Reviews For Onari
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 09:15 pm · For: The troubled Genin!
well...i really feel for sasuke and his wife; onari seems to b quiet a handful but, it;'ll b worth it in the end!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 08:26 pm · For: New Year’s Rush! Will we make it?
wo wo wo kakashi and the red-eyed lady? i thought tht was with asuma....and kakashi is dead...nooo..pookie
also can u put some sort of indictkator tht the perspectives of characters have changed. lik ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ or somen lik tht. its a lil confusing
Author's Response: ONARI was started about 1 1/2 years ago. Be 2 years ago this december. So that was way before the author decided to kill off Asuma and for Kurenai to be pregnant.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 08:10 pm · For: A new beginning! Friends! Enemies! Which one is it?
i thik this is a good ch. showing the perspectives from other charas is nice. reading on!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 07:51 pm · For: It takes a whole village to raise a child
*hapy sigh** im really liking and enjoying this story. its so warm and fuzzy i gonna keep reading!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 07:32 pm · For: Sasuke's Decision
i lik this chapter. its like a filler chapter. i lik tht neji=santa for a bit, tht was cute and funny. plus neji picking on kiba is funny too. im curious thou about Onari's tatoos....
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 06/09/09 - 06:38 pm · For: Sasuke's Decision
I can't wait to find out what the marks mean!I'm so curious.Anyways,I love the story and the pics you have on deviantart!
Author's Response: You're making me giddy. I don't ever get this many reviews!
Author's Response: You're making me giddy. I don't ever get this many reviews!
Name: Ardisaur_rawr (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 06:24 pm · For: Gin vs. Ryokuzu
This was an amazing chapter!!!
I loved it!!
Who healed Gin that fast?
Or, was Ryokuzu just tricking Gin about what happens in this world happens in the real world?
IDK. That confused me.
But, nevertheless!!! It was amazing!
Author's Response: Okay, all of the tricks Ryokuzu did such as biting her, the demon being in her stomach, etc happened to her mentally. When you go through something mentally, it can effect you physically yes. But remember! Gin had the lotus mixture all over her body. She had placed it on her hands and chest to protect herself against Ryokuzu. So in a way, the lotus took off some of the 'mental damage' she sustained in the fight. Because in Buddhism, the blue lotus is seen as the flower of 'enlightenment'. I'm really glad you liked it. I was waiting for a review from you ^^. You're my number one fan, I think. You sign more than anybody! I wanted this chapter to be amazing. So it was kind of hard for me to delve a bit into Idai's past to come up with the right settings. I hope you like the next chapter too!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 06:00 pm · For: Akaihi’s Wrath!
tht was totallly a wicked battle mate!! the phonix was sooooo awesome! go Onari!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 05:46 pm · For: The fight is on! The Hidden Leaf Village vs. Anamaraki!
i wonder wats so special about this girl.....ooo the excitement!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 05:36 pm · For: Onari’s secret plan to save Shikamaru!
whoopers choppers the girl has a name!! im posly hapy !
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 06/09/09 - 05:32 pm · For: Akaihi’s Wrath!
O-O......Onari is a bit scary with that strong of a jutsu...=D Yet I love it sooo much!
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 06/09/09 - 05:31 pm · For: The fight is on! The Hidden Leaf Village vs. Anamaraki!
Okay,in case you didn't understand my previous review,I meant how he looked.By the way,I love this chapter!It's so awesome!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 05:30 pm · For: Monkey see, monkey do! Hey, look what I can do! The truth behind the Snow village mystery! Part II
crap about shika but totally wicked for the girl. she totally did a # on tht dude! write on!
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 06/09/09 - 05:29 pm · For: Onari’s secret plan to save Shikamaru!
I love Akaihi!He is soooo awesome!So is Onari!
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 06/09/09 - 05:28 pm · For: Monkey see, monkey do! Hey, look what I can do! The truth behind the Snow village mystery! Part II
Sweet!I love it so much!
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 06/09/09 - 05:25 pm · For: Monkey see, monkey do! Hey, look what I can do! The truth behind the Snow village mystery! Part I
Wow wow wow wow!I love it!
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 06/09/09 - 05:24 pm · For: Reverse and Back: Shikamaru’s Protector!
Before you ask why my reviews come so fast,it's because I've read up to chapter eight,but I've never had time to review.Anyways,as usual,it's amazing!
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 06/09/09 - 05:23 pm · For: Nightfall: A rabbit comes to roost!
I love this story!I can't wait to read more!
Name: bre2k8 (Anonymous) · Date: 06/09/09 - 05:23 pm · For: Something’s fishy! Sasuke’s anger takes on a new meaning!
Wow!This is awesome!!!!
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 05:19 pm · For: Something’s fishy! Sasuke’s anger takes on a new meaning!
yaheee the shika is teaching the girl! i wonder wat her name is and dnt bother anwsering the question on naruto. this chapter answered it for me. ^^
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 05:19 pm · For: Monkey see, monkey do! Hey, look what I can do! The truth behind the Snow village mystery! Part I
yaheee the shika is teaching the girl! i wonder wat her name is and dnt bother anwsering the question on naruto. this chapter answered it for me. ^^
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 05:06 pm · For: Reverse and Back: Shikamaru’s Protector!
i curious how old is the grp? and im not surei its my brain screwing up but, Naruto is the hokage rite?
bsides tht good job! lov the temp fling ^^
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 04:58 pm · For: Something’s fishy! Sasuke’s anger takes on a new meaning!
nice chapter. so she cant speak but...at least sasuke has made contact.
omg tht just sounded like somen a guy would say about aliens lolz^^
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 04:48 pm · For: Nightfall: A rabbit comes to roost!
so the girl cant speak...hmmm...well at least sauke has made contact!
(omg i just sounded like the military with ufos and aliens...lolz)
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 06/09/09 - 04:39 pm · For: Something’s fishy! Sasuke’s anger takes on a new meaning!
hmmm this story looks good, i shall read on!