Reviews For Pets
Name: rita_chi (Signed) · Date: 15/06/08 - 09:14 am · For: Chapter 9
I love this story!
Kankurou and Neji are just the cutest. They are Puppet and Yumi.. right? xD
Ahh! Hizashi was so close and he didn't recognize his son? Nuuu... Must be because of the make up. xD
Yumi's so adorable. Poor him, he has lost so much weight... But Puppet will be there for him. xD
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
Author's Response: Yay! You are correct, Kankurou and Neji are Puppet and Yumi, I am struggling through exams (the Highschool gets out before I do!) and am right now distracting myself from a ten page paper about the second amendment:P I would rather be writing the next chappie... Anyways, *cookies!* Have some cookies while you wait :)
Name: kurisuchin45556 (Signed) · Date: 29/04/08 - 01:11 pm · For: Chapter 8
geisha night? omg... that'll be interesting.
Author's Response: Fun fun fun! I'm trying to get the intro into something that doesn't sound well... as lame as it sounds like right now... So hold tight *cookies* have a cookie! I'll try to get it out as soon as I can with my classes and work! Thank you for your review!
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 06/04/08 - 11:32 am · For: Chapter 7
*dies* I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm the type to try to predict what will happen next but I can't seem to figure out how they'll be saved. Ugh. x_x
Author's Response: Sorry that I didn't react sooner! Keep having fun with this, it will be more forshadowed in the chapter after the next... I think... I never really know where my little voices in my head will take me... Oh wait I'm not supposed to let others know that... :D ANYWAYS keep reading and reviewing, and I'll give you cookies :)
Name: Cor (Anonymous) · Date: 22/03/08 - 03:28 pm · For: Chapter 1
Lol You're like the energizer bunny then xDD You just keep goin and goin pfff xD
But yeah its reaaaally good for the first chapter now to the next one for me :D
Author's Response: Energizer bunny? I kinda wish... Then maybe I could keep up with the two jobs, full time at school, family, my stories... But unfortunately, sleep is necessary... Curses... I hope you keep reading though, I should keep churning out some chappies, next one should be out as soon as I revise and get my poor beta to read it over. I feel so bad for him, I'm so unreliable when it comes to my chapters! :P Enjoy! Keep reviewing!
Name: kurisuchin45556 (Signed) · Date: 13/02/08 - 06:54 am · For: Chapter 7
Cool, I like this story a lot.
Author's Response: Yay! You likey! I will hopefully be quick with getting out the next chapter. Loves!
Name: AnneLea (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 - 07:59 pm · For: Chapter 7
I feel so bad for shino.
Author's Response: That's kinda the point of this chapter... It kinda gets worse before it gets better. Keep reading, I'll try to keep writing! I might be able to get another chapter out on my birthday, I hope :)
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 04/01/08 - 02:17 pm · For: Chapter 6
*cries* Poor Shino. Can't wait for your next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm a workin on it... It's hard to remain focused during the holidays, though I should have more time since I have only one online course in stead of two, and two on campus instead of one :) Happy happy! More time! Thank you for reviewing!
Name: Tyra (Anonymous) · Date: 21/12/07 - 06:57 am · For: Chapter 6
''Yumi hunny doll, it's alright, Yumi..''
Awwh. I love Kankuro and Neji.. (Well, actually Puppet and Yumi..)
I have been waiting for this update!
This story is awesome! Really great!
Poor Hizashi.. Almost blind and doesn't know that his son is actually right beside him (Almost, at least)
Ahh, and Shino has a brother? So cool! I hope they all get away from there sometime.
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
I love this story!
Author's Response: We'll have to see where my muse takes me with this. Yeah, Shino has a clichéd long lost brother... It works, kinda, I already threw in some long lost Uchiha's, Hyuugas, why not an Aburame? It's fun:) Thank you for reading and leaving such a nice review!
Name: Hyuuga Akenai (Signed) · Date: 20/12/07 - 04:30 pm · For: Chapter 6
Excellent chapter. I love Shino
Author's Response: I was hoping to get a little bit more in-depth of why they didn't just blast their way out of the kennel, Shino lead the way:) He's an awesome character, I hope I got his reactions right :) Thank you for reading!
Name: Hyuuga Akenai (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 - 07:19 pm · For: Chapter 5
What a charming story. The idea behind this intrigues me. More soon?
Author's Response: I think I fell asleep at the computer for the past two weeks... I'm polishing up a chappie to send to my Beta, who I hope remembers that they said they would be my Beta (it's been that long) and it should be out soon. Actually, I should really be doing that right now.rn Yay intrigue! I think I found my new favorite word. Sorry for all the delays, my courses are a little bit tougher than I originally thought, but now that I've caught up I should be able to get to enjoy myself a little again :) Thank you for reading and I hope this continues to interest you!
Name: Hatake Kyuuki (Signed) · Date: 31/10/07 - 02:00 pm · For: Chapter 1
Im responding to the response I received from recita1717 to my review.
If I made you think you werent clear on the fact that the group couldnt fight, Id like to tell you you were clear. I just wanted to put in the fact that Id like to bite the kidnappers for...well, kidnapping my fav characters!
'Kay? ^^;
Soooooorry!
Kyuu
Author's Response: Oh thank the writting gods! I am sooooo scatterbrained, that every review is like a little nugget of information to me to look at and change some of what I do because of. If people are picking it apart and finding little things I throw in there, I'm happy, and I'm happy that you are enjoying it. I did explain it a little further in the next chapter I'm typing, but my router is hating me right now and won't let me log on to the internet with my laptop. This dinosaur I'm responding on makes me want to cry, because I can't see the left most side of the screen... :...( Don't be sorry, be fuzzy! You can't help but make funny noises when you're fuzzy! And funny noises make people laugh, and then you laugh, and then it's all good :)
Name: Hatake Kyuuki (Signed) · Date: 28/10/07 - 04:31 pm · For: Chapter 5
First thing I'd like to say is that i only just got around to reading this story so far TODAY.
Second, I seriously cried when they altered their minds, especially making them scared of their FAVORITE things! I mean KIBA (I refuse to utter Neko in referal to him) is NOT afraid of DOGS!
Third, I cried for a good many minutes when Shino recognized the quad. And his CONDITION!
All I have to say is that this really better have a GOOD ending (Where memories are BACK), or Im seriously going to end up in a horrified and sickly sad fetal postion in my basement.
I LOVE your story, though, dont get me wrong! I absolutely adore all the ninja in your story (Kiba and Akamaru, Neji, Kankuro, Shikamaru, Shino, Lee and Naruto). Take care of them!
PS. Please tell me Akamaru isnt dead!
PPS. Id have been a viscious prisoner, Id bite them, hard. Especially to protect the others!
PPPS. Please continue as soon as possible, or else I might end up with nightmares.
PPPPS. Sorry for being a little pessimistic...And for all the post scripts. ^^
Author's Response: It's all good. I can't give away any of the endings though. It does have a lot of what you hope to happen though! Right now, my main computer hates me, and this is a friends, so I've hit a wall when it comes to getting the next chapter out. I was almost done with it too! It adds more depth, and some hope for Neji! If you think it's too good to be true, it isn't, when it comes to the next chappie... once I get it out... Yeah. In case you couldn't tell, and if you couldn't then *I* didn't make it clear enough, Kankurou was, but he had been defeated to many times to even grumble at being carried into the room, just sat their pouting. They didn't really have the strength to battle, I think I'll have to make that a little clearer... REVISION! Thank you :)
Name: Brittany (Anonymous) · Date: 14/10/07 - 08:30 am · For: Chapter 5
This is a really good story. I can't wait to see how it all turns out.
Author's Response: Thank you! Once I get some time, I'll write some more. Delays are a drag. Keep looking me up though! Please?
Name: Flare (Anonymous) · Date: 12/10/07 - 08:46 pm · For: Chapter 4
Befor I read chapter five, I want to let you know I am scared.
Author's Response: That is probably a good thing. Be afraid, be very afraid! Yay I'm scaring someone! But I hope it's a good scared, like going on a roller coaster scared, and not a "get me the _____ out of here!" scared. Please let me know what's on your mind! Thank you.
Name: Lt_Death (Anonymous) · Date: 11/10/07 - 12:41 pm · For: Chapter 5
Yea I have a knack for picking apart stories, in fact I've throughly thought out fanfiction but never got around to writing it. However now i've started. Back to the story... Great chapter, but a little overboard on all of the new characters. I can't wait to see how an alert Shino reacts to his former fellow shinobi. I just noticed a few spelling mistakes (need a beta reader?, I'll be happy to accept) but overall great story. I chek this every day to see if it's updated!!! Chapter six can not come soon enough!!
Author's Response: I would love a beta reader, I was in a rush to get this out because there was a long pause between the chapters and last night was the only time I had to actually think about it! How would you like to receive drafts for revising?
Name: Lt_Death (Anonymous) · Date: 09/10/07 - 06:46 pm · For: Chapter 4
Very good, and also disturbing. I never thought you would put in the pairing Old creepy man X Puppet(Kankuro). Is Kazume naruto, or atleast have naruto like qualities? Since Neko(Kiba) is afriad of dogs, Yumi(Neji) is afriad of Ninjas, and Shoji(Shikamaru) is afriad of shadows, is Shino afriad of bugs now? Will Shino help to undo the damage because he recognized Kiba? I have so many questions, and your next chapter will give me more questions than answers. Please keep updating, I need to know how the story ends!!!
Author's Response: Bwahahahahaaaa! *cough cough* I need to get that checked... Anyways! I hate giving away things, but no, Shino is still Shino, note how he recognized Yumi for Neji? You really have looked at all the little nooks and crannies of this story! Kazume is... you'll see in the next chapter. I should have that up later tonight, I hope! I need to proof it still. Anyways, I'm happy that you have really studied this so well, it's great! I loves it! Keep reviewing! It makes me happy :)
Name: Lt_Death (Anonymous) · Date: 08/10/07 - 02:04 pm · For: Chapter 1
It's so wierd how it keeps you in the dark, but that also intrests me. I want to find out what happens next, and what happened to Lee, Naruto, Akemaru. Please keep updating!
Author's Response: I hit a little bit of a slump, and being two weeks behind in my college work also kind of adds to it. I'm moving on though! Adding way to many characters I think... But oh well, they're all important to the story line! If I can find it again... I know I put it down around here somewhere... *Looks around desk...* Hoshi! Give it back! *Chases after ninja deer, calls over shoulder* Thank you for reading I hope you continue I'll update as soon as I can bye HOSHI!!!!
Name: 23shinofang23 (Anonymous) · Date: 27/09/07 - 12:16 pm · For: Chapter 4
omg plz more!!!!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm working on it, but classes are really kicking my butticus... But soon! Soon...
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 23/09/07 - 07:03 pm · For: Chapter 4
Yup. Neji is deffinitly creepy. XD :( No Shino yet? *sigh* Oh well. I'm really starting to become addicted to this story. Up date soon! (Shoji? You used Shogi earlyer I think but now you keep using Shoji. Not important but I was a bit confused for a bit. I'm slow don't worry about it.)
Author's Response: It's a little confusing, because there's neko=cat and Neko=Kiba (which trips up Hiroko :P) and then there's shoji=the game and Shoji=Shikamaru. If I did spell it Shogi, oops! I'll have to find that and correct it, unless I've been spelling it wrong Shoji. I looked up shoji and google said I had it right o.O I dunno... Shino is coming around! I'm working on getting to him! I think I'll to a name key at the beginning of the next chapter, thank you for alerting me to confusions!
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 23/09/07 - 06:22 pm · For: Chapter 3
O_O *cries hysterically* NOOOO!!! (Cutesy Neji is REALLY creepy for somereason. XD)
Author's Response: It get's worse before it gets better. It's supposed to be creepy, because Neji isn't... cutesy... So yeah, I probably should have put it under "horror" to huh? lol. Keep reviewing! It makes me happy!
Name: Gabby (Anonymous) · Date: 17/09/07 - 04:44 pm · For: Chapter 1
i like it you have to keep going
Author's Response: Aw. Thank you! I loves reviews!
Name: Cherished (Signed) · Date: 16/09/07 - 12:45 am · For: Chapter 3
???????? what'd they do to them and do they get there memories back? i like how the stories going sugar, but i'm uh....just a little confused! sorry! it's a good fic'!
Author's Response: Yeah... I know, it's going to go even sweeter. But that's just it, I don't want you to know exactly what's going to happen *rubs hands together evily* You just have to keep reading and reviewing... Muwahahahaha ha ha hack hack cough cough... Okay I can't do the evil voice for long because it cracks... But please keep reading! Thank you for the encouragement to get to something that explains a little more of what happened.
Name: kc (Anonymous) · Date: 13/09/07 - 06:44 pm · For: Chapter 2
cute
Author's Response: Sarcasm? I hope not! It's so hard to read people over the internet! Anyways, loves for leaving a review!
Name: Nyx (Anonymous) · Date: 11/09/07 - 10:55 am · For: Chapter 1
interesting, I'd keep reading if you kept writing. 7 because it's too early in the story for anything higher and I want to know more.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I don't look at ratings for anything, so... I loves reviews instead. It keeps me going. I hope to work on it more once I get done with my class work :( I hate class work! Anyways, I hope that you continue to find the story interesting!
Name: Flare (Anonymous) · Date: 08/09/07 - 02:42 pm · For: Chapter 1
More!! It sounds good so far!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope that this continues to make you happy!