Reviews For Please Me
Name: Rowanashke (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 - 04:31 pm · For: Chapter 1
Hey so far I like it, but you really need a beta reader. Your flow is good but your grammer sucks (sorry, that's mean, but it's true). I'm doing it for someone else so I'd be happy to volunteer-let me know, k?
Name: kibafan17 (Signed) · Date: 07/11/07 - 02:45 pm · For: Chapter 2
Hot! Like it lots and would like to see some more smut please!
What I would say is that it would be much easier to read if it was broken into paragraphs and had speech marks where they talk - but they are minor points
10/10 - I'm starting to really like this pairing! :P - Kibafan17 =^.^=