Reviews For Aftermath: The Last Ones Standing
Name: Tragedy (Signed) · Date: 02/10/11 - 07:46 pm · For: A Book Like This
Really It Only Took Me To The Third Mention Of War To Know What Was Going On. Still, It Was A Great Chapter To Read And Now I Have Speculations On The Girl And I.. Cant Wait To See If I'm Right.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/10/11 - 11:32 am · For: A Book Like This
*sobs a lot* That's so sad... That's really, really sad! Oh my gosh, it was so romantic and cute in the beginning, when you talked about both of their reactions to one another and everything. You explained it so well, and it came out beautifully; the cute relationship to the tragic ending, it was all so wonderfully written.
I did honestly think this would be the story of the random girl in Kakashi's document, but then I realized this was Rin and Kakashi, and it made me even sadder to hear how their relationship went! So heartbreaking....
Excellent work with this. This chapter came out really well, one of my favorites of this story now :D Keep up the amazing work!