Reviews For Into the Desert
Name: Odama_Sphere (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 - 06:01 pm · For: Memories
Excellent Story. I hope you continue it. It's too good not too.
Name: Odama_Sphere (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 - 05:58 pm · For: Memories
Excellent Story. I hope you continue it. It's too good not too.
Name: Odama_Sphere (Signed) · Date: 25/06/07 - 03:51 pm · For: Suprises
I most say I really Like your portrayal of Sakura in this story and the last one a lot. Great writing.
Name: HinaNaruforever (Anonymous) · Date: 21/06/07 - 07:01 pm · For: Suprises
Hello im new here but i think you are the best writer in the world! ^_^ please i beg you please finish chapter 5 i come and look everyday to see if you posted it yet!
Thanks from your #1 fan! ^_^
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 13/06/07 - 06:45 pm · For: Suprises
your killing me if you dont update soon people will think your dead and i also wont be your reviewer anymore
p.s. i used to look up to you for inspiration but i can no longer find it
p.s.s. your lasier than shikamaru but you share his iq if not higher
p.s.s.s. youd better write or else...mwhahahaha...i mean it
Name: Redrum (Signed) · Date: 07/06/07 - 08:31 pm · For: Suprises
You're killing me here. Plz update soon. T_T
Name: Epicweaver (Anonymous) · Date: 21/05/07 - 12:16 pm · For: Strangers
I really enjoyed how you built the scene between Neji and Hiashi. I find it hard to really imagine how Hiashi could ever come to accept a relationship between Naruto/Hinata... and I think you really offered enough in his own head to at least give things a chance... Good job!
I look forward to your updates! ;)
Name: Redrum (Signed) · Date: 07/05/07 - 04:54 pm · For: Suprises
You make me cry. It's been so long since I've read a new chapter of yours. Please update soon!
Name: ohyeah (Signed) · Date: 06/05/07 - 06:31 pm · For: Strangers
one of my favorite chapters and please write chapter 5 and hope verything is ok since youhavnt wrote in a while.
Name: shadow_dagger (Signed) · Date: 02/05/07 - 09:25 pm · For: Memories
oh so so cool....I so want to know who she was left with when Naruto first found her and she needed to heal. And cannot wait to see what Kiba and Shino's reactions are.
Name: hinata_is_awsome (Signed) · Date: 25/04/07 - 07:57 pm · For: Memories
Hi im new but i LOVE your stories I have an idea of in the future before hinata gets married to naruto( come on its predictablable that they are going to get married )that they find out that Hinata is pregnant. Well good job so far i would love to hear more
Name: Water Uzimaki (Signed) · Date: 06/04/07 - 12:02 am · For: Suprises
Good opening to the story
Name: Redrum (Signed) · Date: 24/03/07 - 07:07 pm · For: Suprises
You are a master of suspence. Plz update soon.
Name: Gabriela (Anonymous) · Date: 21/03/07 - 01:03 pm · For: Suprises
please!!! update!!!
we need more..
when you will bring us the end?
the story it's terrific..
Name: silver (Signed) · Date: 19/03/07 - 04:27 am · For: Suprises
PLEASE UPDATE! IVE BEEN WAITING FOR SOOOO LONG@
Name: Modoken (Signed) · Date: 15/03/07 - 02:17 pm · For: Memories
Need more, when will it be continued
Name: katie (Anonymous) · Date: 12/03/07 - 10:41 am · For: Suprises
omg! that is so brill! gimme more! more!
Name: katie (Anonymous) · Date: 12/03/07 - 10:41 am · For: Suprises
omg! that is so brill! gimme more! more!
Name: Nitro (Signed) · Date: 09/03/07 - 09:36 am · For: Suprises
why do you do this to me...i thougth you loved me...us...so please..UPDATE!! i'm gonna loose my mind. thank you!
Name: Narrator (Anonymous) · Date: 04/03/07 - 07:53 pm · For: Suprises
I think it's an excellent story, but there is one thing particularly which bugs me. You tend to misuse "to." Such as in chapter 4
"His host was getting to morbid, and it was beginning..."
When you mean 'also' or 'exceedingly,' you're supposed to sue "too."
"His host was getting too morbid, and it was beginning..."
It dosen't happen all of the time, but when it happens, it really bugs me.
Please keep writing! It's such a great story.
Name: J. Smith (Anonymous) · Date: 04/03/07 - 12:37 am · For: Suprises
Hey teaser please update.
Name: BlackRose (Anonymous) · Date: 01/03/07 - 05:59 pm · For: Memories
-gasp- This is all I can read so far? Hopefully you get another chapter up...and soon!!
Name: Cum Girl (Signed) · Date: 01/03/07 - 03:08 pm · For: Suprises
Fucking animals rulz soooo hard!!!!!!
Name: thatguy (Anonymous) · Date: 27/02/07 - 08:19 am · For: Memories
Come on, I need a update! Please? Your doing a great job, just update more.
Name: almightyalchemist (Anonymous) · Date: 27/02/07 - 05:23 am · For: Memories
oo i want to that tooo