Reviews For My Name Is Haruno Sakura
Name: Vixkill (Signed) · Date: 26/02/09 - 05:27 am · For: Blood, Tears, and Really Hot Girls
it is always fun to find one of my most favorite stories updated! the haku part was weird at the start but made more sense at the end.
keep going!
Name: YamanakaTezzie (Signed) · Date: 11/01/09 - 10:07 am · For: Me, Myself, and I
hiyaa love ur work cant wait for the next chapter.
Name: niveaus (Signed) · Date: 05/12/08 - 04:42 am · For: Upheaval in Elysium
I guess I must have missed a chapter - have had lots of work. But it's so good to sit down and read these last two chapters now I have some time, I love going into the world of this fic. Really enjoyable, dialogue and thoughts and angst and everything, and plenty of drama going on now too. I'm anxious about that knife with the dragon she picked up though...
Thank you!
Name: Miki Everless (Signed) · Date: 19/11/08 - 01:02 am · For: Upheaval in Elysium
0o0 WOW.
She finally told someone.
YEAH, AN UPDATE! Great chapter.
Huh.... I don't think I'd be comfortable around my friend if she told me that.... that's just a little too much to handle. Especially for a cutter.
Name: Vixkill (Signed) · Date: 18/11/08 - 12:18 am · For: Upheaval in Elysium
ah, awesome! a great chapter tho the bit with karin is a bit confusing.
keep going please
Name: IrukaLover (Signed) · Date: 23/09/08 - 06:58 pm · For: Turbulence of the Not-Heart
Awesome, an update. I wonder if konnyaku is anywhere near as bizarre as coconut jello. Not bad, but it is undeniably the weirdest texture in existence.
Name: Vixkill (Signed) · Date: 21/09/08 - 05:41 pm · For: Turbulence of the Not-Heart
one thing - "I start to washes my hands off "
yay for update! looking forward to the next chapter and finding out what's up with hinata.
Name: niveaus (Signed) · Date: 28/08/08 - 04:42 pm · For: Tempestuous Days
Very enjoyable, as usual! Congratz on the award, hard-earned and completely deserved. I'm sure competition numbers would not have effected the outcome.
Name: UzumakiScribe (Signed) · Date: 28/08/08 - 01:46 pm · For: Tempestuous Days
This is a great story. I've been reading it for a while now, and it has been one of the best I've read so far. Keep it up, and update soon, please!
Name: nick the pervy punk (Signed) · Date: 27/08/08 - 06:26 pm · For: Tempestuous Days
congradulation on the award, you should be proud
Name: IrukaLover (Signed) · Date: 24/08/08 - 08:07 pm · For: Me, Myself, and I
I am so glad you didn't forget about Tenten, losing a friend is difficult, especially one as close as Tenten was to Sakura, so just forgetting her and moving on would be implausible. I also love how you put those little explaining notes at the bottom. Not surprised you won Best in Catergory
Name: Vixkill (Signed) · Date: 24/08/08 - 06:28 am · For: Tempestuous Days
Congratulations for the award! You definitely deserve it.
Great new chapter, I know I'm enjoying the educational footnotes.
"... or go with your friends?" going (unless it's "Are you going to _go to_ the festival with us," instead)
This is a bit awkward, did you leave a bit out?
“August 14th.”
“Yeah, we’re planning to spend most of..."
"... take the initiative once and a while.”
once in a while
these two bits don't seem to join very well, just drawing your attention in case something was missed...
He makes a noncommittal noise. I take it he doesn’t really care.
“Right,” he says quickly, “Then it’s decided.”
“What so you mean?” do
"... why do none of this stupid bras..." these
“I-I,” her voice in shaky and breathing heavy,
-is shaky and she's breathing heavily ...?
"...the new medication she on,” she is / she's
"... as we walk out of third store." the third
"... to get you to buy from them, so don’t be careful, okay?” - heh. don't be careful! buy lots of crud!
"... coming back to the front with holding a bunch of colorful yukata," with _or_ holding
"What happened to those other one you wore at my party.” that other one
"I take a bus to the outer city limits to the cemetery" to the outer city limits where the cemetery is / a bus to the outer city limits and then (another bus?) to the cemetery.
"... and I fell my face heat up." feel. I almost missed that one
i am so picky. people would probably lord over every mistake if i ever posted a fic...
looking forward to your next chapter!
Name: suzieuchiha (Signed) · Date: 23/08/08 - 01:33 pm · For: Tempestuous Days
haha yay! Sakura is so bad at denying it but she can no longer ignore Ino! wooooo! *cough* anyway great chapter, poor Yoshiko and I just loved the yukata they sounded really pretty ^^
Name: niveaus (Signed) · Date: 25/07/08 - 01:16 pm · For: Lesbians and Drunks II
Great chapter, really funny. Lot's of humour I thought in this one, especially liked the short one-punch sentences like 'just me then' leaving the wedding, and a lot of Sakura and Konohamaru's come-backs. Basically this was the most enjoyable chapter for a while (against some serious competition), probably mostly because of the humour, but the dialogues were good and even so the story moved from scene to scene quite quickly.
I suspected this was a non-drinker's perspective of drunkeness. Not bad at all, but I don't think one usually hallucinates from alcohol - that was the only thing that might have given it away though.
Name: Voodoo (Signed) · Date: 25/07/08 - 07:04 am · For: Lesbians and Drunks II
Hehe, awesome chapter. ^^
I actually laughed out loud at some parts in the fic. I love your sense of humour. XD
Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
Name: suzieuchiha (Signed) · Date: 25/07/08 - 02:25 am · For: Lesbians and Drunks II
Haha brilliant chapter as usual! Found the drunken bit so funny. Is the dead person random or will it come into the story later on? God you must do so much research for this fic, though when it's research on Japan I can understand your motivation, they're just so interesting! Can wait for the next chapter! ^^
Name: Vixkill (Signed) · Date: 24/07/08 - 12:34 am · For: Metaphorical Quagmires
i thought this would be short, but wow! good story, please finish it.
Name: nick the pervy punk (Signed) · Date: 23/07/08 - 02:56 pm · For: Metaphorical Quagmires
hahaha happy birthday and a great success on the chapter bravo please update soon
Name: nick the pervy punk (Signed) · Date: 22/07/08 - 02:46 pm · For: Pitfall
what!!!!!!!!!!!!!! damn. that was a great way to end a chapter. giving us a need or you could call it a craving for the next chapter.
Name: snakebite3 (Signed) · Date: 19/07/08 - 08:01 pm · For: Metaphorical Quagmires
my water heater broke; we have 2 boil water, then put in tub, then add cold water
Name: IrukaLover (Signed) · Date: 15/07/08 - 07:07 pm · For: Me, Myself, and I
I'll admit when I first read the summary I thought 'what a dumb story' and kept right on cruising, but when i saw you had written twenty chapters I figured that if you were diligent enough to write that much the least I could do was read it. I am so glad I did, the story was wonderfully well written. I love the perspective, you have inspired me to try writing stories from the first person, I want to see if I can get into the character I am writing about as well as you have. I was disappointed when I realized there wasn't anymore and I hope and pray you finish the story; it would be a crime not to finish this pristine a story.
Name: niveaus (Signed) · Date: 06/07/08 - 01:26 pm · For: Me, Myself, and I
Loved the Sakura/Konohamaru dialogue and the fact that Sarutobi knew before she did. Am intrigued by the thought of a wedding; Shikamaru and Temari perhaps? I can imagine them not announcing it properly until right before. Overall a very enjoyable chapter!
Name: Pockyplox (Signed) · Date: 03/07/08 - 02:17 pm · For: Metaphorical Quagmires
Happy birthday to you~~~!
Gaaah I can't wait for the next chapter xP
Name: OmgVikiRawr (Signed) · Date: 03/07/08 - 02:06 pm · For: Metaphorical Quagmires
Love it!
Please write more
Oh and Happy Birthdayyy :D xxxxx
Hope you have a goodun ^^
Name: loulou20 (Signed) · Date: 21/06/08 - 08:38 pm · For: Pitfall
oh shit! sasuke baby please please live!!!!! haha i sound like an over obsessive fan girl. haha i'm not by the way...but n/e ways please write another chapter!!!