TONFA
The Original Naruto Fanfic Archive

Main Categories

Het Romance [1096]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around different sex couples.
Alternate Universe & Crossovers [648]
Where cast of the Naruto Universe are inserted into an alternate universe.
Essays & Tutorials [18]
An area to submit intelligent essays debating topics about the Naruto Universe and writing tutorial submissions.
 
General Fiction [1743]
Any Naruto fanfiction focused without romantic orientation, on a canon character in the current Naruto Universe.
OC-centric [867]
Any Naruto fanfic that has the major inclusion of a fan-made character.
Non-Naruto Fiction [292]
Self-evident
 
Shonen-ai/Yaoi Romance [1574]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around male same sex couples.
MadFic [201]
Any fic with no real plot and humor based. Doesn't require correct spelling, paragraphing or punctuation but it's a very good idea.
 
Shojo-ai/Yuri Romance [106]
Any Naruto fanfiction with the main plot orientating around female same sex couples.
Fan Ninja Bingo Book [125]
An area to store fanfic information, such as bios, maps, political histories. No stories.
Juvi-Fics [2]
Because no fic is deleted, if a fic doesn't abide by the rules of the category or author doesn't respond to mods, it belongs here.
 
 

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Series: 261
Stories: 5905
Chapters: 25597
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Reviews For Without A Name

Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 24/10/11 - 05:02 pm · For: Without A Name Conclusion
This... was really good.

I've always wondered what would happen to Sai if Danzo found out about his loyalty to Team 7, and this is definitely how I would want it to happen. This story plot was perfect. It was well thought out, descriptive, and emotional. This was definitely a great story.

The only thing I'd complain about is the tenses (past, present, future), as you seemed to switch between all three. But your amazing story seriously made up for it. This was so original, and I enjoyed every moment of it.

I look forward to reading more stories by you. Keep up the amazing work with your writing!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the feedback. It's very helpful. I'm glad you liked the story.rnrnI started writing in past tense with the dialogue in the present so I tried to keep it like that. I do have a tendency to overly use the past participle which is probably annoying to readers. I'll work on that. Thanks again!!!


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