Reviews For Universe Disorder!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 04/07/11 - 02:57 pm · For: The Plan To Go To Hyrule!
Great chapter. Great twist with the Chi-chi thing. And Ezra and Fabia? Genius. I love this so far. I'm continually wondering what the action will be like. It's possibly better than the first part of the series (Yeah, I didn't know it was possible either). Good job, Theez. You're purely amazing.
Author's Response: I'm amazing? Thanks! Was the Chi-Chi thing a twist? I thought that it would be normal, except that she was kidnapped. Thank you so much!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/11 - 12:12 pm · For: The Biggest Battle Ever!
Wow! Yeah, that battle was just as epic as I thought! Nice intro to the OCs' powers, they were great! I can't wait for more OC fun, haha!
Wow, Ezra meets Roxas, and he is gonna get a Keyblade. This is getting so much more interesting with each passing chapter. Awesome! Yay, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Yeah, it was awesome, wasn't it? Thanks! Oh yeah, Roxas is awesome, and is the most epic character in Kingdom Hearts.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/11 - 11:01 am · For: The Search! A New Battle Starts Now!
Wow! I just read through all four of your new chapters, and let me just say, they were awesome! Awesome job with everything. So much happened! And now this epic battle is coming up, I'm so excited!
I actually just thought of this, oblivious me completely disregarded this thought. The duels must be a real pain to write sometimes, if not, then difficult. I don't know what you think, but if they are, good job for you for making them so awesome!
I can't believe Shun cheated on Fabia for Haruko. That surprised me; then again, I guess Fabia would have to be with Ezra somehow ;) And then Suki and Fabia were kidnapped... should have seen that one coming, but I didn't...
Poor Ezra losing his mom! Hiashi has such a twisted mind, what is wrong with him?!
Anyways, I can't wait for this battle! Keep up the awesome work! I'm so excited for this!
Author's Response: Thank you! Only the duels that have already been created, like Kagemaru VS Jaden at the final battle are pains to write, that's why I avoid writing them. Yes, Fabia had to end up with Ezra somehow. And finally, yes, poor Ezra, he lost his mom.....................And yes, Epic Battles rule!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 04/07/11 - 09:26 am · For: Join This Story!
This character is based on the main character of the story I'm writing in real life called Never Too Late. And I got the name from the meaning heart, not Rowan Rose's fanfiction. Just wanted to let you know.
Name: Kokoro Yamuro
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Series: KH
Family: Her parents and her little brother, Kyuui
Race: Human
Power Level: Larger than most, but she rarely uses her full power.
Romance: Whoever
Life Story: Her whole life she was abused. The only person who ever cared for her was her younger brother. Even her aunts, uncles, and grandparents hated her. When she was ten, though, she and her brother were kidnapped by two different people. Both of them were trying to prove who was stronger in the art of darkness by training the two pure hearted children. She escaped, though, and now journeys around the worlds to find her brother and to escape the darkness master that is still chasing her.
Appearance: (not mine)
http://www.deviantart.com/download/172603783/Sad_Anime_Girl_by_NoWayOut1914eL.jpg
Join Duel Academy: I guess.
Deck: Light warriors
Weapon: She discovered this while with the darkness master. It's a blade that uses darkness. The more she uses it, the stronger the darkness in her heart gets.
Here's a picture of what it looks like. It doesn't be long to me.
http://t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTkl1LvcGtgNJGQrjSpOppOsNtEgpWoW2Y3LKa-5btPK4PBbzdwzg&t=1
Personality: She's cruel to anyone who isn't her friend because she's afraid to let anyone into her heart. When you do become her friend, though, she'll do everything she can to protect you. She doesn't let people in because she's afraid of love. Every time she thought someone loved her, they ended up hurting her.
Author's Response: Cool! Sounds like Ezra.........A bit. He uses the darkness, but it's a good darkness, not bad. Thanks!
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/11 - 08:26 am · For: Join This Story!
cnt wait to see shadow join da action....
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/11 - 08:23 am · For: The Split Up! And A New Mission!
ahaa!! cool chapter...
Name: Star of the Sky (Signed) · Date: 04/07/11 - 06:59 am · For: Join This Story!
Can I add another character or does Haiku count as my other character?
Author's Response: You can add another character. The one for Naruto GX doesn't count. Thanks!
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/11 - 02:51 am · For: Join This Story!
oh nd uh... cn u pair my OC with aura kasami...?
Author's Response: Sure, why not? Thanks.
Name: Star of the Sky (Signed) · Date: 03/07/11 - 07:13 pm · For: Join This Story!
Whichever one fits your story.
Author's Response: Okay. Thanks!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 03/07/11 - 04:22 pm · For: A Fateful Meeting.
Wow. Amazing chapter. I loved it. I'm so glad I finished so I could read this. I loved it. Wait, I already said that..... I guess that means I love it x2. I can't wait until my character is introduced.
Name: Star of the Sky (Signed) · Date: 03/07/11 - 04:09 pm · For: Join This Story!
Sweet. I just get home from camping and see this.
Name: Aura Kasami
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Series: Bakugan
Family: She lives with her mother (her father left them) and has two younger siblings, both boys.
Race: Human
Power Level: Weaker than most.
Romance: Man! We can't do Roxas. Fine...... *sits around and tries to think of another character*. Ooh. Can it be another oc? If not, just tell me and I'll tell you which character.
Life Story: She's moved around so much she rarely bothers to try and make friends. When she finally stays wherever Dan lives, she starts to make friends through Bakugan.
Appearance: (disclaimer: not mine)
http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/031/2/d/OC__At_the_Park_by_xxxRushi.png
Join Duel Academy: YES!
What kinda deck: Candy deck. I bet you'd never think of that.
Bakugan: She has a wolf bakugan named Fang.
Weapon:...... Ooh. I got it. A sling shot that she usually uses for self defense.
Personalty: She's easy to hurt. Ever since her dad left and she kept on losing her friends, her greatest fear is losing people she cares about. She's otherwise shy but nice.
Author's Response: Actually, you might be surprised. You didn't think that I would leave my favorite KH character out of this, did you? ROXAS RULES ALL KH CHARACTERS! But if you want, you can be with another OC. Just say the word.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/07/11 - 02:09 pm · For: Ezra Saddened!
Aww.... poor, poor Ezra.... His pain makes me wanna cry....
Wow, more recruits, huh? Kai, Kyo, and Haruko... I wonder what happened to Hotaru. I feel like she's gonna pop up out of nowhere.
Yay, can't wait for more! Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Yeah, poor Ezra............Yeah, new recruits. Hotaru........Hmmmm, I have no clue. Thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/07/11 - 01:00 pm · For: Sora and Ezra Meet!
*facepalm* Sorry about not remembering the name! I think I was distraught about Yuki breaking Ezra's heart at the time. Yeah, I went back and read that part, and I had to smack myself for not paying attention to important details like that.
But anyways, awesome chapter! Seriously, I really want to destroy the entire Hyuuga clan. Or at least Hiashi. And maybe Hotaru as well, since she left Hikari to die.
Wow, another nice chapter. Great job. I can't wait for more! Haha, I love these speedy updates ;D
Author's Response: Haha, that's okay! I can understand that. Thanks! Oh yeah, and I want to destroy Hiashi and Hotaru to. Thanks!
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 03/07/11 - 12:14 pm · For: The Plan To Go To Hyrule!
Wow! What a plan! Oh gosh, I'm so excited for this! This is definitely going to be intense, and I'm already anxious for all the action. This was a great chapter. Taking the time to explain what is going on was very informative. Nice job.
Oooh, Ezra and Fabia, huh? Hehe, didn't see that one coming ;)
Keep up the awesome work, this story has a great start!
Author's Response: Didn't you read the future that Trunks gave? Didn't he mention the name? Oh well. Thanks!
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 03/07/11 - 09:15 am · For: The Plan To Go To Hyrule!
kool man....!!!
n cn put this? ganon kidnapped shadow's sister tooo...
so he is in search of her.....
plus he can be of big help to Ezra n his team... as he knws most of hyrule pretty well.....
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/11 - 06:18 pm · For: A Fateful Meeting.
Intense battle! Yay, I love your action scenes! They get better and better! I actually haven't seen a fight scene by you in a while. I guess that means no duels for a while though, huh? But anyways, good work with this chapter! This was an awesome way to start the story, I really enjoyed it! Now I can't wait to read the rest of this story, because I know it's gonna be good. Haha, I look forward to more. Keep up the awesome work!
Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 02/07/11 - 06:04 pm · For: Join This Story!
Yeah, I know, I haven't even finished reading Naruto GX *face palms*
I'm super sorry about that. It's for the same reason as why I can't continue with my stories at the moment. Either way, I want to join so I can't see how amazingly you'll write my character (like I know you will) later when I have time.
Name: Toshiro Omori
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Series: DBZ
Family: His mother and father. Neither of who were saiyans. He got his powers from a long line down.
Race: Saiyan
Power Level: That's the only part of DBZ I'm not familiar with. I know what they are, but I don't know what the average is, so let's go with a little above average.
Romance: Ooh. That's a toughie. How about.... *dramatic pause*..... Whoever you want.
Life Story: He's lived in the mountains all his life with his mother and father. When they're killed, he starts training to get revenge. Unlike with Sasuke, though, he doesn't let it take over his life.
Appearance: (Disclaimer: I don't own this)
http://www.google.com/url?source=imgres&ct=img&q=http://api.ning.com/files/DwoSCOkvYh9mA99wsNyBw3j5yv*IzbK7ubNKWTpCA38FKYZuk4U045vxPRlvszxf-HLAiAGfJ4fKfNMhwhiJ8Z1CP*nkDFJd/Goth_Anime_Boy.jpg&sa=X&ei=x74PTs3NJsWztwfhgtTwDQ&ved=0CAQQ8wc4dg&usg=AFQjCNEKzb1UZcjzV3GwGJWtZL4OV3G-BA
Join Duel Academy at Year 2?: Sure.
Deck: How about he has a dragon deck.
Weapons: None
Personality: He's kind and fun loving. Although he'll never admit it, he's terrified of pain. When his loved ones are in danger of if he just snaps, he won't even feel the pain inflicted upon him. Oh, and he's bad at lying and good at holding grudges.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/11 - 12:01 pm · For: Join This Story!
Okay, here's my character. I
Writing this on my iPod touch with 1/4 battery left, so bear with my rushed and possibly incorrect info :P
Name: Akako Matsuda
Age: 18
Series: Naruto
Family: She has a sick brother named Taiyou and a mother Hana.
Power Level: Uh... A little above average but not super strong, just enough to hold her own
Romance: she doesn't need one, only of you want and the story happens to go that way
Life Story: her brother is ill with an unknown disease and her mother has three jobs to bring in money just for food; there is no money for Taiyou's medicine. Akako took a job as a ninja to earn more money (still not enough).
Appearance: she has black curly hair that reaches all the way to her feet, so it is always in a ponytail. Her eyes are snow white. She usually wears black shorts and a purple top.
Weapon: she is great in archery
Personality: she is shy but hardworking. She is kind.
Tell me if there is something that needs changing. Oh, and nice title!
Author's Response: Nice character! It seems like a good background. I might not be able to get her in as soon as possible, but I'll try.
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/11 - 11:51 am · For: Join This Story!
i inspired?
oh lolz xD
well wow... glad to hv helped ^_^
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/11 - 11:45 am · For: Join This Story!
ahaa!! cool name... so its like 1 universe n many worlds/planets...
i thought it like different dimensions kindof =P sorry..
Author's Response: Hah. Yeah, that's how it goes. It's fine. You inspired the name.
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/11 - 11:24 am · For: Join This Story!
hmm... considering that u asked for a name...
i'l say...
hw bout 'Multiverse Extreme'
just sayin dunno... ur choice...
or 'mulltiverse Peril' since all universes r in chaos....
Author's Response: The new name is Universe Disorder. Thanks, you inspired me.
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/11 - 11:15 am · For: Join This Story!
Since Yuki is not on this epic mission, is it okay for me to add another character? Oh, and about the title, you don't have to combine all the worlds together, cuz it looks like quite a mouthful. If it's easier, make it something like 'Different worlds, One Universe'.... Eh, that sounds a little cheesy, but this is just to help stimulate those title-making brain cells :P
Author's Response: Thanks for the Story title tip! I will use something like that for the title. Thanks. Oh yeah, you can add a character. The Character you added in GX doesn't count in this one.
Name: shadow4000 (Signed) · Date: 02/07/11 - 11:03 am · For: Join This Story!
name: Shadow (shawn)
age: 17
gender: male
series: zelda
family: has a sister... she looks somewhat similiar to shawn
power level?: wateva u seem fit
romance: wanted.. but with anybody u seem fit..
life story: he is well known as hyrule's biggest n deadliest assasain.... he is a complete master in stealth.. was a bounty hunter.... until ganon heard of him n hired him as his personal assasain...
shadow l8r learned that ganon ws the one who killed his father... n since than he plans revenge against ganon... his real identity(shawn) is only knwn by his sister...
appearance:
http://i1198.photobucket.com/albums/aa447/shadow4000/5a24f6d8-edb1-46ba-a466-923725a34360.jpg
blond hair, fair skin, often wears a cloak with a hood to hide himself n a mask...
weapon: a long thn katana-like sword with razor sharp teeth at its end... n a small dagger...
personallity: cool, calm, collected, dosen't trust anybody easily...but once a friend... he is totally free n jolly n smiling.... but once on a mission.. totally serious..
hope u like him...
n oh will u b including kazuki in this story plz? tht'l b my 2 ocs...
Author's Response: Okay, I thought you already added your OC, but okay. That's fine.