Reviews For Misplaced Timing
Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 20/03/14 - 04:55 am · For: Chapter 4: Weariness and revelations.
Well! It's still living up to my expectations! Very intricate, I have to say. I'm liking it :) although I'm a little confused, it said henged into his 16 year old self? Does that mean that now he's back in his child body? Thanks :)
Author's Response: Glad you're still enjoying the rewrite! Naruto is indeed still/back in his child body, the henge only lasted a bit in preparation to give him a more combat-ready form. He's going to realize the drawbacks of fighting like a 16 year old jinchuriki in an 8 year old's inexperienced body soon enough. Also, this is the last chapter I've completed out of the original 25 so far. It'll be a while before I've gone over the next few and have them ready to upload, so I'm sorry to say you'll have to wait to see where things go from here.
Name: seven to the seventh (Signed) · Date: 19/03/14 - 06:36 pm · For: Chapter 1: Convincing the Hokage
very good. an interesting premise, and I can't wait to see where you go with it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy the next few chapters I just uploaded.
Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 18/03/14 - 09:40 pm · For: Chapter 1: Convincing the Hokage
Wow this looks cool :) well-written, good grammatically and spelling-wise. I'm really into it! Can't wait to read more! Thanks for posting :)
Author's Response: I appreciate it! I haven't heard much regarding these early chapters since I began the revisions, so I'm hoping the next few are just as good in your opinion :)