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Reviews For Crimson Tears

Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 21/04/08 - 07:17 pm · For: Chapter 22: An Odd Sensation
OFF TOPIC:

ey long time no talk xD whats up? anyway, i have decided to write my own fan fiction, it would be really kool if you check it out when i put the first chapter up, and im gonna try to put it up on fan fiction.net, once i larn how to, if you want ill ley you know when i put it up, that would br kool, if we read eachother stories xD

Author's Response: defenently, that sounds great!!! i havent been on because i lost my internet acess, my friends are hackers and they got a code here at school so that i can write this ^_^


Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 07/04/08 - 07:11 pm · For: Chapter 22: An Odd Sensation
i am completly opposite from you. hmm, just like hinata too nauto.
anyway, i like to take things nice and slow, but like you i can be random A LOT! i do what i want to, you know how 18 year olds can be. MUHAHAHAHAHA! anyway, nice to get to know ya^_^

sorry, for turning your story into a discussion topic xD

Author's Response: Lol Nice getting to know you too!! We differ slightly however cause I'm only sixteen ^_^ But I'm getting there!!! I gotta wait till February again to turn 17! And its okay about my story, LOL


Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 07/04/08 - 04:44 pm · For: Chapter 22: An Odd Sensation
off topic from story:

ya, im a guy xD i used your gonernment name because i dont know your real name -_- anyway, im a guy who loves the couple of naruto and hinata and i act differently than most guy's, how bout you?

Author's Response: Really!!!??? Thats kinda funny since this whole time I've thought you were a girl! Sorry =^_^= I'm completely different from other girls! I'm extremely random and energetic, as well as social and independent! I do what i want when i want!!! ^_^


Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 07/04/08 - 07:58 am · For: Chapter 22: An Odd Sensation
off topic from the story:

take your time writing the story, get better ideas that way. " no homo" ? what gender do you think i am? yeah, stupid question i guess, huh red ninja vixen?

Author's Response: LOL nope I didn't know what gender you were...I'm assuming Guy though right??? LOL Why you gotta say my government name ^_^??? Anywerez, I'm a girl and I usually say no homo to both genders XD


Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 01/04/08 - 09:31 am · For: Chapter 22: An Odd Sensation
hmm, so hinata is a fine piece of art in deidara's eyes, hope he doesnt try to blow her up. wow, hinata saw the sharigan, cool. and she knows why naruto cant leave, good addition.

Author's Response: lol! blow her uprnYur sillyrnyeppers she saw the sharingan and understands why Naruto cannot leave! Thank you very much!!! I have a lot of games coming up this week meaning serious writers block!!! But I'll update friday for sure if not earlier or later!! luv ya! No homo


Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 31/03/08 - 08:54 am · For: Chapter 22: An Odd Sensation
i couldnt help myself but read what you added^_^ but i was a little confused where i left off XD hmm, i think you changed the whole thing around a bit. ANYWAY, yay Deidara and Tobi!!!!! i laughed hard when tobi said "hi" to sakura and hinata and they screamed xD so naruto is going to become pein's apprantice, sakura is still jealous, konan is still acting like a mother(yay) so many things going on, great addution!

Author's Response: LOl! Thats a compliment! ^_^ thank you! Yeah before when I put the chapter up I had thousands of thoughts racing in my head so I just threw them all down and decided to edit it later. When I finally got all my thoughts together I...well like you said I changed the whole thing...Except for the dream cause you said you liked it ^_^****I had fun with Tobi because hes so funny to me when hes not in Madara mode! Yes Naruto will be Peins apprentince, Sakura is indeed jealous, and yup Konan is his adoptive mommy. Notice that Konan was in a bad mood...(hint) Thanks very much!!!! Sorry it took so long too I'll be finishing later today!!!


Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 23/03/08 - 10:26 am · For: Chapter 22: An Odd Sensation
i liked the dream sequence^_^ but when did sakura come into the picture? did i miss something from the last chapter? did you ad on something? hmmm, pein tryed to kill hinata?! so many things going on O-o my head hurts -_- anyway, loved the chapter, and happy easter if you celebrate.

Author's Response: indeed i do celebrate easter, thanks and happy easter to you too!!!rnI'm not done with this chapter in the least, i suggest you don't read it until it says DONE! at the beginning of the chapter. I'll be done soon though!!!


Name: Red Ninja Vixen (Signed) · Date: 22/03/08 - 04:24 pm · For: Chapter 21: The Real Thing
awwwwww, sooooooo cute...I luv the end of this chapter!!!! ^_^

Author's Response: I Know right!!! luv it too!!! LMAO


Name: Inner Hinata (Signed) · Date: 22/03/08 - 04:15 pm · For: Chapter 20: Chase
"Silly bitch, such weak attacks can't harm me."
"What!"***Not cuter than me," Karin quipped.
"Your not cute at all."***
Suigetsu and
Karin are priceless! Poor sasuke!

Author's Response: yae, i had a lotta fun with them. They make me laugh in the manga


Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 22/03/08 - 03:38 pm · For: Chapter 21: The Real Thing
wow, sasuke interogated sakura?! suigestu hit her like 20 times?! what the. . .heck. i was surprised there, i thought he was just going to help them and leave. anyway, i wonder how hinata found naruto, why was konan cool with her presence? hmm, so many questions^_^ great addition.

Author's Response: indeed. Suigetsu is funny. Hinata didn't remember everything, you'll hear the rest when Sakura wakes up. Be patient favorite reviewer!!! You'll find out the answer to the rest of your questions later as well. I guess you haven't noticed but Konan doesn't like Naruto, she likes Pein. She's fascinated with Narutos twisted love life and his contrasting attitude to the rest of the Akatsuki, but she doesn't like him. LOL yur funny when yur confused thanks for reviewing


Name: Inner Hinata (Signed) · Date: 22/03/08 - 02:57 pm · For: Chapter 21: The Real Thing
whats Sakura going to do when she wakes up and finds Naruto and Hinata in bed together?!!!!!

Author's Response: lol, wouldn't you like to know cousin???


Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 21/03/08 - 03:15 pm · For: Chapter 21: The Real Thing
i really like the way konan is acting towards naruto, just like a mother. o and the oragami what was it again.......um......o.....naruto, sakura, hinata right? but i thought they were with sasuke. ok now im confused, cant wait for either the addition to te chapter or a new chapter, great job. and you made me blush when you said i was your favorite reviewer, likewise your my favorite writer^_^

Author's Response: yes thats what the origami thingy is. Yup, they were with Sasuke, I haven't written it yet but Sasuke has left with team snake now and Konan and pein did send them to the same hotel as Naruto in Amegakure. yes ill be adding to this chapter...a lot. sorry to make you blush.....^____^


Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 21/03/08 - 03:14 pm · For: Chapter 21: The Real Thing
i really like the way konan is acting towards naruto, just like a mother. o and the oragami what was it again.......um......o.....naruto, sakura, hinata right? but i thought they were with sasuke. ok now im confused, cant wait for either the addition to te chapter or a new chapter, great job. and you made me blush when you said i was your favorite reviewer, likewise your my favorite writer^_^

Author's Response: thank you...konan is such a sweet heart


Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 20/03/08 - 10:59 pm · For: Chapter 20: Chase
loved it. liked how you made sakura look in this chapter, and not be head over heels with sasuke. this is getting really good, i dont know whhy but i got a little condused during the fight scene where everyonw was appering, anbu, pein etc. i lost track it was so fast, but it is done and there is going to be a new chapter^_^ cant wait, maybe sasuke will help to find naruto, and maybe even go one on one, o and does sasuke like hinata?! they he held, PLEASE tell me it is still naruxhina! great addition!!!!

Author's Response: woah! lotta comments here! well thank you very much for all yur compliments, once again yur my favorite reviewer. If theres going to be a love triangle i have to give both girls props, so of Course, Sakura was very pretty in this chapter. ^_^ in the fight scene, while team Sasuke was being quiet and listening to the Anbu and Neji approach, they witnessed Pein and Konan beat all of them up, then Neji and the Anbu fell beside them. ill go through it and fix it more to make it more understandable. Maybe Sasuke will....hmmm... Nope, Sasuke does not like Hinata but he does care about her since she always seemed like such a fragile girl to him, seeing her hurt, yet with the files, made him really respect her.Always naruxhina ^________^ luv ya and thanks!!!!


Name: Adam (Anonymous) · Date: 19/03/08 - 05:02 pm · For: Chapter 20: Chase
You have one of the best fanfics in all of existance. People should start worshiping you and throw flowers at your feet. I hope you continue writing for a long time.

Author's Response: awww! thank you so much! what a compliment! I definitely will and just so you know the chapter with Sasuke is under sever reconstruction! i will be finishing it today however! luv ya!


Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 13/03/08 - 09:26 pm · For: Chapter 20: Chase
sasuke huh?. . . . . . o boy this isnt going to be pleasent. heh, it sounded like sasuke was concerned about those two, really a lot, cant wait, but u say it isnt done i thought u would add on to the chapter, y did u start a new one?

Author's Response: told you he'd be there ^_^perhaps he was concerned...I only had, literally, a sentence left to finish that chapter so I did and started the next one. I'm not done with Sasukes chapter


Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 13/03/08 - 04:40 pm · For: Chapter 19: Escape and Lightening Struck.
. . . . .wow. . . . . . intense and sad chapter. i dont know what to say, just hope te next part comes out soon.

Author's Response: AWWWWWWWWWWWWW don't worry it will be soon but not today too much homework, look for it Friday night!! ^_^


Name: Adam (Anonymous) · Date: 12/03/08 - 07:30 pm · For: Chapter 19: Escape and Lightening Struck.
I love your story. You have my 5 fav. charachters and it's great!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep reading!!!!!!!!! by the way...who are your five favorites???rnKonan, Pein,naruto, sakura, and hinata???


Name: Adam (Anonymous) · Date: 10/03/08 - 05:03 pm · For: Chapter 18:She's Truly Learned Nothing...
Cliff hanger of evil. grrrrrr.
Just kidding. Love the story.

Author's Response: PLOL( PIMP LAUGHIN OUT LOUD) *even though I'm a girl*rnYour crazy! ^_^ The cliff hangers are great though! Thanks for the review and compliment combination!!!!!


Name: naruxhina (Anonymous) · Date: 09/03/08 - 04:51 pm · For: Chapter 18:She's Truly Learned Nothing...
extraction of jinchuuriki?! man, pein must favor naruto A LOT for him not to be extracted himself. i wonder whats going to happen. this is getting to interesting and i cant wait to see what sakura and hinata is going to do, u rock at this!^_^

Author's Response: thanks a mill!!!!!rnThey have to extract Naruto last because his demon is the strongest, hes probably next after this guyrnLOL rnThanks for the compliments!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Name: lana lana lana (Anonymous) · Date: 07/03/08 - 11:12 pm · For: Chapter 16: Pursuit of Sanity
wow

Author's Response: indeed


Name: lana lana lana (Anonymous) · Date: 07/03/08 - 07:55 pm · For: Chapter 15: Speak To Me
o yea i havnt complemented you in a while about your writtings and im ssssssssssoooooooooooo sary! UR DOING FABULOUS!!!!!!! and ur the BEST!(that's a true fact, im not just playing)

Author's Response: thanks cuzzo! its perfectly fine! i appreciate all you do!


Name: lana lana lana (Anonymous) · Date: 07/03/08 - 07:53 pm · For: Chapter 15: Speak To Me
its ok cuz, i luv u to .....but i kind of feel bad for naruto...but then again i dnt cause now i think pein and konan are going to be his friends! but then again you r the writter and i still got som to read..........guess what cuz..............well......well..........well.........well well well.........u guessing............well...ok!!1 MY B-DAY IS THIS SATURDAY/2MAROW AND I'M TURNING 14!!! im getting older, even though ur older, but wat eva just wanted to tell you and ima keep reading cause this is getting interesting!!!!!1

Author's Response: LMAO!!! Really!!! Happy Birthday cuzzo!!!! since its twelve out there right now!! I luvs you and have a great b-day!!!!!!!!!!!!! don't worry Naruto will be fine for a little bit and Pein still doesnt like him


Name: kurisuchin45556 (Signed) · Date: 07/03/08 - 07:35 pm · For: Chapter 18:She's Truly Learned Nothing...
ohhhhhh, that's interesting, very interesting. (hehe, now I sound like Pein-sama)

Author's Response: thank you! LOL Whay u like Pein now???


Name: lana lana lana (Anonymous) · Date: 07/03/08 - 05:59 pm · For: Chapter 14: Two Kunoichi, One Shinobi
WWWWWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Um stylji i have no coments!!!!!!!!!!:p but YYYYYYY

Author's Response: sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!I love you cousin!!!! I had to keep the plot going, Naruto is just realizing he has feelings for Hinata and hes just realizing He may be a rebound to Sasuke so hes still pensive


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