Reviews For Within Temptaion
Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 08/04/11 - 06:35 pm · For: Chapter 1
Wow, you certainly don't hesitate to jump right into the action. I honestly didn't see that coming. But, you have a good opening, and this intro was very good. Something's gotta be up with Kai for Orochimaru to suddenly pop up out of nowhere. Can't wait to find out more about your character. I hope you update soon because I am very interested in this story now!
Author's Response: Thank you both. I will update this soon when I have the time, or at least when I'm not working on going to school. I apparcatie the reveiws thank you both very much. ~Kai-San~rnrn
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 06/04/11 - 04:24 pm · For: Chapter 1
I love Kai. All my stories are about the child of Anko and Kakashi so I like the pair. Orochimaru wants Kai? That usually means someone is powerful. I like little girls that are amazingly powerful. This reminds me of one story of mine which is about a girl, the child of Anko and Kakashi, who is wanted by Orochimaru, and interacts with the other genin. She is amazingly powerful too. Great minds think alike right? I recomend you read my story One Little Girl. Click on my name to read it. Please update soon, i want to see where you take this. =)
Author's Response: Thank you both. I will update this soon when I have the time, or at least when I'm not working on going to school. I apparcatie the reveiws thank you both very much. I will read your story. ~Kai-San~rn by the way I'm a huge Kakshi and Orochimaru fan. : )rn