Reviews For After the Ashes
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 14/06/12 - 08:02 pm · For: Episode 28: The Odd Friend
Haha, Anko and Ross would be friends, and drinking would be one of their hobbies XP How nearly predictable.
I hope Zabuza is right in saying things will be alright. Because the story has barely started, things have gotten so much more intense! Gah! I'm really eager to read more! Keep up the good work.
Name: purpledinosaur (Signed) · Date: 10/06/12 - 10:44 am · For: Episode 27: A Cry in the Dark
I think you've come far with this, I really do. Interpono still gives me the creeps and I think it always will. This chapter is really brilliant, and out of curiosity, will you be bringing Lance back into this thing? Or will you have something bad happen to him? I also have a feeling that this 'Witch' is an old crusaider that got away before Interpono could kill her. Again, nice chapter and I wonder where you will go from here.
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 09/06/12 - 12:16 pm · For: Episode 27: A Cry in the Dark
O.O
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/12 - 12:07 pm · For: Episode 27: A Cry in the Dark
O_O Oh jeez... Zabuza is so going to flip when he hears her story. I hope he can handle it.
Meanwhile, I wonder what is going on with Interpono's world. This is getting freaky... But I'm so curious! Gah! I need to know what happens!
I bet this Witch woman has something to do with Interpono's world corrupting... Hmm...
Nice updates today, DDTD! I loved them all!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/12 - 11:48 am · For: Episode 26: Mission Partner
Ooh, Zabuza and Ross on a mission :D Oddly enough, I can think of so many things that can go well and so many things that can go wrong with them on a mission together o_O Oh well, I'm off to read the next one!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/12 - 10:07 am · For: Episode 25: A Night of Confrontation?
Aww, I'm glad Kiba and Ross made up... Kinda. He's still upset, of course, but at least they're still friends. I'm happy about that :D
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 07/06/12 - 11:50 am · For: Episode 24: Team 5
Bwahahaha. Oh please Ross, give that man hell.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/05/12 - 11:07 pm · For: Episode 24: Team 5
That's such a strange assembly to invite the parents to watch their kids walk on a stage just to get a few seconds of praise and critical reviews. Not even a medal for effort or anything.
Choukan and his friends did earn some high praise though. They deserved it. And I hope Kaze gets at least a little respect from her dad, but from the sound of things, there might be some arguing instead...
A couple mistakes in this chapter, mostly spelling. his was still good though. Nice job.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 28/05/12 - 10:58 pm · For: Episode 23: My Little Brother
:3 It's kinda adorable how close everyone is now. I'm really loving all the love going around XD
Good job on this. I'm off to read the next one!
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 28/05/12 - 11:48 am · For: Episode 24: Team 5
oh poor kaze... i hope she is alright
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 28/05/12 - 11:45 am · For: Episode 23: My Little Brother
oh no!! he'll be murderized XP
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 07/05/12 - 12:06 pm · For: Episode 22: The War against Awkward Feelings
:D FREAKING ADORABLE!!!!! LOVED THIS IMMENSELY!!!!!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/05/12 - 07:18 pm · For: Episode 21: Fighting for Pride
Aww! I'm so proud of her! Kaze did so well! She got a flag and stood up to her brother! Good for her! Gah, I'm so happy for her! You go, Kaze!
Great chapter, DDTD! I really liked watching Kaze come out of her shell. This was awesome!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 05/05/12 - 03:14 pm · For: Episode 20: The Battle for Respect
Holy crap... Futoji is in the middle of a fight... Epicness! I really love how you're describing all the characters in this arc. It really adds a lot of depth to this part of the story. I like it do far! Nice job!
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 02/05/12 - 08:18 pm · For: Episode 16: Tsunade's Office
Awe, Ross I love you. Especially when you piss people off....
Still Team Kakashi
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 27/04/12 - 12:18 pm · For: Episode 19: Choukan
Choukan is a born strategist. Such a good lad, he is ;) And the way he trusts in his teammates is really admirable, which I really like about him. Which I like about all three of them, actually. Nice work in this, I'm eager to see this plan put into action.
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 21/04/12 - 01:32 pm · For: Episode 18: Kaze
awwww it was nice to see things from this character's point of view. so, a test for them? dun dun duuun
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 21/04/12 - 10:21 am · For: Episode 18: Kaze
Hmm... Kaze reminds me of Hinata. But she also seems to rely on Futoji and Choukan a lot. Makes me wonder about her confidence in herself? That was the vibe I picked up, that she's dependent on her teammates.
But other than that, I really liked this. Kaze seems very sweet and kind. That's why she reminds me of Hinata :P
Good job on this, DDTD. I'm really looking forward to seeing how this test goes :D
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 17/04/12 - 12:26 pm · For: Episode 17: Futoji
woah, i dont know why, but he reminds me of shikamaru a bit. but i like his character. keep of the great work :p
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 17/04/12 - 10:47 am · For: Episode 17: Futoji
:D I love him. He's hilarious, honest, and just fun. The way he says 'Geez' all the time just makes me laugh. His joking manner really could lighten any mood. This was a very interesting POV to write in, and I'm so glad you have us the chance to get inside his head to see the flashback and his personality. It was great.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 13/04/12 - 08:00 pm · For: Episode 16: Tsunade's Office
Aww! It's totally okay for taking a while to update. The cuteness level of this chapter was just off the charts amazing. I loved it! Zabuza's a softie! Great work on this chapter!
Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 13/04/12 - 07:15 pm · For: Episode 16: Tsunade's Office
she still acts like a little kid. how cute XP we are your slaves when i think about it haha, we wait and wait for another chapter to come and we happily read it with a wagging tial. X)
Name: NakoniKutone (Anonymous) · Date: 03/04/12 - 07:15 am · For: Episode 1: Haku
no prob. sry i havent been on for a bit...stupid internet...but yeah, those ideas woulda pissed off more ppl than ross and lil haku, sooo its not worth it to hav angry reviewers cos u felt like using Zabuza xD but im evil, so i woulda done it (why i dont write fanfics ^^). Oh! and btw, ive started reading your Stereotype story! :D way to go!
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks so much!! Hey, feel free to review as many chapters as you like :D It helps the cause!! What that is exactly, I have no idea, but hey, win a free chibi or something lol Check out my bio for one of those! Anyway, thanks so much for the review, I feel bad that I haven't updated this at all this last week, but I keep coming up with lousy chapter deployments :P Oh well, thanks again!!
Name: RawrTheDinoLycan (Signed) · Date: 02/04/12 - 05:45 pm · For: Episode 15: Kakashi’s warning
.....
I feel like a traitor.
But I am so Team Kakashi. >:D
I feel like this is the calm before the storm.
Name: NakoniKutone (Signed) · Date: 27/03/12 - 01:38 pm · For: Episode 15: Kakashi’s warning
HAHAHHAHAHA ZABUZA HAS COMPETITION?!?!?!!!!!! YOU BEEN GONE TO LONG MY BOY. haha sory not tht funny. But i kinda wanna see Ross end up with Kakashi or Kiba now... anybody else? xD
Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! That's exactly what I was thinking as I wrote this episode!! I'm glad you thought it was funny, and yeah, I laughed too, even though I wrote it so it's much worse for me XD Anyway, I know the feeling about the Kakashi/Kiba thing. Honestly, I was very stuck on the idea of bringing Zabuza back or not, part of me wanted to kill him off and have Interpono use him to try and deceive Ross or something, but I couldn't do that to him! I would have felt to horrible for Ross and Kohaku if I had :x Anyway, thanks for another review!! :D