Reviews For Aftermath: The Last Ones Standing
Name: Tragedy (Signed) · Date: 19/10/11 - 04:50 pm · For: Army Dreamers
Annoyed When You Used "Good" And Tje Corrext Term Is "Well." -.- Also, I've Been Far Too Busy But I'll Start Writing Again Soon.
As For How I Feel About The Chapter, It Was A Nice Filler, Lol. Great For Insight On Kakashi And A Little As To Why Kakashi Is Kakashi, If That Makes Sense. I For One, Had Never Considered That Pakkun Might Have Been Sakumo's Dog First, So... Yeah. All In All I Liked It. It Would (Have) Made A Nice One Shot As Well.
Author's Response: I do that??? Oh my... well, I guess it has to show from time to time that English is still a foreign language to me. rnI thought about putting it up as a oneshot, but the information this chapter gives is kind of important for things that are yet to come :)
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 18/10/11 - 03:10 pm · For: Army Dreamers
*stars in eyes* That... was beautiful... By far, my favorite chapter so far. It was so thought out, so touching, so sweet, so sad, so simply amazing.
Not much is said about the history of Pakkun and Kakashi, but I am so touched with the way you portrayed it. Definitely believable, and definitely something I hope is true in the actual manga/anime.
Great job, I really really liked this chapter. I loved it. Keep up the awesome work!