Reviews For Freshman Year
Name: Miko_Yami (Signed) · Date: 16/05/11 - 04:24 pm · For: Heading Out to High School
I like that Gato, he was in the beginning of Naruto series. That was clever keeping the original villain Masashi Kishimoto had put in very thought out. I like that =) a lot. And the best part is Gato was originally a drug dealer =). Other then that I think you got most of the characters in characters. I could all the Naruto characters reaction upon getting the text. Hinata never planning on doing anything because she is quiet, Sai and Sasuke not caring, Sakura though I hate her, I think you did a good job not bashing on her. As for Shino, I think he would be one that wasn’t planning anything but we can’t have too many Sai and Sasuke now can we so I’m getting were you are going at (so it’s alright and besides you didn’t ooc him =]). Zuka I think is off but I haven’t watched the Anime in forever so who am I to judge ;). Aw~ poor Naruto but very in character of him, forgetting to charge his phone. Thinking he’ll be the next big. I was snickering at his part and thinking of all the trouble he will get himself into. I really can’t wait to see what happens when he gets to school. Any way good job for an AU story usual they are bit difficult because you are rolling with their personality but not a very stable back story I think you did a good job =)
Author's Response: Oh, thank you for noticing Gato. You're the first one to comment on that :) I'm glad I got most of the characters in character. The text was very fun to think of, honestly. And now that I think about it, you're right about Shino. But I was going for the part of him that gets fed up with being unnoticed, so he would want to stand out in some way. I'm trying to portray Zuko as the older brother tye, and it is kinda hard... Oh, poor poor Naruto... I am so cruel to our favorite blonde. Hmm, unstable back story. I'll go back and work on that, thanks for saying something about that. Thanks for the supporting review, though! I really appreciate you reading a bunch of my stories. Thank you so much for reading this and thanks even more for reviewing! You're an awesome reader/reviewer!
Name: Fantasy Madeline (Signed) · Date: 01/01/11 - 11:36 am · For: Heading Out to High School
Overall good story. I normally don't read highschool fanfics (i dont know why...i guess the idea doesn't really intrigue me..) but this one ties character relations and personalities together very well. You took the same personalities from the anime/manga, and then added you're own flare to them. Now that you have gotten rid of the bully, i have yet to wonder what new challenges you will throw at them (though hopefully not the biggest challenge...algebra!) I smiled when I read that you included Sirious and Zuko, mainly because it was like you read my mind. (I love those two characters so much in their book and show. Thank you though for not following their exact personalities. I think overall you did a nice job coming up with new names. (mainly because i think it is almost impossible to come up with original names...) One last comment, thank you so much for having one main character like school. (Power to the Nerds!) All things considered you did a great job on this story, considering it takes place in an unfamiliar territory. Keep up the great work! =)
Author's Response: Wow, considering you don't normally read high school fics, I am truly honored that you chose to read mine. And I'm super flattered that it actually caught your eye! As for challenges, I have 179 more days to throw at them, so we'll just have to see. Although, that algebra thing might be a good idea ;) Sirius and Zuko are so amazing, I just had to include them! But since I think it would be hard to follow their personalities, I changed them around a bit. I have so much trouble with names. I'm just not that creative when it comes to making new names. Also, I just HAD to put in a character who likes school. I consider myself a nerd, so I needed someone like that in this story. Thanks so much for the positive review. And thanks a bunch for all the support you show my stories! You're awesome! Thanks again for reading and reviewing :D
Name: BloodyWolfFangs (Signed) · Date: 27/12/10 - 04:50 pm · For: Heading Out to High School
Is this story Naruto, Harry Potter, or Avatar. Very unoriginal on the names and description of Sirius and Zuko...good start though! I'll definately read more!
Author's Response: No, it's Naruto. I'm sorry! I'm terrible with names! But the idea is mine, which should count for something, right? I hope you enjoy reading this story anyways! Thanks for the review!
Name: MIngWei (Signed) · Date: 06/12/10 - 12:00 pm · For: Heading Out to High School
I figured since you've been reviewing a lot of my stories I should return the favor :) I really, really, really like this story so far. I've wanted to do a sort of AU/High School sort of thing, but when I actually tried it...well, it was pretty much crash and burn. Reading this though made me want to try again ^_^
The characters made me think of Avatar (Zuko) and Harry Potter (Sirius), just cuz of the names...is that weird of me? haha.
I really liked reading how everyone reacted when they got the text about being invisible, and especially the end with Naruto; poor guy XD I can't wait to read the next chapter and find out what happens to him :)
Author's Response: Aw, you're so nice to review my stories! And I will admit that I wasn't original with names. Zuko's appearance is the same, cuz I mean, Zuko is totally hot with his scar ;) Sirius wasn't based on Harry Potter, I just like the name :) But I promise that the personalities will most likely not reflect the characters from the Avatar and Harry Potter. I enjoyed writing the different people in there and their reactions to the text. I thought it was a different approach to high school! Anyway, I think you should try to an AU/High School fic because you're a great writer, and I'm sure you can make it work out. I have confidence in you. And thanks again for reviewing! I love support!