Reviews For Hybrid
Name: firefang13 (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 - 08:21 pm · For: Prologue+Chapter 1: Foxy Friend
omg love!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: YAY! someone else loves my story! thanks so much for the review and rating!! ~lemon
Name: JasmineLeaf (Anonymous) · Date: 11/02/08 - 03:48 pm · For: Prologue+Chapter 1: Foxy Friend
I like it! Hmm, your work intreste me, but girl! You need to update more often. No affense. I just like your stories alot.
Author's Response: Ahaha ^^; yeah I know! I should get over my laziness! and I'm glad that you like my stories! I shall update as soon as my fingers type the it! thanks for rating and reviewing!! ~lemon
Name: DRAGONKINGHT (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 - 09:28 am · For: Prologue+Chapter 1: Foxy Friend
love to more and more of tjis stoy.
Author's Response: Thank you! glad that you like it! ~lemon
Name: Frosty (Signed) · Date: 10/02/08 - 09:44 pm · For: Prologue+Chapter 1: Foxy Friend
Kay, there were alot of grammer mistakes. Alot of them. But they were probably all the work of typos and lazyness. Stuff like forgetting the 'ly' on 'irritatingly' and that sort of thing.Nothing that disrupts the flow of the story to much. Next time, write the chapter, wait three days, read it over and edit, then post, you should be fine.
As far as content goes... I like it. It's light, and humerous. I especially like the fact that Sasuke threw a carton of milk at Kakashi. Don't know why, just do.
As to what Hinata should be... hmm... How about a rabbit? A rabbit, mind you, not a bunny. Bunnies are more sociable than rabbits are. I'd suggest a mouse because she's so timid, but she's look really cute with rabbit ears, so that's what I suggest. Or one of those Mexican birds. They are green with red chests and small heads, and their name starts with the letter 'Q' but I don't remember what it is...
I vote KibaHina rather than ShinoKiba, they just look better togeather...
Really like. Please continue to write and update soon!
Frosty
Author's Response: Yes, laziness pretty much is the cause of my mistakes! I'm relieved that it didn't disturb the flow! I will take your advice and read it over more carefully next time! I often forget to do that sometimes. Light and humorous....Thanks! I'm very pleased that you liked it! and the milk carton...complete spur of the moment thing. Glad that I made someone like it though! I was thinking that Hinata would be a rabbit as well. So this just confirmed my musings! I never really noticed the differences of rabbits and bunnies...but now I do know them and will make note of it! Rabbit Hinata it is. thats one vote for KibaHina and one vote for ShinoKiba! i really hope that they dont tie. Because then I wouldn't know what to do. I agree with you though, Kiba and Hinata do look better together. I will update as soon as I can! So don't get too mad at me if it takes a while ^^; Thank you! ~lemon
Name: blood sapphire (Anonymous) · Date: 10/02/08 - 08:19 pm · For: Prologue+Chapter 1: Foxy Friend
i think that hinata should be a hamster...because the hamsters i have had have all been really shy..or she could be a rabbit those are cute and shy... and sometimes bit when they get mad
i also like the shinokiba pairing better but hey i am a yaoi fangirl
Author's Response: Hmmm...both very good suggestions and reasonings....I'll have to think this over! Thanks! and I like ShinoKiba too! cause its cute! haha..the flea and the dog...O.O hope that you continue to like it! thanks so much! ~lemon
Name: saisasi (Anonymous) · Date: 10/02/08 - 03:20 pm · For: Prologue+Chapter 1: Foxy Friend
hehe its a very cute start ^_^
Author's Response: Oh thank you! I was hoping someone would say that! thanks so much for reading and reviewing! ~lemon