Reviews For Hero
Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 22/04/07 - 02:19 pm · For: Hero
Wow, that was awsome. Very moving. I agree on the seaweed comment, so typical for a little girl to make such a mistake. But what really got to me was how Obito could cry through the left eye without Kakashi being able to control it...that was something I was not prepared for but liked very much.
Also you're language and grammar is very good. You're a great writer, definitely.
Name: CheddarTrek (Anonymous) · Date: 20/02/07 - 05:31 pm · For: Hero
Great job!
Very well written. Not only have you done a very nice one shot, but you also have good grammar and structure.
Kudos, and please write more.
The "seaweed" comment was perfect.