TONFA
The Original Naruto Fanfic Archive

Main Categories

Het Romance [1096]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around different sex couples.
Alternate Universe & Crossovers [648]
Where cast of the Naruto Universe are inserted into an alternate universe.
Essays & Tutorials [18]
An area to submit intelligent essays debating topics about the Naruto Universe and writing tutorial submissions.
 
General Fiction [1743]
Any Naruto fanfiction focused without romantic orientation, on a canon character in the current Naruto Universe.
OC-centric [867]
Any Naruto fanfic that has the major inclusion of a fan-made character.
Non-Naruto Fiction [292]
Self-evident
 
Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance [1574]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around male same sex couples.
MadFic [201]
Any fic with no real plot and humor based. Doesn't require correct spelling, paragraphing or punctuation but it's a very good idea.
 
Shojo-ai/Yuri Romance [106]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around female same sex couples.
Fan Ninja Bingo Book [125]
An area to store fanfic information, such as bios, maps, political histories. No stories.
Juvi-Fics [2]
Because no fic is deleted, if a fic doesn't abide by the rules of the category or author doesn't respond to mods, it belongs here.
 
 

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Stories: 5905
Chapters: 25597
Word count: 47829306
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Name: Purple Dinosaur (Signed) · Date: 03/07/13 - 10:37 pm · For: Chapter 1
Where to begin? Well, before I tell you anything, I'm sorry if I seem like a bitch. Well you have a lot of run on sentences, you don't seem to always use a set of quotation marks, hm...I know you said there was going to be OOC, but I don't think Naruto would be that happy to have a person who just killed a bunch of people come up to him. Naruto should at least be a little more scared. I can tell by your writing that you're a new writer, but I see potential. You just have to fix the grammar mistakes and your set. I'll follow this story to see how you progress as a writer.

Author's Response: Thanks for the Review! I haven't written much before so i will take your pointers to heart :D. Also about the Naruto thing, yea I completely understand lol, I need to write more action and reaction type stuff. PS. Everyone always say i have potential for writing so thanks for saying so XD and Thanks again for the advice :) Have a nice day!


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