First, in response to your response to my review, I'm sorry if I came across as mean. I didn't know English wasn't your first language, though I probably should have picked up on that from the quote thing...

Well, this chapter was a lot better in terms of spelling. There are some instances where it looks like you may have forgotten a word or the order of words was mixed up. But other than that, I think it was an improvement.

I really like where this story is going, I really do. It's not the usual sugarcoated stuff that people write usually. You're writing about real issues that occur after wars, and I appreciate that. This is definitely a story with potential. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: I didn't think you came across as mean. It's just - I myself tend to be quite nitpicking (is that the word you'd use here? I'm not sure...) when it comes to grammar and spelling, so I felt like I should apologise for my lack of ...ehm... linguistic perfection... ^^rnrnAgain, thank you!