Reviews For Last Complaint
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 16/08/07 - 08:44 pm · For: Chapter 1
If I could say something I would, but I'm speechless. :'(
I have a poem that's partly a tribute to Asuma. It's called A Toast. Check it out if you like.
Brilliant work. But so sad...
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-- DancerOfShadows : Once I finish up my homework (I'm procrastinating enough as it is! ^^) I'll be sure to take a look at it. I'm glad you liked it, despite that it's sad. I don't know why, but I seem to be able to write sad/dark fics better than humerous ones... I'll have to work on fixing that. Thank you for the review.
Name: Archaic Aphorism (Signed) · Date: 24/07/07 - 05:09 pm · For: Chapter 1
Wow, that was good.
Admittedly, this is the first time I've ever bothered to read your stuff. Not because I didn't think it would be good, but because it hadn't occurred to me that, since you were on the forums, that maybe you were also an author here.
[rolls eyes and hits head on desk]
I'm a genius. And I say that with all sarcasm possible.
Anyways, this was good! I usually avoide the chapter 328 stuff because... I don't know why. Just do. I'm glad I looked at yours, though.
It's really good. And, seeing as you take college-level english classes... your grammar, spelling, and punctuation are years above whatever mine are, so I caught no mistakes.
Props!
-Archaic
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-- DancerOfShadows : Thanks a bunch! =) And don't worry...I've done that too. "Oh, you also have an author account? My bad..." Haha, oh well. As for the secret behind correctly spelled words: automatic spell-check for every written thing on my computer. It works on the forums and stuff as well, not just in my word program, which is really handy. Spelling isn't my super-strong point.