Reviews For Divine Intervention
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/03/13 - 05:29 pm · For: The Reappearance
I actually really liked this. This was really well-written, and you did really well with showing your character and her personality just within the first chapter. I also liked how you wrote the first part with her realizing that Naruto was gone and then beginning the second part with her seeing him again. I thought that was really sad but then transitioned into real cute :) Overall, this was a really good intro to your story and I definitely want to read more to see how it all goes. Nice job on this, keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review! I wrote this chapter four times before I was satisfied, and even then I was still terrified to do it. But hearing that you enjoyed it makes it worth it! Next chapter should be up soon!