Reviews For Pets
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 12/05/12 - 12:28 am · For: Chapter 21
Awwwww.... Hiroko is dead. *sob* Why? Why? Damn you Kayane I know this is somehow your fault.
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 12/05/12 - 12:14 am · For: Chapter 20
You know you skipped chapter 19? Anyways...
Thanks for the chapter. Puppet is so smart. I hope Shoji is okay again. Poor boy. And what wrong with little Yumi?
I gotta read the next chapter. NOW!
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 10/05/12 - 10:56 pm · For: Chapter 18
I like the old Shoji better too.
What is Puppet up too?
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 10/05/12 - 08:49 pm · For: Chapter 17
Poor Neko and Shoji. Why would they let Kayane 'train' him.
And Hizashi still doesn't know Yumi is his kid. Why are they hiding it from him? He deserves to know.
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 07/05/12 - 09:58 pm · For: Chapter 16 (for real)
Yuck! Kayane is despicable. I really really hate him. Poor Shoji.
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 07/05/12 - 03:12 pm · For: Chapter 15
Okay. It's official. I hate Kayane. He's a perv.
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 07/05/12 - 01:54 am · For: Not really a chapter
Thanks for the cheat sheet, it makes it alot less confusing.
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 07/05/12 - 01:52 am · For: Chapter 14
Oh boy I knew Kayane was a evil good for nothing. What did he do?
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 07/05/12 - 01:50 am · For: Chapter 13
For a second, when Hizashi touched Yumi's head, I thought he recognized him. Its too bad he didn't. Yumi. Is. Adorable. I know I probably said that like 50 times no but it's true. And I love how Kazume treats him like a little brother. It's so cute.
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 07/05/12 - 01:46 am · For: Chapter 12
Yumi is just so cute and sweet I wanna snuggle and hug and kiss him. Aww. Kitsune is sweet too. I love your story, never stop writing.
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 07/05/12 - 01:44 am · For: Chapter 11
oops I forgot to put my numbers. No Im not a different person.
Name: hinata (Anonymous) · Date: 07/05/12 - 01:43 am · For: Chapter 11
I was wondering what happened to Naruto...So does that mean Lee and Akamaru are safe too?
I shall read onward.
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 07/05/12 - 01:41 am · For: Chapter 10
I already can tell...I'm going to hate Kayane. A LOT.
Hizashi your son is right there are you blind- oh wait....um...never mind.
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 07/05/12 - 01:38 am · For: Chapter 9
Puppet and Yumi are just too adorable. And I just love Kitsune and Koronowae's personalities.
Poor Hizashi. Not knowing little Yumi is his baby! I feel so bad for him.
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 07/05/12 - 01:35 am · For: Chapter 8
I would hate to have to do those crazy children's hair. They are way too hyperactive. lol.(I wonder if I'll be able to finish all 25 chapters before school)
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 07/05/12 - 01:22 am · For: Chapter 7
I love how you write. Characters, plot and all. You truly are amazing.
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 07/05/12 - 12:58 am · For: Chapter 6
Can you explain something to me? How old are the Puppet, Yumi, Shoji, and Neko mentally?
And how good can Hizashi see, since he is almost completely blind?
Name: hinata123 (Anonymous) · Date: 07/05/12 - 12:49 am · For: Chapter 5
I feel so bad for not reviewing for so long. Im so sorry. Yumi is just too adorable. Nice chapter.
Name: Lexi (Anonymous) · Date: 14/04/12 - 09:39 am · For: Chapter 25
Oh. My. God. You updated...I thought you had abandon the story.
So...Kiba is back to normal? For good? Or...what?
Yumi is just too adorable and sweet. I don't thinkI want him to turn back...
Uh...Update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm working on the next chappie :)
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 13/04/12 - 12:16 am · For: Chapter 4
I find myself speechless on what to comment on in this chapter. I feel no need to repeat what I’ve already enjoyed in the chapter for what I have enjoyed is the same as before, so I’m at impasse to what else I can comment on… I suppose I can say, I find it very interesting in a disturbed manner that though I know these are in fact genin/chuunin that are in their preteens or teens but, have the power urge to regard them as small children. It’s perplexing to why that feels so but, I figure it’s because of their mannerisms and such is why I feel so. I like the owner of the household and his genuine caring nature though his disregard for the process that made these kids basically act like the do is very unsettling. The whole process that was done is like a parallel to how men like treated women before feminism really came into full fruition. They basically removed any chance for a woman being able to survive properly or fairly on their own without the assistance of male counterparts, in this instance it’s the shinobi being ‘brain damaged’ to a toddler-like mind state. It very well reminds me of the patronizing of women in the short story called The Yellow Wallpaper or the novel called Their Eyes Were Watching God. I very well if you haven’t caught on to it yet, hate the very condescending treatment the trainer had done to the genin and chuunin. It is downright wrong and inhumane to do for it removes the children’s ability to freely choose and act as the intelligent beings they were. Mah, I digress, anyway, good job on the chapter and I look forward to reading more.
Sincerely,
CKL
Author's Response: It sounds like you are planning on writing a thesis paper on this :) Thank you my crazy cat loving friend! I think this is the most flattering response I have ever received.
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 12/04/12 - 11:45 pm · For: Chapter 3
*Sigh* my, my, I forgot how much dread I felt in reading this story. I have to say simply the story makes me want to punch something or do something violent to vent my frustration, cringe and scream in despair, run away in sheer panic and fear, and hit my head against a wall repeatedly. It is so powerful in bringing out such emotions and it’s just so…heart wrenching to read. I guess it’s because I have such a strong attachment to the characters already and understand the panic and impending doom the characters feel. They’re trapped rats and there is no way out. I feel anger and loathe to the people that are doing these things for what they think is okay do is wrong. It is so wrong; they remind me of novels that I’ve read like Clockwork Orange or The Giver where people are stripped of what makes them, them, and what makes them freaking human! But, I digress. I like the fact that I feel this way from reading the story, that’s good, that says that you understand how to use words and manipulate the human emotions in everyone to get the desired reactions. I love and hate how the plot is thickening. I love the ideas your using, just don’t like who you’re using them on but, the story wouldn’t be good or in fact no story would be good if bad things didn’t happen to the good guys. Basically I suppose I can just say that the plot is good, the style is still good and I still got the goose bumps for what is coming.
Your faithful reader,
CKL
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 12/04/12 - 10:36 pm · For: Chapter 2
My, it’s interesting to rereading what happens in this story. I really like how you go into depth on the background stories with the characters, it really makes them come to life and become relatable and attachable to. I also like that you allow them to express their inner feelings, clearly any military trained people have been trained to be… withholding on their expression on emotions but, to really see what makes them who they are is a real treat and helps people understand them better. I have to say if the situation was different the captor man wouldn’t seem so creepy and weird. His approach is logically understandable and kind hearted but, the way and the situation it is being performed makes it wonderfully awkward and uncomfortable for the reader and the afflicted. I absolutely like how the man is getting under the character’s skin and getting them to open up about their issues when normally they wouldn’t be so generous in doing so. It shows the human psychology that is at work and it’s truly interesting to always see how people interact and react in situations. I find your writing style and technique overall very satisfying in reading and still crinkle my nose in anticipation, I read on.
Sincerely,
CKL
Name: crazykittylover (Signed) · Date: 12/04/12 - 10:07 pm · For: Chapter 1
It’s been a while since I read this series. I’ve been so preoccupied with school that it’s actually been a few years since I’ve been on. A lot has happened during that time and I feel that it will be no good if I just review the most recent of chapters you’ve posted for I feel so out of touch to what is occurring in the fiction, so I’ve decided to going to start over and review from the beginning to the end.
Moving on, the way you begin your tell is still as attention grapping as it was before. I like how you did stick to the character’s canon personality and how you introduce the ‘villains’ of the work. The antagonists so to speak if you will. I love the fact that the conflict is so vague right here but still helps foreshadow in the conflict of the story; you don’t know what these men after and you feel a wrenching feeling in your gut that says that something bad is going down, something really horrifying is going to occur to our young fellows, but you don’t know quite yet what it will be. That’s what makes a good hook that will keep your readers secured for the overhaul, the story anyway. I found humor behind Kankuro’s attempt to fight back, the ideology he had that I’m supposing was that ‘if I’m going down, then I’m going down swinging’ and ‘if I’m going to go out, might as well take one with me’. Very likable in a character’s personality, it allows the character seem down to earth and relatable so to speak. All parts of the chapter work wonderfully together basically, is what I have to say here.
Now, I’m aware of what occurs in the story from here but, if I didn’t have that knowledge so to speak then I would say the diction you used for the antagonists was very interesting and superb, it’s what stuck out the most for me for it was the key to making the story unique in a sense to me, for it makes the reader go and think, ‘what is going on…’ and make them want more. Overall I like how you started and can’t wait to read the next chapter.
Sincerely,
CKL
Name: lolaskitskit (Anonymous) · Date: 12/04/12 - 07:22 pm · For: Chapter 25
Oh Me too! I want to read more Puppet and Yumi. They are so adorable!!! And that scene with Yumi and his daddy...Too cute! Thanks for updating!
Author's Response: I swear I will try to keep up with this... I just got so caught up with college and work and stuff, I forgot to do something fun :)
Name: mangagranatcat (Signed) · Date: 12/04/12 - 01:43 am · For: Chapter 25
Wow. First I thought i must be dreaming. An update. It was over a year. Great but short chapter. But Iam lucky that Kayane is gone. And kiba is his reall self agin. I hope it for the other to. But Puppet and Yumi are so cute. I would like to read more from them. (i forgott to sign in.)
Author's Response: I know, I'm sooooooooo sorry!!!! I will be better about it, yes I will I will I will!