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Reviews For From Fire to Ashes

Name: Halleluyah no yuki (Signed) · Date: 23/04/16 - 04:24 am · For: Fire Escape
hey hey hey.. soooo, first I'd like to apologize, I've been a total sleeper here, I've read the entire story (kihika:and sequel !me:shut up, you're not helping! )ahem so, I've kinda been mooching off your hard work this entire Time and I know how annoying that can be so please feel free to mooch off me anytime (kihika:smooth
me:still not helping! )so anyways I'd like to personally tell you how awesome this story is, I really love Ross, and the thing with her mother (kihika:thats in the sequel you idiot!
me:shut it? )so I think my favorite character would be interpono though I still feel bad about the carrot top but I love haku's sister and the whole zabuzaXoc thing, I really like this story and I'll try to review as much as I can.. ja'ne!


Name: Fitsofrage (Signed) · Date: 03/11/13 - 07:17 am · For: Fire Escape
Awesomeness!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 16/02/13 - 11:19 am · For: After the Ashes
I'm glad Kaylin was able to find out more about Ross because it also have readers some insight, which is always nice. I actually really enjoyed finding out more on Ross's personality and how she was then and now.

It also makes me hope Ross and her mother can bond in the future. Although I wasn't a big fan of her in the beginning of the last story, now I want to know Kaylin better. I hope we get to.

*sigh* Zabuza never changes in some ways *sighs again then facepalms*.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 15/02/13 - 07:08 pm · For: After the Ashes
I did like the little insight into Kaylin and Ross's relationship and the buildup for a possibly bettering relationship in the future. I hope things work out for Ross and her mom, it sounds like this is opening up for some really interesting plot developments. Can't wait for more.


Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 13/02/13 - 10:16 pm · For: After the Ashes
what to do with her mother: feed her to the pigs! lol


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 10/02/13 - 11:47 am · For: After the Ashes
It's good to see ya back! It's been quite some time since reading your stories, so I was honestly a wee bit fuzzy ^_^''' Anyway, after all this drama with Ross's mom coming in, I'm looking forward to seeing the turn in where this story is going. Can't wait!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/01/13 - 10:07 am · For: After the Ashes
Poor Sanzu. She really wanted to go with Kaylin. And boy, is Ross ticked. Then again, considering the situation, I shouldn't be surprised. At least there was reason behind why Sanzu couldn't come.

Seems like the bad guys for away then. At least the mission is over now, though. She can go back to her family now. But Kaylin will be with her..... This shall be interesting.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 26/01/13 - 09:10 am · For: After the Ashes
Wow. It's so nice to see an update by you again. I sure have missed Ross. I felt bad seeing her as rattled as she was. I was afraid her mom really had killed herself, but instead the Witch is planning something. But what? Seeing as Ross is taking her, we may find out. If Zabuza doesn't snap first. Seeing him annoyed was so amusing XD.


Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 25/01/13 - 08:11 am · For: After the Ashes
i'm confused how ross and kaylin met in the naruto world. o.o sorry i didnt make it clearer when i asked

Author's Response: It's no problem at all lol See how Ksylin and Ross met is actually pretty simple. Kaylin was sitting in the village with her friend Sanzu and then they were ambushed by the mobsters, shortly afterward mobsters took them to the village and they were kept prisoner there. Shortly after this all happened Ross and Zabuza show up on a mission to deal with the gangsters. Ross then goes off by herself and unwittingly protects the mother she can't stand. Basically whIle Ross Is dIspatchIng enemies she thinks KaylIn is just a villager who got caught in the crossfire....


Name: ShadowXNight13 (Signed) · Date: 25/01/13 - 12:12 am · For: After the Ashes
first thing i did when i saw that you updated is think 'she's alive!' lol. i still am SUPER confused with how her mother and Ross met... but yea... yay for double updates!

Author's Response: So your confused as to how Ross and Marlin met? Or how Sanzu met Kaylin??


Name: ontuva (Signed) · Date: 02/01/13 - 11:48 am · For: Fire Escape
Omg. XD I had to review. This was just so amazing, I was laughing out loud. xD Konohamaru's and Ross' chemistry is just plainly awesome! I want to see more of them. AND ZABUZA. *_* OOO, THE CONFRONTATION~


Name: ontuva (Signed) · Date: 02/01/13 - 11:34 am · For: Fire Escape
Alright, I haven't reviewed like in...ages! (It's probably been over a year... o__o) But nonetheless, I am back and ADGKAGAL! I read the earlier chapters with my phone and because it's a pain in the bum to write anything with touchpad (my sausage fingers do not enjoy it ;_;) I had to wait until I got to my computer.

THIS STORY IS AMAZING. It's simply just is. Reading this makes my muse sing and just - WOAAAH. I love this.

You've made good bad guys (Interpolo still makes me cringe) and I...well I don't hate you Lance, but you are quite despicable. You killed Hokage. :(

I love your Zabuza. I just love him. Adore him. He makes my socks turn in my feet. *_* AND THIS CHAPTER AND THE KISS. WHOAA. I hadn't thought it'd happen this quick. I'm happy it did though. :3

So, on to the next chapters! I probably won't review everyone of them, because with old age becomes laziness (and because I want to rush to the next chapter XD).

*bows* I love this story. Thank you for writing it!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 01/09/12 - 02:25 pm · For: After the Ashes
Ahh. I thought that may be what happened, though I wasn't sure seeing as I wasn't sure how guy-ish Ross's voice may sound. Now, if you'll excuse me:

WHAT?!?!??!?! Her mother is in the Naruto world? Why is her mom in the Naruto world?! What does she know? Gah, I must know. I want to tell you to update again soon, but whenever you get to it, I'll be waiting.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 01/09/12 - 02:18 pm · For: After the Ashes
Wait, what? That last sentence confused me. The gender went from male to female. I confused. Mist read more to understand!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 01/09/12 - 02:12 pm · For: After the Ashes
*facepalm* Seriously. Zabuza? Yeah, no paper work for you. At least, I hope.

Ah, Ross and Zabuza fluff. It's almost as fun as their banter. Though not quite as fun.

The missions really begins then, huh? They're going to sabotage the windmill, aren't they =_=? Poor people, no clue whats hitting them. Good luck!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 01/09/12 - 02:03 pm · For: After the Ashes
Sorry for the delayed review - I've been busy. But I am glad that I got to it. I really enjoyed reading Ross's view on the sun and Earth. As for the moon..... I'm not sure, though I do believe I remember a sun, moon, and earth legend in X-Men Origens. Anyway, great chapter. Off to read more.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/08/12 - 04:18 pm · For: After the Ashes
Oh crap... Kaylin is her mother?! And she's there?! What the heck?! What is up with this twist?!

...that's about all I have to say as of now...


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 30/08/12 - 04:10 pm · For: After the Ashes
O_O


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 25/08/12 - 10:11 pm · For: After the Ashes
Haha, Zabuza and Ross are so flirty and naughty with their banter, how adorable XD

This watermill thing has me curious, I'm looking forward to seeing how things work out in this village now that the mission seems to really be starting now.

Good job on these updates, keep up the good work.


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 25/08/12 - 10:01 pm · For: After the Ashes
Oh my, what a cutesy / romantic update :3 I remember being so against those two in the first story in the beginning, but now it's really cute. I love it :D Nice chapter, I'm off to read the next one.


Name: purpledinosaur (Signed) · Date: 25/08/12 - 09:24 am · For: After the Ashes
That was awesome, DDTD! I've already started school, and I can only update on the weekends....jeez summer went by fast...well, read more of my story when you can! I'll have a new chapter out later today. Also, I have a question for you, so if you could email me, that would be great. My email is amburgeya@gmail.com


Name: silverwolf1213 (Signed) · Date: 06/08/12 - 11:59 am · For: After the Ashes
Hmm, I wonder if Tsunade was OOC for giving in too quickly about Zabuza going on the mission. I would have thought she'd fight a bit more about it.

Anyway, I really like Zabuza and Ross together, they're cute sometimes :3

Nice start on this new mission arc, I'm looking forward to more updates. I hope things work out with your leg and your job and everything.


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 03/08/12 - 10:40 am · For: After the Ashes
Sweet! My name is in the chapter notes! Just so you know, I was more than happy to go through and read every last wonderful word you wrote.

Ah, Ross and Zabuza fluff. It's always so fun to read XD. It's a nice change from the Interpono drama last chapter. It's nice to see Ross feeling better after something so hard. And so, the mission begins. I can't wait to see how this turns out!


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/07/12 - 12:32 pm · For: After the Ashes
Excuse me for a second...........

FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am now, officially, completely caught up in this series. Yeah! * does happy dance while singing "I did it!"*. It just took me more than half a year........... -_-......... Never mind, I read 129 chapters, finally got to this point, and that's all that matters!

Anyway, this was an amazing chapter that has convinced me this mission will be........ extremely bad. Sorry, Ross, but you should even sense the crap that's coming, no matter how much peace you've had for a couple years. I enjoyed the fact that Anko and Ross are friends. I wanted to facepalm when I saw they were drinking buddies, but I was too busy mentally laughing. Great chapter, DDTD. I can't wait for more (first time in the entire series I can actually say that XD).


Name: Sasaui Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/07/12 - 11:07 am · For: After the Ashes
Wow. Something really is happening to it's world. Though it's not dying, it's being corrupted. With the strange faceless creatures, the corruption in the world, Ross being the/one of the target(s), and the return of the Prophetess....... Yeah, you have me stumped. Either the Witch never died or the things crawling from that hole are the dead it has collected.

And now Ross's story will be told. This is gonna be very interesting.


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