Reviews For Like the Clouds, Like the Wind
Name: SincereGlomp (Signed) · Date: 10/04/11 - 07:38 pm · For: Kakashi's Test
No chapter 3? Tears.
Name: SincereGlomp (Signed) · Date: 11/03/11 - 11:33 am · For: Kakashi's Test
k, so once again: girl doesn't randomly have everything in common with naruto. She's not a suck up. And once again: You don't treat the readers like we're idiots!! Ahh. bliss. A noob like me sometimes doesn't know all the refrences to saying in japanese, but the way you use them it's easy for readers to peice it together.
And holly crap. She surprised me after the fight. wow, so, sweet/nice and kick ass too? I love this character!!
How you inrtoduced the sound ninja as well... wow. All I can say.
Will there be a chapter 3?
Name: SincereGlomp (Signed) · Date: 11/03/11 - 11:18 am · For: "Next time, ask..."
Wow. I love how you don't say 'she was a good fighter'. You SHOW us. You show the reader, instead of telling them what to think. I love the exaggerations on the characters. It makes the read far more enjoyable to have beyond the norm emotions in the characters, and exaggerating it like you did adds depth. I'm normally annoyed by stories that only focus on one aspect of a character, but, take Naruto for example: you captured his easy excitement and want for friends perfectly. This was a great read. Wow, can't wait to read chapter two.
Name: Wolfenhawk (Signed) · Date: 24/05/07 - 10:46 am · For: Kakashi's Test
Wow that was unexpected. :)