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Reviews For Unbreakable Bonds

Name: Zafirya (Signed) · Date: 01/08/08 - 02:50 am · For: Tempt Me
Kawai. Sorry for not reviewing faster, but i wasn't at home . Do u want to discus FastForward? Please leave a message on my msn. Thy. ( i have to hurry so on msn everything)

Author's Response: It's okay, as long as you do review I don't care when! And I would love to talk about FastForward! As soon as I reset my password for msn...it won't let me log in :O *loves* ~lemon


Name: kurisuchin45556 (Signed) · Date: 24/07/08 - 06:58 pm · For: Tempt Me
oh my god, he's gonna reveal himself to her! that's so awesome!

Author's Response: Oh, enthusiasm! I like it X] I'm glad you're enjoying reading it as much as I enjoy writing it! Thanks so much fr reviewing! *loves* ~lemon


Name: snowydays (Signed) · Date: 23/07/08 - 07:26 pm · For: Tempt Me
this one is cute!! but i can't wait for some lemon please let there be lemon? TT^TT

Author's Response: Don't worry *snicker* there will be! I'm just making sure you're all ready for it. Wouldn't want to rush it, ya know? Thanks for reviewing! I'll get to the lemon in say...three chapters? Maybe two? *shrugs* It'll happen! *love* ~lemon


Name: Zafirya (Signed) · Date: 03/07/08 - 03:02 am · For: Hypnotic
Okay. I am not angry. I thought that something like that happened. But for the next 12 day i will be in England, so we won't speak i think. :(. But hey. After that we will. This chapter was good again, however i couldn't understand everything, but this is my problem X3. Gambatte.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for not being angry, I really need to make sure my computer doesn't have a virus or something :S But anyway, thanks for reviewing and I hope you have a wonderful time in England! You're so lucky! I'll look forward to talking with you again! *love* ~lemon


Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 02/07/08 - 09:19 am · For: Hypnotic
Super story Lemon!
I hope you keep it up please!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Thanks for reviewing! ~lemon


Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 02/07/08 - 09:13 am · For: A Part of You
Great story. But, I think it should end in a happy way not a sad way. That kind of stuff makes me cry.

Author's Response: Yeah, it makes me cry too, but I sometimes wonder if happy endings get boring....oh, well. I think I'll stick with the happy ending! *love* ~lemon


Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 02/07/08 - 09:08 am · For: Shatter
Great story. HOpe you got more. I was wondering if you were going to stop writing your story. Please don't and make more.

Author's Response: Are you kidding? I'd NEVER stop writing this! Especially with great reviews like you helping me along! :] Thanks so much for reviewing! ~lemon


Name: Oro_Sasu_lyf (Signed) · Date: 30/06/08 - 12:34 pm · For: A Part of You
I SOOOOOOOO think you should do a happy/semi-sad ending with a sequel GOOD JOB SO FAR!!!!! keep 'em coming

Author's Response: ^^ I think that would do just perfectly. I'll keep 'em coming! Don't worry! Thanks for reading!!!! ~lemon


Name: Zafirya (Signed) · Date: 17/06/08 - 08:43 am · For: A Part of You
Congratulation for 100 reviews. It's such a cool story. I love it. You are a kind person and i think that's why everybody loves it. It's so true. In the real word it would be true. But poor Sasuke. Everybody hurts him. :( and Naruto too.You should give a happy ending for the story. Mostly because of your personality. I hope the bests for you.
*Zafirya

Author's Response: Thanks for caring so much! I think that you're a lovely person with a heart of gold, I'm always happy to get a review from you! Talking to you has been a joy and I hope you find the happiness you've always deserved. Your support has been with me from the beginning and has kept me going, and for that I'm truly grateful. I think Naruto and Sasuke deserve a happy ending too, so let's hope that I get the courage to write it! Thank you so much! (Yay! 100!) *love* ~lemon


Name: camstir95 (Signed) · Date: 16/06/08 - 12:19 pm · For: A Part of You
do the happy ending!

love the story! :)

Author's Response: Ok, another for the happy ending! I'm happy that you like it! ^^ ~lemon


Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 05/06/08 - 07:26 am · For: A Part of You
I love it! I hope you got more for this story I can't wait..........and if you like make a sequel.

Author's Response: ^^ I'll try my best to make a worthy sequel! Thanks for liking my story, there's more on the way! ~lemon


Name: OmgVikiRawr (Signed) · Date: 03/06/08 - 10:02 am · For: A Part of You
With regards to the sad/happy endings I would much prefer the happy ending if it went on to be a sequel, the only problem would be having the OCs good enough to fit
Which I think you will dooooo lol
So go for happy ending
Or have a sad then a happy ending
Or the other way round
Either way, you must have MOAR :D

Author's Response: Ahaha. You have found my weak spot. The part I'm worried about is making the OC's. I want to write about their children, but at the same time I don't want to ruin their characters...It's quite a bind ^^; But if people want a sequel...Then I shall grant one! I have the rough drafts and main plot line and everything. Just needs a spark to it now...~~~~Thanks for reading and reviewing! I love the support! ~lemon


Name: OmgVikiRawr (Signed) · Date: 03/06/08 - 09:41 am · For: Hate
GAHGAHGAHGAHGAHGAHGAHGAHGAHGAHGAHGAHGAHGHAHGAHGAHGHAGbhnjfdnb
need
moar
o yay next chapter

lol LOVE IT xxx
btw, the lemon wasnt too shabby ^^

Author's Response: lol thanks! ^////^ glad that you liked the lemon! I'll get better at 'em, promise! But keep reading (as you have) and I'll get right onto the good stuff! *love* ~lemon


Name: Sakuras_Assian (Signed) · Date: 03/06/08 - 09:32 am · For: A Part of You
i like it. keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you continue to enjoy it! I'll try my best! ~lemon


Name: Akura (Signed) · Date: 03/06/08 - 01:11 am · For: A Part of You
LOL XD I enjoyed that Naruto Nippon...lol!!! And OMG, naruto..suggesting a DINER?! It IS the apocolypse! lol, and OMG, naruto is going to corrupt his kids with Ramen!!! Nuuuuuu! lol

And as for the ending...hm, I am a big fan of sad endings, but I think with all that's happened in this story, it should have a happy ending in my opinion! -^^-

Author's Response: I agree, too much drama for one story. I'm so horrible to my characters (-ahem- Kishimoto's characters) X] I think a happy ending sounds good. I'm glad you enjoyed Nippon! I love listening to it on Youtube, it's just so fun to hear the voice actors out of character! Gives a little insight to who they really are, and it's fun for us too! Yep, Naruto is going to corrupt his little kiddies with ramen (at least they'll never get cavities!!) Thanks for reading! ~lemon


Name: Zafirya (Signed) · Date: 02/06/08 - 05:46 am · For: A Part of You
This was great again. Why did Sakura find Naruto. She is not good enough for him, or to be near him. It's just for Sasu. Make a happy ending. ^^

Author's Response: *smile* Yes! Happy ending! ^^ And don't worry, Sasuke will find him soon enough...*snicker* You just wait. Thanks for all the reviews! ~lemon


Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 02/06/08 - 04:26 am · For: A Part of You
no. no no NO NO NO. no tragedy. Sequel sounds good ^.^

so it sounds like its about to end. i'm doing a report on this, kk? like my teacher said i could write my book critiques on Fanfiction and yea =]

Author's Response: T^T R-really? I would be flattered if you did...I'll be sure to take in your vote! Seems like everyone wants a happy ending! I apreciate your support and everything! Thank you! ~lemon


Name: snowydays (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 - 10:48 pm · For: A Part of You
happy ening but if u like the story enough u can have a small sequal!

Author's Response: TWO for the happy ending! Thanks for reviewing and telling! I really appreciate it! ~lemon


Name: DRAGONKINGHT (Signed) · Date: 01/06/08 - 08:49 pm · For: A Part of You
I love happy endings and i hope you make a sequel.

Author's Response: 'Kay! One for the happy ending! Thanks for reviewing! And reading! ~lemon


Name: kurisuchin45556 (Signed) · Date: 26/05/08 - 06:25 pm · For: Hate
ooh, that's awesome!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to keep doing that! The review and rating is much appreciated! ;] As is the support! ~lemon


Name: snowydays (Signed) · Date: 25/05/08 - 03:50 pm · For: Hate
yes the lemon waqs great!!! your writhing is good keep it up!!!! :3

Author's Response: *smile* Thanks! I'm soooo glad that you liked it! I'm very sensitive about my writing skills *scratches head* Thanks for the review! ~lemon


Name: saisasi (Signed) · Date: 25/05/08 - 09:14 am · For: Hate
I like it! Naruto needs to move in with sasuke so he can decorate a HUGE playroom though, the kids are goinng to need it.

Author's Response: lol Yeah, but I think the adults will need it more than the kids X] I couldn't stand having THREE kids! Not at the same time anyway. Thanks for reviewing!! ~lemon


Name: Zafirya (Signed) · Date: 25/05/08 - 04:58 am · For: Hate
Jeh. Again i couldn't understand everything. I mean the connections, but i write it to my english, cause i am not as good as i want to be. However you like torturing naruto better than me. And how can Sasu visit Naruto if he is not allowed to do? And why didn't he got more punish. And you said that 1 year since, sasuke can't leave his home, but naruto is still pregnant. I am a little bit confused.

Author's Response: Ah! Such good questions! I'll bet you're confused because of my bad writing skills ^^' Sasuke is sneaking out to see Naruto. He IS a very good shinobi and can get past the guards that are watching over him, so that would make sense, in my book anyways. He's not allowed to go anywhere, so he sneaks out when he can. I hope that clears it up for you. Sorry for making you confused! I'll try to put in those little details in the future! And yes, I do love to torture Naruto ;] *love* ~lemon


Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 25/05/08 - 02:43 am · For: Hate
that.

was.

AWESOME.

lol you have to write lemons youre sucha good writer.
and you dont just rush into the sex a sentence into the story like some other horny 'authors.' continue! you're not gonna ditch this story, right?

Author's Response: I'll never ditch this story! NEVER! Unlike most authors, I enjoy writing and I do it just for the fun of it ^^ I think I'm horrible at writing...I don't know why, with all this positive feedback and all, but it's just the way it goes with me. But as long as I have reviewers and people who read it, why not continue, right?! Thanks for reading, rating, and reviewing! ~lemon


Name: Akura (Signed) · Date: 25/05/08 - 12:38 am · For: Hate
On chp. 16-hate, it was so...freakin...AWSOME!!! I loved every single thing about it!!! I absolutely look forward to the next one!!!!!!!!! =^^=

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'll try to make all the rest of the chapters as enjoyable as this one! And...Maybe I'll look forward to more reviews from you? Hope so! Thanks for reading, rating, and reviewing! ~lemon


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