I like that Sakura and Ino are slowly becoming friendly towards each other that is so cute considering they were friends back in the day, so it really cute.
And thank your understanding that knowing fashion and dressing up for an event such as an outing to the mall is a completely girl like thing. I was kind of getting tired of seeing girls who didn’t care about dressing up but still look and then claiming they are different but I have seen the same girl about a hundred thousand times you’re not that different so good job on switching up a bit.
Oh you kept some of his Kyuubi traits before you explain why in later chapters or you will have a giant plot hole in the story. It’s not important now but if events like this keeping happening then an explanation is defiantly worthy. (Sorry if I sound mean at all >< in any of the reviews I give you).
The boys seem like gossiping girls; even the Naruto men have a feminine side.
Yep the Uchiha’s are the police force in Konoha so good job with that, I wonder what role Itachi plays. And I really can’t wait for the party ^O^.
Besides all that Shierra, is so cute worrying about an unsupervised party.
But I really enjoyed the fight scene between Lee and Gaara (You kept him in character). It happened in the Manga why not in AU world right.
Author's Response: Yup, I can't not make Sakura and Ino friends, it just seemed like the right thing to do. Okay, so about these girly things.... I like to say I'm different, but I mean really, I'm still a girl, and for an outing to the mall and trying to catch a boy's eye, a girl should definitely get dolled up. In my opinion anyway. Hmm, I'll definitely keep that in mind about the Kyuubi traits, thanks for warning me. And about the guys.... well, I tend to think some guys are worse than girls when it comes to gossiping. My guy friends are perfect examples, but that's an entirely different topic ;D Haha, I also cannot wait for the party! And yeah, I thought the fight scene would be interesting between Lee and Gaara. Glad to know I kept him in character as well. And no, your reviews have not been mean at all! I really appreciate everything you have to say. Thank you so much for sharing all of your thoughts with me. You're an awesome reviewer!
I WANT NARUTO AND HINATA TO GET TOGETHER!!!! Thanks for updating! Great way to start my weekend ^_^ I kinda feel bad for Lee, but at the same time I couldn't help but laugh at the line "my dignity has been squashed and stepped on". It's cute and heartbreaking at the same time :) MORE PLEASE! :D
Author's Response: Haha, I know right! It might take a while, but hopefully Naruto will realize he belongs with Hinata. I'm glad that I have given you a good start to your weekend. Updating this chapter honestly made mine as well because I love adding new chapters! And Lee is so adorable with his pride... I felt a little bad making him lose, but it's to help the story. I'm so sorry, Lee!!! Hopefully I'll get the next chapter out soon. Thanks for reading and being such a faithful fan to this story! It really means a lot! You're awesome for reviewing every chapter!
COOL!! This is just as great as your pirates story! And man chapter 5 was the best damn fight scene ever! Naruto is forever my favorite! Thank you for writing this! :)
(ps. Bringing Zuko in was awesome! lol ATLA is still one of the best shows ever!)
Author's Response: Whoo! I'm super glad that you decided to read this story as well! And to hear that you think it's as good as Pirates of the Mist is a real confidence booster. And I'm glad that the fight scene was written well, considering I have issues with writing fights. Naruto is purely awesome, and I have to write him as such. And Zuko is incredible, and I love him in Avatar! I love Avatar in general! Thanks for choosing to read this story as well, and thanks a bunch for reviewing it! You're an awesome fan!
Yea an update! OK me and my friend love to watch Naruto, then critique all their outfits and say how we could make them better. You read my mind on Hinata. Love the new look! Yay and you included Kankuro, Temari, and evil Gaara in this fanfic! That is so awesome (mainly because i love those characters so much) Please update soon! Great job!
Author's Response: Woohoo! I'm super glad that you liked this chapter! And I'm happy that I portrayed Hinata's new look well. I figured Ino would be the fashionista and make Hinata look awesome. rnAnd I totally got the idea to put the sand siblings in there at the last minute. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this chapter! Thank you so much for reading and thanks a bunch for reviewing!