TONFA
The Original Naruto Fanfic Archive

Main Categories

Het Romance [1096]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around different sex couples.
Alternate Universe & Crossovers [648]
Where cast of the Naruto Universe are inserted into an alternate universe.
Essays & Tutorials [18]
An area to submit intelligent essays debating topics about the Naruto Universe and writing tutorial submissions.
 
General Fiction [1743]
Any Naruto fanfiction focused without romantic orientation, on a canon character in the current Naruto Universe.
OC-centric [867]
Any Naruto fanfic that has the major inclusion of a fan-made character.
Non-Naruto Fiction [292]
Self-evident
 
Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance [1574]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around male same sex couples.
MadFic [201]
Any fic with no real plot and humor based. Doesn't require correct spelling, paragraphing or punctuation but it's a very good idea.
 
Shojo-ai/Yuri Romance [106]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around female same sex couples.
Fan Ninja Bingo Book [125]
An area to store fanfic information, such as bios, maps, political histories. No stories.
Juvi-Fics [2]
Because no fic is deleted, if a fic doesn't abide by the rules of the category or author doesn't respond to mods, it belongs here.
 
 

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Reviews For Dear Untitled,

Name: baxter54132 (Signed) · Date: 23/04/12 - 08:43 pm · For: Chapter 1
Yeah Out Of Character haha.... It was good that you warned, would have been better if you had edited instead :P

Author's Response: I wrote it on 2007, what did you expect? ;)


Name: Rowanrose (Signed) · Date: 23/04/12 - 07:12 pm · For: Chapter 1
Haha, that was a nice idea! I liked the idea, but Neji was a bit OOC. Also, the POV shifts were confusing; maybe all those many shifts were too much? I think the style itself was third person all knowing, so perhaps the POV shifts weren't needed. One last thing - the convo between Neji and Inner Neji was slightly confusing. I think you've got dialogue down pretty well, but your scenes are kind of awkward and don't flow well; perhaps rewriting would help? Also, it helps to read your chapters aloud; you notice things more easily.
Good luck! Nice to meet you! ^^


Name: Silvercatninja13 (Signed) · Date: 23/04/12 - 04:12 pm · For: Chapter 1
I liked it! Good job!


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