Reviews For Freshman Year
Name: Miko_Yami (Signed) · Date: 20/05/11 - 03:13 am · For: Enter! The Incoming Freshmen!
I really like how you brought in each character. Naruto screaming randomly who he is and how great he is so Naruto –roll’s eyes-. Of course Naruto and Sasuke’s fights are always fun to read.
Aw~ Naruto has a crush on Shierra that’s so cute. I can’t wait to read more.
Oh yeah Shierra seems realistic, I mean working on school to keep her grades I like that a lot ^^.
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked the intro to the characters, that was fun for me to write as well. And of course, Naruto... well, we all know how he can get. Naruto and Sasuke are always arguing about something, so I have to make sure to get those right. Haha, Naruto's crush on Shierra seemed like a fun thing to write about, so we'll see where that goes. I'm also glad to hear that you think Shierra is realistic. I figure someone in the group has to be dedicated to school grades, so I made it her. I'm glad to hear you like that :D Thank you so much for reading this and thank you even more for reviewing. I really appreciate your feedback!
Name: MIngWei (Signed) · Date: 11/12/10 - 08:29 pm · For: Enter! The Incoming Freshmen!
HAHAHA omg I loved this chapter! Ok, first...the title. LOVE. And second...the names, hehe...I'm pretty sure Nuka is the name of one of the lions in Lion King 2 XD and isn't Zabini the last name of someone in Harry Potter (is it REALLY REALLY weird that I'm able to make these connections?? god, i'm a freak). And of course, Sokka XD
Ok, anyway. My jaw literally dropped when I read what Naruto said when he first got to the school. omg, he is just ASKING for trouble, haha
"Because you're my forver girl"...wow, haha. Nice.
Please keep this going (especially since you decided to leave it on a cliffhanger XP); I loved reading this
Author's Response: Girl, I told you! I'm terrible at making names! Yes, Nuka is the name of Kovu's brother in Lion King 2. Zabini is Blaise Zabini, Draco Malfoy's best friend. Wow...I need to be more creative... No, it's not weird that you can make connections. It only means that I'm not being discreet enough... Haha, glad you liked my interpretation of Naruto. I love writing him. It just makes me smile :) Muahahahahaha for cliffhangers! But don't worry; I'll try to update as soon as possible.