Well there was a bit of tense jumping here and there, but overall this was a good introduction to the story. I like Riku in the sense she has a kind of Naruto esk kind of thing going. That aside I think it's interesting that she's only trained in genjutsu, since it's one of the complicated to learn and master.

It should be fun to read through and see how her training goes. I'd figure it'll be a bit easier for her considering her Chakra control :)

Exciting!