Reviews For Hybrid
Name: Miss (Anonymous) · Date: 15/04/08 - 12:51 am · For: Chapter Three: Ah! I smell a kiwi!
Hiiii !!!It's me again !!! xD
I've just read the two last chapters of this fic ! Kyaaaaah ! I LIKE IT !!!
I don't know how you do that but I'm always crazy about your stories !!! >__<
Now ... about the kiwi ... LOOOL ! It's so funny !!! I thought I would never been able to stop laughing ! Great idea ! Really !!!
And I love Sasuke ! The way he threathens Kakashi , and everything !!! xD
I LOVED the part , at the shop , when Kakashi says it will cost Sasuke a month of rice balls !!! XD
HAHAHAHAHA !
Brilliant !
And poooor Naruto ! He's so naive ! Someone should tell him that it wasn't the wall that was moaning !
Not that I want to be the one to explain it to him ... Sasuke would be better ! xD
Hihi !!!
Anyway , keep it on ! It's a great story !!!! You're improving more and more everyday , in my modest opinion !!!
See you very sooon !!!
Loves !
Your N°1 French fan xD
Author's Response: LOL And I'm always happy that I can make you laugh so much! Heh heh modest indeed. BUT! Do you really think I improved? Because I hate all my stories... I like it when I write it but then I hate it when I post it... It's really frustrating. But as long as you like it and keep reading it's all worth the anguish! ^^ Naruto is really naive, isn't he? But we all love him for that! And Sasuke would be PERFECT to explain it, wouldn't he? And maybe a demonstration too? *snort* If only it were that easy, ne? Anyway! Thanks for the lovely review and all the nice compliments! I really appreciate them! And the loyalty! I don't think I could ask for more! Arigato for always making me smile! :] Nice to hear from you! *loves* ~lemon
Name: JustAnotherSoul (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 - 10:22 pm · For: Chapter Three: Ah! I smell a kiwi!
...lol...kiwi..
Cute chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! Cuteness is so...Cute, isn't it? XP I hope you keep enjoying! ~lemon
Name: JustAnotherSoul (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 - 10:10 pm · For: Chapter Two: Perverted Interests?
Yeah.... *drools..*
ff.neeeet~~~!.
XDDD
When does Lee get into the picture!!!??.. :D, He's not going to be a frog ...right?..
AHHHH! *spazzes*
Author's Response: I swear...You must have psychic powers or something...Because I WAS going to make him a frog at first...But then I was like, HELL NO! So, something cuter had to suffice ^^ So he's not gonna be a frog! Don't worry! Lee and the others will come...In chapter four! OMG! Thats' the next chapter! *runs off* Off to write now! Thanks for reviewing! (FF.net! YAY! Isn't it awesome?!) *hugs* ~lemon
Name: JustAnotherSoul (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 - 09:58 pm · For: Prologue+Chapter 1: Foxy Friend
oh...em....gee....
It's all my favorite pairings...*GAAAH!*
I LOVE IT ALREADY!!!!!
*clicksnext*
Author's Response: Really? Then we must have the same taste! *yayz!* It's nice to relate with someone! Haha, I'm glad that you like it so far! Yes, keep reading and get sucked in to all the yaoi goodness...@.@... Thanks for reading! ~lemon
Name: AikoMatsuo (Signed) · Date: 13/04/08 - 02:28 am · For: Chapter Three: Ah! I smell a kiwi!
HAY great. i think calling it a Kiwi is a great and funni idea, i might use it. lol XD love the part about moaning walls. LMAO it was soo funni. Keep it up love it. Love AikoMatsuo X
Author's Response: YES! USE THE KIWIS PEOPLE! XD More kiwis would make happier reviewers and readers! -ahem- Making people laugh and smile is what I aim for..So it makes me happy that I accomplished that with you! I hope that you enjoy the next bit that I put up! ;] *hugs* ~lemon
Name: emz_rose (Anonymous) · Date: 12/04/08 - 03:37 pm · For: Chapter Three: Ah! I smell a kiwi!
A kiwi! Like a new zealander! Whoop! Yes, yes I know you mean a fruit *rolls eyes* like dur. But yeah I enjoyed this chapter very much. I loved the interacton between Iruka & Kakashi and Sasuke & Naruto. It rocked, it was so cool. You should be very happy with how this chapter turned out. Can't wait for the nxt chapter, will love it!
Author's Response: ^^ I'm glad that you like it so much! I was a little iffy at first...but I'm happy with how it turned out now too! *snort* Yeah..A new zealander...I thought about that too when I wrote it! Hopefully I'll get more reviews from you??? Because I would love them! Thanks for reading, rating, and reviewing! It makes me smile and want to write more! *hugs* ~lemon
Name: AphoriditeRose (Signed) · Date: 12/04/08 - 08:59 am · For: Chapter Three: Ah! I smell a kiwi!
LOVE IT. tis like, the awesomeness. Very cute lols :] It made me chuckle when Naruto thought the walls where moaning, rofl XD
i shall be looking out for yoiur next chapter (: Loves x
Author's Response: Heehee Moaning walls...Yeah, they'll be doing that a lot while he's there XD I'm very happy that you like it so far and I'll write my fastest and hardest! Thankies! *hugs* Love your support! ~lemon
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 10/04/08 - 04:24 pm · For: Chapter Three: Ah! I smell a kiwi!
love to rade more!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll put more up soon! ~lemon
Name: Frosty (Signed) · Date: 10/04/08 - 02:11 pm · For: Chapter Three: Ah! I smell a kiwi!
I just have to say… great job! No animal-related corrections today. In fact, very few corrections at all. Really enjoying this, still, and definitely sticking through with it until the end. Thanks for another great chapter! We will be getting a lemon eventually, right? Right? We NaruSasu fans must have our yaoi needs fulfilled! And we – or at least, I - am counting on you! Anywho, yeah. Really enjoyed this. Especially Naruto’s strangled speech. It just makes me want to hug him obsessively and possibly add him to my collection of adopted anime characters… Well, onto the comments!
Heh… Naru-glomp! YAYZ! So kawaii…
Lolz. Iruka is ‘Kakashi’s female.’ Not that we didn’t all know that Kakashi would be seme, no matter the relationship he was in. Kakashi just doesn’t do uke.
"The wall..is-is....moaning." – Oh, poor, poor, innocent Naruto! Though he should know what is going on. I mean, foxes are known for being the horniest in the animal kingdom. Even more so than cats and rabbits. They go into heat just thinking about it!
YAYZ! Naruto says ‘meh’! YAY! Love that word…
“Mate? What's a mate?” Well, um, uh, you see, Naruto, a mate is, uh… ASK SOMEONE ELSE!
Kashi-kun’s house is ‘haunted.’ Oh yes. Yes it is.
Heh… Sakura needed the tranq… And she’s a house cat. Bet she’s a calico. Don’t know why, just bet she is.
Yes! Kiwi! That’s what it shall be called! I shalt use that someday… I’ll credit you, of course, but I will use it…
Caught some spelling errors/typos:
Meeger – meager. Just thought I’d let ya know…
and the walked – and then walked
scopped – scooped
Kakshi – Kakashi
to let the 'mysteries of them human race' for – you may want to use ‘leave’ as opposed to ‘let’ here.
The boys ears – the boy’s ears
staring strait ahead – staring straight ahead
He inhale and eyed the fox – He inhaled and eyed the fox
Naruto smellled so good. – Naruto smelled so good. (I bet he does…)
after thought – afterthought
Great work. Looking forward to the next installment!
Frosty (of the Funk! *lights change, music plays, etc*)(Red Fox extraordinaire, and self-proclaimed biggest fan of this story)
Author's Response: O.O *stares* You have NO idea how much I love you as of now! *drools* Loooonnggg revieeeeeeew! *hugs* OK! On to the respondingnessessessness....uh...yeah. Anywho, I'm glad that you have no animal corrections for me this time! I did my research! XD But it's always so nice when people are helpful like that! :] Heh heh, I love your wittiness! Yes, Kakashi doesn't DO uke! He just doesn't go that way. I try to make Naruto as cute as possible (Sasuke too, but who can make HIM look cute? *rolls eyes* It's impossible.) And as innocent...For now...The lemons are on their way! Be afraid people, BE AFRAID! Or excited, either way as long as I get my lovely reviews XP But for now you will have to be satiated with the fluff and the cuteness. AND THE KIWIS! I have started a revolution! *dances* XD And as for those nasty little mistakes...I shall go forth and fixeth them! Thanks for pointing them out! So helpful! T^T More is on the way my faithful reviewer! (and self-proclaimed biggest fan of this story) So....READ ON! *luv&hugs* ~lemon
Name: Hypnotic_Uchiha (Signed) · Date: 10/04/08 - 10:55 am · For: Chapter Three: Ah! I smell a kiwi!
that last one was mine...sorry forgot to sign in heh
Author's Response: lol I forget to do that sometimes too! I'm not alone! Yosh! XP ~lemon
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 10/04/08 - 10:52 am · For: Chapter Three: Ah! I smell a kiwi!
A kiwi, clever Lemon! I just adore this story. I've read naruto!pet and sasuke!pet fics before, but not like yours! Great job and I'm drying for the next chapter, oh and by the by...Instinct Sasuke rocks! WooT!
Author's Response: Yep! Hurray for kiwis! XD Really? You too?! Yay! They're my inspiration for this! I've read so many Foxy!naruto and kitty!sasuke fics before that I just HAD to write my own! I'm glad that mines different in a way! I try to be as original as possible! I'll try to keep it interesting! And smutty...So Sasuke's going to get more perverted! XD Thanks for reading, rating, and reviewing! *loves* ~lemon
Name: Arukasandora (Anonymous) · Date: 10/04/08 - 01:49 am · For: Chapter Three: Ah! I smell a kiwi!
OMG that was good but there was no smut DAMN
Sasuke think with your dick not your brain
Author's Response: I think Sasuke needs some Viagra XD Maybe then we would get some action! Haha there will be smut to come! So now I'll have to keep you satisfied with kiwis! Thank you for the review and rating! ~lemon
Name: naru_chan_fan (Anonymous) · Date: 09/04/08 - 08:29 pm · For: Chapter Three: Ah! I smell a kiwi!
sasuke possesive and he doesn't know XD
pwease update soon
Author's Response: Yeah, I just loved that bit. I'm happy that you liked it too! ^^ I'll get to it! *pumps fists in the air* I have my motivation! XD Thankies! Love your reviews! ~lemon
Name: A.C. (Anonymous) · Date: 03/04/08 - 09:58 am · For: Chapter Two: Perverted Interests?
Wow, this is so good. Was really dissapointed when i realised their wasn't another chapter. I'm loving their personalities, you've got Sasuke done to a T! Please update when you can - can't wait for another chapter.
Author's Response: XP I'm glad that I got it right! You wouldn't believe how hard it is to keep them in character! But, I'm relived to hear that I'm doing well so far *wipes brow* I'll get to writing soon! Thank you! ~lemon
Name: emma (Anonymous) · Date: 02/04/08 - 10:13 pm · For: Chapter Two: Perverted Interests?
Loved it. Very good, and Sasuke and Naruto's relationship is very interesting. I enjoyed the fic. I haven't read any of your works before and am very impressed ^-^ looking forward to the next installment!
Author's Response: Thank you! I try to make things as interesting as possible! It's more fun that way. I hope you enjoy the next bit just as much! I'll look forward to more reviews from you! So don't let me down! Thanks for reading! ~lemon
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 24/03/08 - 01:46 am · For: Chapter Two: Perverted Interests?
I hate to see this story go away, even more so when its just started. It really cute like you said and I love to see more of it. Please continue you
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad that someone likes it! I was afraid that no one would read it 'cuz it's been done so many times... Thank you so much! I'll put more up soon! ^.~ ~lemon
Name: lunar saint (Signed) · Date: 23/03/08 - 10:41 pm · For: Prologue+Chapter 1: Foxy Friend
keep going ask if you have any trouble
Author's Response: Oh thank you! ^^ I'll be sure to ask! I have lots of problems often :S so the help is really appreciated! Arigato! ~lemon
Name: mAddy (Anonymous) · Date: 23/03/08 - 04:35 pm · For: Chapter Two: Perverted Interests?
Hi! HI! HI! OMGAH! That's was sooo cute! Plz don't stop writing I loved it! ^-^
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! It's cute?! Yay! I'll continue soon! ^^ thank you for rating and reviewing! ~lemon
Name: narubaby (Anonymous) · Date: 23/03/08 - 02:00 pm · For: Chapter Two: Perverted Interests?
really good story i love it naruto sounds soo freakin cute
lets just hope sasuke dont rape the poor boy
Author's Response: Yes, lets hope not! But...It is really tempting to write it though...*twitches* WELL! I'm thankful that you're enjoying it! Thank you! ~lemon
Name: Frosty (Signed) · Date: 23/03/08 - 08:27 am · For: Chapter Two: Perverted Interests?
I'd keep him with the Red Fox blood - the Red fox is the most energetic form of foxx, and completely fits with Naruto's character - just give him a small streak of fennec as well. Say the DNA of the fennec only effected his appearance and not his temperment or some such thing, for fennec foxes tend to be shy. Red foxes, however our loud attention whores who tend to be uber stubborn and quick to bite. I know this because, in the fur community, I happen to BE a red fox, only I'm even MORE stubborn than most because I was raised by a wolf rather than another fox. Dangerous mix, that...
Also, just caught this - in your first chapter, did you mean to say 'Prolouge' not 'Epilouge'?
Lastly... does this cound as two reveiws because I was reffering to BOTH chapters? Please say it does! I want a new chapter!
Author's Response: You? A Red Fox? Never would have guessed! ...WOW! When you give info, you give info! Thanks! This really does help me in so many ways! Now...How to fit it all in...Hmm..I think of something sooner or later! Yes...I think this will all work! It gives me some ideas for the future also ^^ GOOD ideas too! Whoops...Didn't even notice that! I'll fix it! I always get the whole 'prologue' 'epilogue' thing messed up...And yes I will count this and your other one as two reviews! Just because you want it too! and for being so helpful! Thanks again! *loves&hugs* ~lemon
Name: AphoriditeRose (Signed) · Date: 23/03/08 - 06:26 am · For: Chapter Two: Perverted Interests?
N'AWW TIS ADORABUBBLES. [:
^^ mischeivious fluff ball and the pampered bastard. Love it. Lol xD
[= looking forward to your next chapter ;] loves xo
Author's Response: Let me just say this...I LOVE that word. 'Adorabubbles' That has got to be one the best words I've ever heard of. -Ahem- ANYWAY! I'm so glad you like it! I'm very found of the pampered bastard too! XD Perfect mix with the fluff ball, ne? I'll update soon! I got some of the next chapter done! WOOT! Thank you so much for rating and reviewing! *loves* ~lemon
Name: Frosty (Signed) · Date: 22/03/08 - 10:57 pm · For: Chapter Two: Perverted Interests?
YOU ISH STILL HERE! I was worried that you had given up on this story and I would have to hunt you down and force you to update at arrow-point!
You probably already know this, but arctic foxes have rather small ears, not big ones. Did you mean to say red fox when talking about the size of little Naru-chan's ears? Because the vulpes vulpes DOES have rather large ears, though they are only slightly larger than that of their counterpart, Urocyon cinereoargenteus does. If you want BIG fox ears, perhaps he should have a bit of fennec in him as well. That would also cover the blonde/yellow hair, as fennec foxes are tan/a blondish color and are known for their large ears.
I've already given you my pairing votes in my last reveiw.
Thanks for finally updating!
Author's Response: O.O Yes! I'm still here! No need to hunt me down today! XD Thank you! I don't think anybody has ever helped me out with my fics as much as you have! I think I might have to change Naruto's breed a bit just to fit to my standards. I think that a fennec fox suits Naruto character more than a red fox would. I love when people are helpful. Thank you so much! I hope to hear from you in the future! I'll update soon! ~lemon
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 13/03/08 - 01:32 pm · For: Prologue+Chapter 1: Foxy Friend
kiba&hinata pleas i love kibaandhinata
Author's Response: Yay! I love kibahina too, so don't worry! I think that will be one of the couples ^^ Thank you for your suggestions! *loves* ~lemon
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 21/02/08 - 06:46 am · For: Prologue+Chapter 1: Foxy Friend
i say that hinata shoud be a rabbit
Author's Response: Rabbit it is! That seems to be a popular choice! ^^ thanx for reading! ~lemon
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 16/02/08 - 11:32 am · For: Prologue+Chapter 1: Foxy Friend
love to read more and more of this story
Author's Response: Oh thank you! I'm glad that you liked it! ^^ ~lemon