Reviews For Forgotten
Name: hinata_is_awsome (Signed) · Date: 30/05/07 - 07:21 pm · For: where am i?
Hi I love your story!*hands cookie* Can we be friends? PLEZZ??? I dont have any friends on here.. :'(
Author's Response: thx. this is my first story so i wasnt sure if it would be very good. i've just been making the story up off the top of my head. and sure we can be friends i dont have any friends on here either
Name: Challa (Signed) · Date: 13/04/07 - 12:22 am · For: Can she be trusted?
You have to work on your grammar a bit. Also put capital letters in the beginning of their sayings, not just whenever there's a name.
I personally think the storyline is a bit weak, but I wanna continue reading this. It's interesting. Good job. :)
Author's Response: thx. i know it is kinda weak but it's my first story. im not very good at writing stories like this. im am pretty good at writing essays though. hopefully the more i write the better the story will be and the better i'll be at writing stories
Name: Challa (Signed) · Date: 12/04/07 - 12:18 am · For: where am i?
I dont know if I like this yet or not. Maybe the next chapter will help me decide. update soon.