Side note, I will never get used to a story under my name (I know it's a round robin, but still) suddenly appearing at the top of the Most Recent page. It's so bizarre :P

Anyways, onto the battle...

Perfection. Your battle was perfect. It was so vivid and so intense, I loved it.

I really like how you revealed some interesting things about Kina. It adds a lot of depth to her character. It was really interesting to see this side of her, as opposed to NTL.

And you did perfectly with Kasumi! Considering this is before either of our stories, and Shippuden for that matter, you did amazingly well with her taunting attitude and fighting style. I probably couldn't have written that battle better myself.

This was amazing. I honestly enjoyed every moment of it. I look forward to the sequel, but I know you have your TG updates that you're working on. Even just leaving this will satisfy me for a while. I loved this battle, and I look forward to whatever you update with next! Keep up the good work with your writing, Sasaui!