Reviews For Losing Naruto
Name: kingofswitch (Signed) · Date: 29/08/07 - 07:23 pm · For: Observations
i agree wit sorca5 that your story is gd bt tbh i fuckin hate narusaku n i hope it ends naruhina even though it wont
Name: Sorca5 (Signed) · Date: 16/07/07 - 01:22 pm · For: Asking for help
I know you want people to help you come up with a good ending, but I really don't know what to tell you. I want NaruXHina, but it seems like you want NaruXSaku, and as much as I would love the blonde and the blusher together, it's probably not the best thing for this story. You should have Naruto convince Sakura to stay and have it involve hugs and *shudders* kisses. I normally don't like NaruXSaku stories, but I found yours to be quite captivating! Good luck finding an ending! :-)
Name: Sorca5 (Signed) · Date: 16/07/07 - 12:50 pm · For: The Party - Part III
This is so cool, but I wonder who he ends up with? personally, I hope it's Hinata. But it is your choice. Great story. :-)
Name: Sorca5 (Signed) · Date: 16/07/07 - 12:30 pm · For: The Party - Part II
Oh Noooo! Hinata discovered....hey, where they....? Oh no, I hope Hinata won't be hurt! But it seems impossible to stop that. You're the author, so I hope you come up with an ending that will leave everyone happy. By the way, I'm a NaruXHina fan, so....yeah. :-)
Name: Sorca5 (Signed) · Date: 16/07/07 - 12:12 pm · For: The Party - Part I
WHAT!? man, this story is really getting interesting! I hope it ends on a high note :-)
Name: Sorca5 (Signed) · Date: 16/07/07 - 11:29 am · For: Confidence, Hyuuga.
Cool. Please keep writing. I'm only on chapter 10, but I'm catching up fast. I love this story! :-)
Name: Sorca5 (Signed) · Date: 16/07/07 - 10:57 am · For: Hinata's reasons
this is so cool. I'm totally hooked on this story. It sure doesn't take you long t update! :-)
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 - 03:58 am · For: Asking for help
Oh hell- I should quit wasting my breath. I doubt you're even in the mind to finish this story right now. Why do all the stories I like end up being left unfinished? I mean, it stresses me out. I should ask the authors to let me finish the stories. I do hope you're still working on this. You had such a good thing going.
Name: Swords_and_Bandages (Signed) · Date: 08/07/07 - 03:53 am · For: Asking for help
TWNJ is right. I don't think a lot of people are going to be happy with an ending that leaves anyone sad. Sure, I might be a big supporter on NaruHina, but the way this story is going, if it didn't end up NaruSaku, the world will be upside down. Seriously, with good development, any relationship is possible- I even read a NaruIno story by Northridge, and d*** was it good (sadly the guy isn't writing it anymore- I sorely hope your story won't end up like his, left off and abandoned). You got enough material right now to have Naruto go after Sakura at the last second, and makes her change her mind, and they'd end up happy. The problem might be with Hinata- I mean, if anyone saw her unhappy, they'd cry their eyes out. You can have KibaHina, and that can work out fine. You can have Hinata feeling really down that it's affecting everything in her life, and Kiba trying to get her to snap out of it, and they start dating near the end or something. (But, with the direction you already took in developing Hinata's character in this story, that is going to be hard- why don't you make this into a series, and write a sequel where Kiba and Hinata get together?) Doing my best to help. Can't wait for a happy ending for everyone.
Name: Epicweaver (Anonymous) · Date: 22/05/07 - 08:31 am · For: Confidence, Hyuuga.
I really don't like your portrayal of Hinata... Her character in your writing feels so undeveloped... This story just needs more depth of character to Hinata if you want your readers to have any chance of believability to him actually ending up with her in the end...
Hinata is exaggerated to the extreme... and it's not exactly flattering towards her without giving her some text in thought.
This feels like a NaruSaku story... and Hinata just feels like the point of contention. If that's what it's going to be about, that's just great... but as is, Hinata just feels like she's not getting the development that her character deserves.
Sorry, bit of a NaruHina fan and I just don't like the way she's being portrayed.
I like how you've described Sakura's inner conflict, and I do think Hinata is a great catalyst to spur Sakura into action... but without fleshing Hinata out more, your readers are going to makeup their minds early about the ending (NaruSaku) or they're going to be upset if he ends up with Hinata (NaruHina).
I could totally be wrong, but thus far, that's just how it reads to me.
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 22/02/07 - 08:55 pm · For: Feelings
realy sad near the end i realy havnt liked stories like this but this fic is awsome great job from gubgub
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 22/02/07 - 08:26 pm · For: Inner conflicts
the plot is coming a bit late but its a long story so thats ok nice fic so far