Reviews For pokemon meets naruto
Name: fire fox 2000 (Signed) · Date: 29/04/07 - 04:18 pm · For: Chapter 6
ok.... that was lame and lacked plot. you had a lot of spelling mastakes and grama mastakes too that also made the plot hard to follow. use microsoft word when you are writing and use spell check.then copy and paste the text. try to wright it like a book cuse it is easier to follow.try useing names to.
i will try to beta for you if you want
Author's Response: Whats beta?
Name: SakuraxLee (Signed) · Date: 29/04/07 - 03:10 pm · For: Chapter 6
Hmm..
Very nice story so far.
TenTen should have a Bulbasour (sp?)..
And Tobi should have a Sudowoodo.
Author's Response: thank you yes tobi should have a sudowoodo but tenten and a bulbasour i don't know maybe i will do the chapter monday when i get more reviews
Name: Erossennin (Signed) · Date: 29/04/07 - 06:01 am · For: Chapter 4
Oh! Positive point: the title and your new idea.
Name: Erossennin (Signed) · Date: 29/04/07 - 06:00 am · For: Chapter 4
Wild Flower pointed one flaw. I would advise you to stop writing in "chat mode". Drama CDs has actors to put through the characters emotions, but as put in your text, it only gives the reader a headache.
And the regular advice: do not ask for reviews.
Name: Wild_Flower (Signed) · Date: 28/04/07 - 09:42 pm · For: Chapter 4
Your story doesn't have much of a plot and there are a lot of spelling and punctuation errors. I'm just saying, some people don't read stories with a lot of errors.
Author's Response: thank you for the advice
Name: mistyfoxmaid (Signed) · Date: 28/04/07 - 03:47 pm · For: Chapter 3
Your story has to have more adventure and plot. And its all simple battles and dialogue. But its still pretty good.
Author's Response: thanksssssssss alot for the review i will honor you i chapter 4