Reviews For A Legacy in the Dust
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 19/08/12 - 10:49 pm · For: Omen
Awesome update man! I like the sudden attack and it seem everyone is under very bog stress. Keep the updates coming, but don't forget to update Relapse into Illusion soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm almost done with the story too! Don't worry I'll update it, I just wanted to give people about a week or so. Thanks for the review.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/08/12 - 06:39 pm · For: Impatience
I can't believe Sasuke left again. Seriously, you would think he would learn by now. And he took Zuzake with him. Now they're both rogue ninja. And Natsuro is going to the village to fight them. This just got so complicated...
Nice update, Shizake-san. Keep up the good work!
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 18/08/12 - 05:48 pm · For: Character submissions!
Sasuke and Zazuke are on the move, and all the tension is building, especially with the Aku on the move. Keep it coming man!
Author's Response: Shit is building up for sure. Thanks for the review.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/08/12 - 09:15 am · For: Perseverance
What an eventful chapter! I'm glad that Zuzake was able to accomplish his task, now he has a summoning contract with some amazing dragons :D
Oh my... romance... Didn't see it coming O_O Kinda thought it would be Hitomi and Zuzake, guess you proved me wrong. It's so adorable this way anyway though :3
Yay, Zuzake has Zatsuno now! Nice.
Great work on this chapter, Shizake-san. Keep up the good work! And sorry for such a late review -_-
Author's Response: Lots of things going on here lol. Haha I decided to just throw it in. Thanks for the review :) and don't worry about it being late, I understand.
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 24/07/12 - 01:17 pm · For: Perseverance
What the heck? The first two members to die are mine?!? What do you have against them? If you kill Ryoushi next, I am going to get Kataki and Kintaro and hunt you down!
Haha. Just joking. But I was a little sad to see Yoku go. Bye-bye, Yoku. Just a quick thing - during one of the times Sasuke and Zuzake attacked, you put Kuzake and I almost cried. Poor Shizake and Kyzake are dead T_T.
Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter. I especially liked the fight scene with Isago and Hitomi. Hehe. She kissed him XD. I must say, I didn't see it coming, but that scene was so cute. Sheesh, I feel like such a girl saying that....... Yes, I know, I am one. Shut up, Itoko-san! XD.
This was an awesome chapter. So Zuzake is now the host of Zatsuno. Let the fun begin.
Author's Response: Haha sorry. I didn't realize they were both yours. Hazard made his characters more importantly ranked in Aku :P Oh so I did put Kuzake...I'm sorry I hope you didn't cry. Idk why I decided to put that bit of romance in there but I wanted to give Isago an epic moment. Haha :P I'm glad you liked it. Things are definitely on a roll now :D Thanks for the review.
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 23/07/12 - 01:29 pm · For: Perseverance
Freakin awesome man. I can forgive you for the romance, it was well placed and heart felt I'll give you that. Looks like the Aku is losing members to the heroes...wonder whats next.
Author's Response: Phew. Glad you could forgive me. I wanted to give Isago that epic moment coz I feel like I've kinda skipped out on him as a character. Yup they are. Which means the end is drawing near! Thanks for the reivew
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/07/12 - 07:42 am · For: A Legacy's Strength
First off, you are evil. Just absolutely evil. I mean, how can you just leave us with that T_T? But it was an amazing chapter. I really enjoyed it. I was afraid something bad would happen when Shezji and Ashira fought, but all is well. And now Zuzake must start his journey. I wanna know more!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked :D I know I'm evil ;) Everything is going to just sprawl from here on out. Oh and thanks for being my 70th reviewer! I've never had this many reviews before even though some of the first ones were character submissions lol.
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 15/07/12 - 10:09 pm · For: Character submissions!
Great update, lots of things going on and I love to see how the heroes and Aku are both on the move. Keep it up!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/07/12 - 02:03 pm · For: A Legacy's Strength
Holy crap, Zuzake has to get to a mountain and back before sunrise? That's a terrible cliffhanger! You're so mean, Nii-san! I really hope he's able to do it...
Aku is on the move? Again?! Well I hope our heroes will be alright...
Such suspense, I'm eager to learn more. Keep up the good work!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 14/07/12 - 07:03 am · For: It begins
Well, looks like Taizen was the first to go. Bye-bye, Taizen. Tsubasa really misses you already.
Just joking. This was an awesome chapter with action just as awesome. I laughed when I saw the name Hajime, though, because it's the word that is used in Karate to start a fight. I just found it funny. And, again, this was an awesome fight, and I'm glad everyone is okay.
The end with the Uchiha moment was really great. I loved it. It really was heart warming to see the family love. And it's still really fun to see Sasaui added in. I'm so glad she can be there for Zuzake!
Great chapter, Itoko-san. I really loved it.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/07/12 - 07:08 pm · For: It begins
This was definitely a chapter you should be proud of! This had such an epic battle, I was enjoying the intensity in it. And then for that to transition into such a sweet moment with the Uchihas, I was really loving it.
I think the dialogue was my favorite part of this though. During the fight, all the intense emotion behind it (like the hostility) was really well written. And then the family togetherness and worry for one another was great as well.
Overall, an excellent chapter. I really liked the whole thing. Well done, Nii-san!
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 09/07/12 - 10:05 pm · For: It begins
Awesome man! You should be proud of this, it was long and didn't have a dull moment whatsoever. Lovin' it, and update again soon!
Author's Response: Thanks man glad you enjoyed. I'll be updating again soon enough. Thanks for the review.
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 26/06/12 - 03:28 pm · For: Character submissions!
About time you posted another chapter! I was starting to think you forgot about this story...anyways it looks great and have fun in Florida!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm back in Texas now!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/06/12 - 01:47 pm · For: Moving On
Ironic seeing as I believe I'm heading down to Flordia next week to go to Universal. Don't worry, Itoko-san, about us missing you. Just have fun!
I liked the time skip simply because of how grown up they've all become. It feels like just a chapter ago they were about 13 *sigh*. Anyway, awesome chapter. So Zuzake is going to learn the Reapers Blade, huh? And the Aku are being hunted down? This is gonna be interesting.
Author's Response: Haha they were 13 just a chapter ago :P Things are definitely going to get interesting. Thanks for the review :D
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 26/06/12 - 01:26 pm · For: Moving On
Whoa, time skip... That was awesome to see how well everyone is doing. And the hunt for Aku has officially begun huh? Cool, those punks need to go away haha.
Things are really picking up now, and it's getting really exciting! Can't wait for more! Keep up the good work!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/06/12 - 06:26 am · For: Recollection
The first part made me very sad. I really miss Shizake! It's still hard to believe hd died even while reading this story.
And then I was happy again reading their meeting. It was so sweet! I am so glad that Zuzake has met his family! And I can't wait to see this team Sasuke is forming. This is going to be fun.
Then, of course, you had that part with Aku in it, making me worry about Zuzake. You other people had better protect him or else!!!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/06/12 - 06:16 am · For: Familiar Faces
Sasaui is back! And she's been reunited with Sasuke. I'm so glad. Though I think I saw you refer to them as cousins..... I think. Or was that last chapter? Darn it! I can't remember. I just remember seeing it. And I like all the kids. It's sad, though, the Nitachi is dead. Now both of the duo are dead. At least they were reunited. And now I can't wait for Zuzake to meet Sasaui.
I enjoyed the combat scenes in this. Aku is on the move again it seems. That is interesting. I wonder what they gain killing those people. Hm...... Oh well. And Taizen has appeared! Cool XD.
Great chapter, Itoko-san. I absolutely love it.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/06/12 - 05:58 pm · For: Recollection
Aww~ It's all so sweet. I'm really happy that Zuzake has a family now. He's found a family in his teammates and an actual blood family and people who knew his father and grandfather and... yeah, it's just all so sweet :D
Nice job on such a heartwarming chapter, Nii-san! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: glad you liked it :D They're all there for him. Thanks for the review :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 12/06/12 - 12:53 pm · For: Familiar Faces
Yay! Sasaui is back! And she has such a big family now too, haha. I feel bad that Nitachi is dead though... that's so sad... T_T
And the Aku returns! Oh my gosh, this is getting so intense. Old characters returning, new characters trying to destroy the good guys... Things are heating up now. I'm excited for the epicness!
Keep up the good work, Shizake-nii-san!
Author's Response: Yeah :/. But at least his legacy lives on. I figured it was a good time to put in some intense action even if it was short. Thanks for the review :)
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 11/06/12 - 06:56 pm · For: Character submissions!
Badass chapter update man. We got to see Sasaui's whole other family so Zazuke has more relatives, more missions and more Aku are being revealed! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Haha. Thought you would like to see Osore and other Aku members in there. Thanks for the review!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 11/06/12 - 06:38 am · For: The path of the Uchiha
I don't know why, but now I'm thinking of Goten and Goku when it comes to Shizake and Zuzake. What is with your story and making me think of DBZ?
Anyway, this was a great chapter. Little Zuzake is now a real Uchiha. And why is it I have a feeling the fun, happy stuff won't last too much longer -_-
Author's Response: Just wanted to make a good relationship between them :) Welllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll you'll see soon enough ;) Thanks for the review :)
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 07/06/12 - 07:42 pm · For: Character submissions!
Nice! Looks promising, and I can't wait to see what happens when he has to face the Aku.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/06/12 - 09:46 am · For: The path of the Uchiha
Aww! He's officially an Uchiha now! That's exciting! I'm happy for Zuzake. He's slowly learning more and more about his legacy and is becoming a real Uchiha.
Good job, Shizake! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 31/05/12 - 06:42 pm · For: Experience
Well, reading this makes me think of a Tainted Guardian next generation thing I thought of way back. *sigh* I miss the days when I felt like I could write a hundred stories and not feel overloaded.
Okay, sorry, I took a trip down memory lane. Now I feel old. =P.
This was a great installment. I get happier and happier to see that Zuzake has someone there for him. It's definitely going to be a big help for him. He's most definitely gonna need it, especially with Aku. Speaking of which, I have the picture of my character. I'll have to send you the link.
http://sasaui.deviantart.com/art/Taizen-Hinote-Close-Up-304552943?qo=3&catpath=gallery:sasaui:32768348&order=0&offset=3
He has fiery red hair, calm, water blue eyes, and his under shirt is black, his T-shirt is red, and his jeans (though not really seen) are blue.
Name: Hazard (Signed) · Date: 29/05/12 - 02:34 pm · For: Experience
Training has started! Great!