Reviews For 'Plans of Hebi'
Name: coolninja90skid (Signed) · Date: 01/05/15 - 11:06 am · For: Chapter 1
hey i enjoyed the story
can i be in it?
Name: Star Princess (Signed) · Date: 12/08/11 - 07:33 pm · For: Chapter 5
This is coming along great! I always love a perverted Sasuke!
Name: KittenKez (Signed) · Date: 23/04/10 - 08:07 am · For: Chapter 5
*Drool* This is amazing and I can't wait for more XD
Name: Cakeat (Signed) · Date: 13/09/09 - 02:20 pm · For: Chapter 1
I just finished reading chapter 5 and I really enjoyed the story so far. Maybe its because I like having Naruto being in a constant state of being kidnapped (by Sasuke...smirk). But aside from being attracted to the characters that are presented in the story, I also admire how the story is written. I like the plot that you have given to this fic and the way you write it emits a maturity that keeps readers interested. Its not the common high school romance, it emphasizes other aspects such as relationship, conflict of interest and much more realistic personality. Its probably due to the way you have written it, since there are hits of comedy in Naruto and Sasuke's relationship but angst is also represented in their relationship since neither have yet to realize that they truly 'love' each other (at lest they haven't said it out loud). I don't know what more to say but I am looking forward to what will happen next and I am very sure that it will be interesting :) I will also be reading the other fics that you have previously written since I am such a fan.
Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 28/08/08 - 02:55 pm · For: Chapter 5
A closet pervert Karin....Mm, makes me like her.
Again, I loved this chapter...especially Sasuke's perverted way of expression while they were going at it, and it just seems...so Sasuke-ish. Why? I don't know why, but maybe he's a closet pervert as well xD THAT would make my life worthwhile. It also makes me happy to see that he cares for Naruto (awwwz!) but he's still a bastard!
-shivers- And...yeah, some awesome smut right there. There's not a lot of good fics on TONFA lately (I go to FF.net for my needs) And I think this is one of the two that I actually look out for....THANK YOU for another great chapter ^^ I enjoyed it thoroughly--just like the first time. -hugs- ~lemon
Author's Response: I'm glad you are really enjoying the story. *takes a bow* I do my best to deliever a higher quality of smut, lol. Chapter 6 is in the works. Thanks for taking the time to read the story and review, really appreciate it. Take care.rnrnhugs backrnlittleolmee
Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 20/07/08 - 09:38 am · For: Chapter 4
*laughs* This was always my favorite chapter! I love the interaction between Karin and Suigetsu. It's just so much fun to read about, so thank you for putting it in there! I also love Juugo, he's supposed to be the big, frightening, tough guy, but I can't help but picture a panda when I think of him. Keeping them in there instead of keeping them in the sidelines is VERY much appreciated by me ;]
The position...I love it...one of my favorites and always good to have with a closet pervert Sasuke. I actually think this is the first fic I'd ever read with it, and it's been on my mind ever since. Very well written and sexy!
Thanks again for another chapter! *luv*
~lemon
Author's Response: Ah thank you so much. I'm glad you have been enjoying it so far. Don't worry those three will continue to be in the story for sometime. Hee, hee got to get as many as possible in right? *flips through Kama Sutra book* Hmm, what's next? Glad you enjoyed the lemon, more to come. Your welcome for the chapter, next one very soon. Hope to hear from you again.
Name: xXxTiNkxXx (Signed) · Date: 17/07/08 - 09:36 pm · For: Chapter 4
yaaaayz!! yu updated!!! =3
haha everytime i hear sasuke mention the commemorative robe i laugh.
awwwwh....the end was actually cute when they were having sex and they both smiled. it made me smile heh heh.
update again so0o0o0o0on!!!
Author's Response: Thanks glad you liked the chapter. Got to love that commemorative robe! See I just can't keep the angst up forever lol.
Name: Gcbella19 (Signed) · Date: 03/07/08 - 12:13 am · For: Chapter 3
hey love the the fic. oh did you relaod this fic, cuz i swear that i had read this before and it was longer
Author's Response: Thanks. Yes this story is being rewritten, I originally had up to ch 8 but after a long bout of illness I was unable to get anymore of the story to develop. I didn't want to not finish this story so I am going back through rewriting every chapter, all the chapters have doubled in size and there are many new developments that were not there before. I had at first thought this story would only be 9 chapters long but now it looks like it will be longer because of the new developments in the story line. I'm glad to hear that you are enjoying the story and I hope you'll continue to read and let me know how you like the new developments and all. Take care and thanks again for taking the time to read and review, really appreciate it. rnlittleolmee
Name: xXxTiNkxXx (Signed) · Date: 29/06/08 - 09:27 am · For: Chapter 1
wo0o0o0o0ow!!! i like it! i look foward to reading more =3
Author's Response: Thanks, ch 4 will be posted soon; will be sent to beta today 07-02-08.
Name: lemonlover (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 - 03:44 pm · For: Chapter 3
I don't know what to say...But I am extremely happy that you're not going to abandon this. It's always been one of favorites and the style is really intriguing. You're writing is really detailed and has a certain...charm to it. It's amazing how well in character you can keep them in and still have them as your own! I love it.
Very well written, sexy...and all around amazing...I really can't describe it!!! Thanks for not forgetting to finish and taking the time to write such a wonderful story! I hope you put up the next chapters soon, because I want to read them again ;] *loves*
~lemon
Author's Response: Thank you for your understanding and continued reading of this story. I'm very glad I didn't just drop this fic too, I have come up with so many new additions to improve the story, can't wait till you guys read them; hope you enjoy them too. Thanks for all your kind words. Ch 4 will be posted soon, ch is going to beta today 7-02-08
Name: KKEYA2008 (Signed) · Date: 27/06/08 - 12:30 pm · For: Chapter 3
Sasuke makes Jiraiya-sama look like a monk......
Is that scientifically possible?!
Lol. Great story ^^ I look forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: Well I'm sure since Jiraiya wasn't putting the moves on him to Naruto, Sasuke would seem worse. LOL! Thank you.
Name: _12Lola34_ (Signed) · Date: 18/09/07 - 02:31 pm · For: Chapter 1
OMFG!!!!!
Love it!
lloovvee Naru and sasu love narusasu!
yeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeey bring on the updates!
awesome and strange ideas there but.....WOW!!!
>_< *Grin*
Author's Response: Glad you have been enjoying the story, new updates on the way.
Name: coolbeans13 (Signed) · Date: 04/09/07 - 11:05 am · For: Chapter 1
It's really, really, really, really, really, really, REALLY good, haha. Updates will cause happiness from everyone...you DO want happiness, dont you? Haha, good job :)
Author's Response: Thanks, yep I shall bring on the updates.
Name: kakashizgirl (Signed) · Date: 01/09/07 - 03:29 pm · For: Chapter 1
Wow! Seems like the excellent beginnings of a very interesting plot. I really like SasuNaru together, they're really hot...and Naruto just has this sweet demeanor against Sasuke's icy cold one. Interesting use of 'medical instruments' too! Yay - smut!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, glad you are enjoying the story.
Name: Heaven_valentine (Signed) · Date: 01/06/07 - 08:12 pm · For: Chapter 2
This was such a good story does Sasuke have hidden feelings for Naruto?
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, glad you have enjoyed the story so far. Does Sasuke have hidden feelings for Naruto? Hmm, how to answer that? Well, I think Sasuke is finding out he feels more than he wants to.
Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 31/05/07 - 12:42 pm · For: Chapter 2
Hehehe...Great job! I so love this story! The first chapter was...*giggles* very good. I love the idea, very creative. With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
Author's Response: thank you so much, glad you are enjoying it so far. Will have another chapter soon.
Name: RamenFox (Signed) · Date: 31/05/07 - 12:35 pm · For: Chapter 2
LOL! Suigetsu is so mean! xD
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I know Suigetsu has some personality huh?
Name: Holy Angel Sakura (Signed) · Date: 28/05/07 - 01:22 pm · For: Chapter 1
O.o
Can't wait....... PLEASE UPDATE SOON. *sqills like a YAOI fangirl* SasuNaru forever!!
Author's Response: LOL, well here you go. Just got chapter 2, hot off the presses for ya. Thanks for reviewing, glad you enjoyed.