back into the past....may i?

Author's Response: Well, it's ok of course. BTW, what happen to your last project? Have you updated it?


Name: Satoyuki (Signed) · Date: 12/04/07 - 09:43 pm · For: A Week Without Naruto
Now we know what happens when Sauske and Naruto are apart. I feel bad for the poor kid. But, it is very funny.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Sorry for making you wait for so long!! I promise to update soon! Now gotta go in very serious mode because the story will storm over my brain!!


Name: creshiell (Signed) · Date: 12/04/07 - 03:08 pm · For: A Week Without Naruto
honestly... i figured haku would've snapped sooner. loved it. please pretty pretty please update sooner than in a week.

Author's Response: I will try. Of course I have to mess around a bit with Yun-chan because he's such a bastard after leaving alone with our project. Please be patient, k? Thanks for the review.


Name: Hana (Signed) · Date: 12/04/07 - 03:23 am · For: A Week Without Naruto
oh yes it's funny, i loved NejiSasu part:p

Author's Response: Thanks, it's just the idea suddenly came up and I thought it will be funny that way.


Name: Hana (Signed) · Date: 17/03/07 - 03:41 am · For: Tsunade's Decision
I really really really like this story!!!! the plot is excellent, damn it took me hours and hours!!! loved it!! XD plz continue^^

Author's Response: Ok, I will update it soon so don't worry. Oh yeah, thanks for the review! I really appreciate it!!


Name: keyblade222 (Anonymous) · Date: 11/03/07 - 02:14 pm · For: Tsunade's Decision
this chapter is good but i barfed because to much emostion and drama no offence

Author's Response: Oh MY...you thinks so? But I jave lost all the enemy like Orochimaru and Itachi. The enemy now is the leader and another Akatsukis and I have plans for them already. But thank you for your review! I'll take a note to make some actions more! Love you!!


Name: sora743 (Signed) · Date: 04/03/07 - 06:17 pm · For: Parting!? A Journey to Find Tsunade Begin!
EVIL!Criminal mastermind level, very good, something the fowl's would be proud of...

Author's Response: Ahahaha! Thank you! I'm evil yaoi fan girl after all! I will like to be evil to produce good stories! Please read and reviw the next chapter as well!


Name: sora743 (Signed) · Date: 04/03/07 - 06:17 pm · For: Parting!? A Journey to Find Tsunade Begin!
EVIL!Criminal mastermind level, very good, something the fowl's would be proud of...


Name: creshiell (Signed) · Date: 03/03/07 - 11:10 am · For: Parting!? A Journey to Find Tsunade Begin!
This account is shared so count this as two reveiws.
_GAY GUY OF THE ACCOUNT_ this story is good. Be sure to update soon.
_YAOI LOVING GIRL OF THE ACCOUNT_ OMGOMGOMGOMGOMFG! You nearly made me crap myself! TWICE! i almost thought it was really NARUTO calling him jiraya-SAMA. And i almost thought there was going to be uchihacest -not that its a bad thing as long as itachi isnt evil-. god this fic is so great. i cant predict what will happen next! KYAAAAAAAAA! *passes out but lands on button to submit review*

Author's Response: Ahahaha, too excited aren't we? Thank you for the review. Wow, it actually work for someone! I kind of proud for myself *grins* thanks! Really thanks! I'll do my best to update soon!


Name: zakkarian (Signed) · Date: 02/03/07 - 11:31 pm · For: Parting!? A Journey to Find Tsunade Begin!
O_O...i just realised, most of my reviews have lots of !!!! marks....oh well, it shows my liking of your great storys!!!!....!!!!! lol

Author's Response: Never mind...I love your reviews! Please review me mooore!!


Name: zakkarian (Signed) · Date: 02/03/07 - 11:28 pm · For: Parting!? A Journey to Find Tsunade Begin!
AHHHH!!!! that is so evil!!!! what's happening to naruto!!!! a cliffhanger!!!!....any way, i love you and your storys ^_^

Author's Response: Ok, I'm so soooorry for the cliffy. But it make you curious, right? *grins* I'll do my best to update soon after this!


Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 02/03/07 - 10:49 pm · For: Parting!? A Journey to Find Tsunade Begin!
You really have a way with words. Love the plot, love the flow of the story. The cliff hangers kinda suck :P but i can deal with it. Cant wait to see what happens next! YOU ROCK!!
P.S. Couldn't thinks of a name so all "Anonymous" have been from me so far and i will try to read and review to every chapter. :)

Author's Response: Ahaha, sorry for the cliffy. But I love it when you're reviewing all my stories. Thanks a lot! Oh yeah, why don't you make account in this site and be a beta reader too? It's handy if you want to contact everyone here *grins* Register and be my friends in Tonfa!!


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