You......HOW COULD YOU LEAVE US WITH THIS CLIFF HANGER?!?!? XP Ugh Please update soon! I gotta know what happens!! >.<
Great story btw, I find it funny and awesome!

Author's Response: Oh hai new reviewer *u*rn
rnFrankly, I'm excited to see what happens in my story too lol I write chapters on the spot, so I have no idea what I'll come up with until I'm in "the zone." Thank you for reviewing<3 I appreciate your intent reading c:

0_0....... (ten minutes later) Okay, my mind has finally started back up. All that awesomeness shut it down. And, if I was like most people, I'd probably would kick your a** for that cliffhanger. But I don't like unnecessary pain, so.... Anyway, PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!!!!! This is one of my most favorites stories. Then again, any story I put on my favorites list is one of my most favorite stories. Okay, getting back on track. Every word left me wanting more, so it ending is leaving my mind spinning. Well, at least it wasn't over a week and I died, huh? Then again, I wouldn't be able to die. If I did, I'd NEVER be able to read your story again. Okay, the point (I think) is I can't wait to read more, so please update soon!

Author's Response: D'aww<3 You leave the best compliments ;u; I shut down your brain. Hooray me<333
rnLuckily none of you will have to kick my ass. I'm so update happy that I can't help but continue writing more *_____* My goal was to leave your mind spinning with this chapter, so I'm as happy as can beeeee~ Just for that I'll either have the next chapter posted tonight or tomorrow ;D

Okay, Rayne kissed Naruto on the cheek because she cares for him, so what's so bad for kissing Sasuke on the cheek if she cares for him as well? Anyway, great chapter. I can't wait to read more of you AMAZING story. I hope it comes out before Saturday because it is just too dang awesome. I'll die if you don't write more within a weeks. I just like your story that much.

Author's Response: Because Sasuke doesn't like to show emotion even though he knows he cares about people other than himself ;P And that's why we love himmmmm *u* <3 I'm so glad you love my story enough to review every chapter and rate it. You always say things that build up my ego and make me want to write more xD

OH???? Really? You want me to rip you a new one on a chapter?
Nah, just kidding; I’ve been super busy with finals coming up and not being able to do any reading or writing of the sort for TONFA. I just push for the stories I really truly love; meaning I give my tiny crap piece of free time to stories I know will be worth it. I don’t maybes right now.

That’s a compliment. my writing habits only changed cause a) I have little time for fun therefore SLEEP!, b) stressed and angry for hmm 16/24 hours I have for a day, so all day, and c) I just was writing something quick so that you wouldn’t be feeling that I’ve abandoned yet another story for the stress-filled, sleepless, moody, pissed off, shitty life I now LIVE BECAUSE OF EXTREMELY STUPID ASSHOLED PEOPLE IN MY LIFE!!!


*seethes several minutes later***

**composes self***

I’ve been busy and haven’t been able to give a thought and through review for ages and it's a shame really. You haven’t missed much for two months; it's just been a nightmare for me.

And since I’m now here and giving an actual review in explaining why I haven’t....**ironic** I will go over what seemed good and bad in the chapter.


I do like that you kept with story but, the area of the story you wrote about seemed pointless and dry. That part of the episode I dislike because it seems pointless, for it does nothing but shows what the characters are like, which by now WE KNOW!!! WE DON’T CARE!! *sigh* I do like the development between Rayne and Sasuke continuing to get closer. The amount is though pitiful and therefore not a huge factor in the story as of yet so I won’t dwell on it. Konohamaru having a crush on Rayne is amusing and that was a funny point that I liked reading. That’s was the part that made the story besides the ending pretty nice to read. So in all the chapter was okay, not super awesomeness like battle scenes or drama scenes. Good job and continue on and I hope this review makes you feel fully criticized! I do still think it was cute with the ending and in the beginning as well. It was different and I like originality. Goodnight.


CKL

Author's Response: It's alright, I know how you feel with the stress and everything. Luckily for me, finals in school are basically pointless considering Senior year you really don't do jack shit. Once you pass the major test Junior year that basically tells the state how well the school is doing, they couldn't give a crap and a half about you.
And THAT is the new asshole I wanted to be ripped :D I agree on how the chapter could have been dry. But in all honesty, after not writing for 2 fucking months, pardon my language, I'm very mad at myself for that...uh..oh, after not writing, I needed SOMETHING to get me back on track. From here on in mostly everything SHOULD be original and interesting, with more awesome fighting scenes (there's a major one coming up. FEEL THE SUSPENSE BITCHES) and such...
And again, thank you for reviewing <3 I'm glad that my story has impacted your tastes well enough that you find time to write me a review, even if it is a small one <3 It means the world to me

I really liked this chapter and I can't wait to read more. I'm glad Kakashi got that video =) Man. I can't wait until Saturday! I love love love your story. I'm always laughing no matter what. You rule!

Author's Response: Thank you for being so fantabulous <3 ;u; I'm working on the update, and another picture of Rayne since I hate the old one I drew now haha

Alright...so all I have to say...is that I absolutely love your story! It's so well written, your oc is extremely unique, and the story of Rayne fits in so well with the normal plot line. I am in love with this story and I just hope that you can update as soon as you can. Your writing is great, and I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so very much -is SO late with this response- If you still care, I finally updated ;u; <3

O_O. She knows Anko!!!??? Well, my guess is probably that it's because of Orochimaru, but I won't know until the next update, huh? I hope its out soon. I didn't realize how much I missed your story until I saw the last chapter wasn't a chapter but an A/N. Write more soon, please, because I love love love it!

Author's Response: You are correct ;D Haha, that made me happy to read c: I'll be updating it shortly!

Well this was certainly a funny and amusing chapter to read. I don't think it's cool to not let Rayne be in the chuunin exams but, there's that rule and rules are rules I guess...

Mah, I like what you did with chapter mate! All balanced with humor and seriousness...just lovely to read and relax with. I can't wait to see what happens next now that your little girl has got some fans now.... Also good job with Ino, that is exactly what needs to be said to the blonde. She's a good person but, just annoying to hell at times, pardon my language.

So on an good ending note; good job on the story so far and keep up the error-free work!

Author's Response: I was going to put her in initially, of course, but after watching Episode 24, I decided I couldn't because of the rules. If I did, it would completely conflict with the anime...not that anyone would pay attention to that lol. She'll make her existence known during the exams though c; you'll see.
I'm glad readers are finding my humor funny <3 I try not to be too senseless :B

*blushes* I don't know about being the God of reviews...I just speak my mind on what is what for me. Still thank you for the compliment.

I do hope your back gets back to normal though. I've just been kicking back and relaxing mine; seems to be making it better.

Mah, keep up the good work though and you'll totally keep getting good praises from me!

Well first off great job on the chapter! I love the sentiments, laugh out loud moments, and the plain humor moments you wrote in it.

I would have to agree that Lee can be the charming guy and I personally just like how he looks; it's a cute look for him.

I do find it amusing that there's something going on between Sasuke and Rayne. It's adorable but, personally I don't think it's gonna work. Mah, my brain screams this so ignore it. I usually do, lolz! XD

Moving on from the looming insanity I have, the chapter was well written. It captures the world of Naruto perfectly. I have no qualms upon any grammar or spelling errors so yeah; good job.

Sorry for not reviewing the last chapter; the disease I've said I got as been hitting me pretty hard....Laziness. Along with having a partly thrown out back doesn't help does it? T.T I don't wanna see the doc again so soon! Curse you Jaisen!

Mah, keep up the good work and WRITE ON! I'll get to writing that other review asap! *wink*

Author's Response: Phew. To me, you're like, the God of reviews. I've seen other reviews you've written on other stories, and wow, you can be really critical. With that being said, seeing such positive reviews from you means a lot to me and gives me a sense of security in moving on with the story in the direction I'm headed.
I know what you mean about Rayne and Sasuke. They're two very conflicting people, and with Sasuke's personality, I don't want to rush them both into something. It would be to OOC for him. Hopefully when I start bringing the two closer I'll be able to change your mind ;)
Thrown out back? Sheesh, I know how bad back pain is. I had a slight case of scoliosis and started going to a Chiropractor. That was about 8 years ago, and I still have to go :F I hope you feel better and that it isn't anything serious!

I absolutly love this story! I never realized how sexy zaku could be! Hahah I can't wait to see what happens next! (:

Author's Response: Haha, I know right? When I first saw him I found Zaku attractive in his own way. It means a lot that you like it <3 Thank you!!

HAHAHAHA! I absolutely love Rayne. I can't wait to read more. By the way, I came through with my promise, only a few hours late. -_-". Sorry. Anyway, please update soon. And have you tried going to Sasaui Uchiha on the Recent page, or is this site sticking to its decision to hate you?

Author's Response: =u= I love her too <3333 Hurrr.
-is going to read your story now-
Yeah, I've tried reading it from the Recent Page, on your profile, and in the search when I search it...and I just can't read it. The text doesn't appear for me =A=

I love your story, like I've put almost every time. And, since I'm repeating myself, this story is just too dang hilarious. I can't wait to read the next chapter. BTW, I have no clue what's wrong with Sasaui Uchiha. Is Never Too Late the only one that works or something?

Author's Response: The only one that doesn't work is Sasaui Uchiha :I All the others do, which is totally weird, and totally sucks, because I'd love to read the store >:C I swear this site hates me ;A; I don't know why it won't work for me when other people can read it