Reviews For Aftermath: The Last Ones Standing
Name: Tragedy (Signed) · Date: 16/01/12 - 05:35 am · For: Something I Can Never Have
So... As A Loyal Fan Im Upset It Took So Long,. But As A Fellow Author I Understand. And Yes, Im Still With You Here. Anyway, Next Update Soon, No? Gotta Find Out Whats Up With That Hair..
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/01/12 - 08:59 am · For: Something I Can Never Have
Noooooooo! Kakashi, don't die! Please don't!
Geeat description in this chapter. It was hurried and chaotic in a good way since the fight was meant to seem that way in Sai's perspective.
There were more spelling errors than usual, I'm sad to say... Do you have a beta who could fix those errors for you?
Great work on this chapter though! I really enjoyed it. I can't wait to read more, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Glad you like it! I really don't feel too confident writing action-scenes..rnThere were? I did't notice. (I don't have a beta.) I have to admit that I may have been not quite as thourough with the proofreading this tim, the office-spellchecker didn't mark any mistakes though. I did finally switch it to british english - maybe that one is more faulty than that for us-english? I don't know.