Hmm, I guess you could call it nitpicking, yes. But on the bright side, I really have nothing to nitpick on this chapter.

It was honestly very captivating for me. Kakashi's care for Sakura came across so well, and Sakura's confused feelings were so amazingly portrayed. And in the last scene, where Sakura looks out over the village, she finally comes to realize that she can move on with her life, and I really like how you illustrated her emotions in that scene.

This was an excellent chapter. I was very impressed with how realistic you kept everyone's reactions. Keep up the great work!