Reviews For Ridding Me of You
Name: brock (Anonymous) · Date: 09/01/08 - 01:14 pm · For: Chapter 16: A Day for Lovers
Boyarina! *echoes* Hellllooooo? when is another post coming? hellllloooooo??
Name: Nightmare (Signed) · Date: 18/11/07 - 04:30 am · For: Chapter 20: Should Have Been a Simple Weekend
Write moar!
Name: SakuraChanFan (Signed) · Date: 02/09/07 - 02:32 pm · For: Chapter 20: Should Have Been a Simple Weekend
Finally finished. I have to say, very very very very very very cool! I love it, and I cant wait for the next chapter! So hurry, neh?(*wink**smile*) Just kidding! But seriously I want to read more! Anyway, as for "constructive criticism" I can only say this. Sometimes, I notice that your grammar is a bit messed, or you say things like "now that he was standing in the gound", or "Kakashi stopped and eyes his team" it should be something like, "now that he was standing on the ground", or "Kakshi stopped, eyeing his team" But I don't know if its jut a mistake or what, so don't hate me! I am not trying to flame. Just giving friendly advice from one writer to another. Well, I really enjoyed the story, and I look forward to more! Also, if you need any help with anything, have any stories you want me to read, or anything like that, I am always around so dont be a stranger!
Name: HochiminShii (Signed) · Date: 24/05/07 - 03:15 am · For: Chapter 1: Screaming into the Darkness
i love this fic please update soon i hope you actualy finish this awsome thing and dont just give up on it that would only be too cruel ^_^
Name: almightyalchemist (Anonymous) · Date: 27/02/07 - 08:42 pm · For: Chapter 17: Sasuke and Hinata
this is a very good fic. plz post the next ch. soon plz
Name: takahiro8 (Signed) · Date: 27/02/07 - 06:42 pm · For: Chapter 17: Sasuke and Hinata
i love you and hate you. hinata is hot,and it ment for naryto or kiba, not saucegay,he DIEs( or atleast i hope he does) anyway the stroy is good, your lemon could you some work.
Name: Nightmare (Signed) · Date: 27/02/07 - 04:05 pm · For: Chapter 17: Sasuke and Hinata
“It’s called getting entranced by the captivating view.” That is just awsome and funny!
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 23/02/07 - 05:21 pm · For: Chapter 10: Don’t go chasing a naked Naruto
oh goooooooooooood
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 23/02/07 - 05:19 pm · For: Chapter 9: The Naked Truth
hehehehehehehehehehehehehe
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 23/02/07 - 04:58 pm · For: Chapter 1: Screaming into the Darkness
i realy like the first ch great so far from gubgub