Reviews For Machination
Name: Satoyuki (Signed) · Date: 24/06/07 - 12:00 am · For: Chapter Eight Part Two
Very nice. Just from reading this story, I can't wait for the next one.
Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 23/06/07 - 06:09 pm · For: Chapter Eight Part Two
*dabs eyes with a tissue* So beautiful and H-O-T! Sorry, but it was. I loved it. So touching. Poor Naru-chan. He doesn't deserve half the things that happened to him. Wonderful job! I really, really, hope you get fifty reviews because I so need the squeal! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
Name: angelgirl555 (Signed) · Date: 20/06/07 - 10:02 am · For: Chapter Eight Part One
Sasuke is so sweet.
Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 19/06/07 - 06:58 pm · For: Chapter Eight Part One
*giggles and feels all warm inside* YAY, everything is working out!!! Sasuke is out of the hospital, Naru-chan is out of jail, Naru-chan is going to live with Sasuke, Gaara will be put in jail, and there is a lemon in the next chapter! *dies of happiness* I can't wait!!! I love this story, it is so good. With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
Name: narubaby (Signed) · Date: 18/06/07 - 07:09 am · For: Chapter Seven Part Two
OMG I WANT TO NO WUT THE F-ING THING IS THAT SASUKE GOT ON GAARA like omg i cant wait i love this story and it keeps on getting better every chapter liek ur are soo talented
Name: Satoyuki (Signed) · Date: 15/06/07 - 09:58 pm · For: Chapter Seven Part Two
Oh, very good chapters. I honestly wonder what Sasuke's evidence of Gaara's existence is. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out, even if I have to fill in the rest of the reviews myself.
Name: Snirp (Signed) · Date: 15/06/07 - 05:40 pm · For: Chapter One Part One
lol bribery can be good sometimes I suppose -_-' well I'm seriously put off! Here I am, sitting at my computer, losing sleep, hoping to see what is to become of dear sasuke and naruto and you leave off at a cliffhanger *sighs* I suppose I’m very excited to see the outcome, so I hope you update soon *clouds of impending doom* fairly soon… ^_^ Great job keep it up.
Name: yaoifan16 (Signed) · Date: 15/06/07 - 05:04 pm · For: Chapter Seven Part Two
i love this story!! ^-^
you are a very talented writer
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Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 15/06/07 - 03:36 pm · For: Chapter Seven Part Two
*bites fingernails again* I need more. Come on, I need more...It is just so real it is almost scary. But if I don't find out what happens...*faints* I hope you get fifty reviews. You deserve much, much more. With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
Name: JustAnotherSoul (Signed) · Date: 15/06/07 - 03:31 pm · For: Chapter Seven Part Two
I REVEIWED! XD
I wonder what the object is. XD.. ugh.
Name: Safira247 (Signed) · Date: 12/06/07 - 07:33 am · For: Chapter Seven Part One
Wow tis a really good story!! I really cannot wait ubtill the next chapter comes out!! hehehe!!!
Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 09/06/07 - 06:29 pm · For: Chapter Seven Part One
NO!!! Not Sasuke! *cries* OMG what a horrible, horrible place to end!! I think it is amazing how you described Gaara's feeling when he killed someone, really awesome. I can't wait for more or for the squeal, call me impatient. With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
Name: JustAnotherSoul (Signed) · Date: 09/06/07 - 04:47 pm · For: Chapter Seven Part One
Beautiful...
XD..
I REALLY love your writing style.
Name: angelgirl555 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/07 - 04:20 pm · For: Chapter Seven Part One
This was a cool chapter and does Sasuke die?!
Name: JustAnotherSoul (Signed) · Date: 04/06/07 - 10:18 pm · For: Chapter Six Part One
YAY! I was wondering what happened to this story.. ^_^
Amazing job. I like the way you write the crime scenes, It's almost like your there yourself. :P.. anyways. 10 outta 10~! XD
Name: sew123093 (Signed) · Date: 03/06/07 - 07:51 pm · For: Chapter Five Part Two
This story is absolutely incredable. I love it. Please right some more. *puppy eyes*
Author's Response: Thank you. ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed it! And please continue to read and review! Thank you, SBP
Name: Seasosassy (Signed) · Date: 02/06/07 - 07:04 pm · For: Chapter Five Part Two
Heya Ao-chan. *huggles.* Loverly story. Ha! See..I review for you, xD So..nice..can't wait to hear Invincible..O_O You best tell me about it.
Author's Response: Sure, sure.... I know you... you only want to because of the smexiness... Well, I tell you that smex doesn't make a story, the story makes the smex!!! Ga! Thank you for reviewing. ^^
Name: littleolmee (Signed) · Date: 26/05/07 - 10:13 am · For: Chapter Five Part Two
This story is so good. Poor Naruto even Sasuke is begining to not believe Garaa is real. Garaa has certainly made it seem like he isn't real. But if they found the blood that would mean that Naruto should have a wound healing right? Didn't they search him for wounds? Wouldn't that prove he didn't kill Sakura being he hadn't been shot or even grazed by a bullet? What about other murders? Garaa just killed another person in the same way he killed the others that should prove Naruto didn't do it if other murders are being committed right? Also if Sasuke thinks he might be Schizophrenic wouldn't he have a doctor examine Naruto? Well can't wait to see what you have in mind next, keep up the good work. Take care.
Author's Response: Because the bullet only grazed Gaara it meant that it had to be stopped by something else, right? So it's embedded in the alley wall. Unless they found the bullet and assessed there was blood and fragments on it by a ballistics expert they wouldn't know it had hit anyone. All they would know is that Sakura fired a shot in the general direction of something and obviously missed. As for the blood-soaked rag, yes, I've had reviewers bite my head off for that. All fanfics have their flaws, right? Eh. Besides, Naruto's been plenty wounded by Gaara's, uh, ministrations. And since the woman was killed in the same way, it'll only point to Naruto being the murderer of ALL the victims. If you're a skitso, you won't even know what's going on if you're in the 'other' state. You'll 'wake up', if you will, with no memory of what you did. That's what Sasuke thinks of Naruto - and yes, the condition is practically unheard of in Japan. There will be a doctor in a later chapter. Well, I hope that answers it all and I'm glad you enjoyed!!!!! Thanks for reviewing! SBP
Name: SappySue (Signed) · Date: 21/05/07 - 01:01 pm · For: Chapter Five Part Two
I enjoyed this chapter alot- PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE- update. ^.^
Name: bandybunny (Anonymous) · Date: 20/05/07 - 09:52 pm · For: Chapter Five Part Two
YAY love the story! omg its soooo interesting...i cant stop reading and i need to study for finals...>,< o well thankies for the read update! ^-^
Author's Response: Ha ha... I wouldn't want to be responsible for making you fail finals.... ^^' But I'm glad you enjoyed it! SBP
Name: SappySue (Signed) · Date: 20/05/07 - 06:20 pm · For: Chapter Four Part Four
Amazing Chapter.
Name: SappySue (Signed) · Date: 20/05/07 - 05:17 pm · For: Chapter One Part One
Guess who's my new favorite author.
Author's Response: Thank you. *Tries to fight off the smug pride* You make me want to update more. ^^ And I will! Hope you enjoyed, SBP
Name: Satoyuki (Signed) · Date: 20/05/07 - 04:33 pm · For: Chapter Five Part Two
Very nice. I love the latest two chapters, and it makes you kinda fear what Gaara has planned.
Author's Response: Yes, well... I guess you'll just have to wait! Glad you enjoyed. SBP
Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 20/05/07 - 04:07 pm · For: Chapter Four Part Three
Aw...Naru-chan is just the cutest, saddest thing in the world! *huggles poor abused blond* He so doesn't deserve this crap, but...it makes an awesome story! I can't wait for the sequel, even though I haven't even finished this...*sweat drop* I'm an idiot like that. Anyway...once again great job! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^
Name: A Vampires Butterfly (Signed) · Date: 20/05/07 - 03:44 pm · For: Chapter Four Part Two
The tension is building *bites fingernails* And Poor Sakura! Figures I like her in a story and then you kill her off! *cries, still biting fingernails nervously* I just can't wait to see what's happens. This is such an awesome story! With much love, A Vampires Butterfly ^.^