Reviews For CRIMSON
Name: stylin_crimson (Signed) · Date: 14/06/07 - 12:28 pm · For: Chapter 8: Love Hurts
I didnt read your notes before i read the story. Im sorry
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-- AllieChan : oh its ok hun, Im happy you read it. thanks for the review :) and please keep reading im going to try and keep updateing
Name: stylin_crimson (Signed) · Date: 14/06/07 - 12:27 pm · For: Chapter 8: Love Hurts
Wow. Im glad you updated i was getting depressed.
Name: Nao_angel (Signed) · Date: 11/06/07 - 03:19 am · For: Chapter 8: Love Hurts
ah shit, they arent dreams...oh god, sasu is so screwed...tch, he didn't complaining having the immature naru in bed *twitch* yah, well great chap alex;) and, i'm sorry about what happened with your mum, when was that? yesterday? was it after we talked? you'll be fine at your dad's place...i'm sorry alex, just don't feel bad *hugz*
Author's Response: i would say they are more nightmares, poor sasu, but i feel worse for naruto. Sasuke is just making excuses, he really does love Naruto he just doesnt want tohurt Naruto cause he knows they cant 'be' together, cause he has to leave soon. thanks for the concern, yeah it was yesturday after we talked. it was real horrible...i didnt do anything wrong and she wouldnt stop yelling at me. dont be sorry Nikki, living with dad can be good when he isnrt mad. thanks for reading, always nice to get reviews
Name: Yui (Signed) · Date: 11/06/07 - 12:59 am · For: Chapter 8: Love Hurts
I love this fanfiction! I hope you update as soon as possible ^^
Author's Response: thankyou, its always ood to hear when people say they love it. I wont make promises on when i next update, but next time im feeling good I will.
Name: Mya (Signed) · Date: 10/06/07 - 10:35 pm · For: Chapter 8: Love Hurts
Oh God, I'm sorry Alex, will you be okay? I hope you like staying at your dad's place and don't worry about your mum too much, it happened to me already, and i'm sure she's regretting it right now^^ but anyway, that was a great chapter like always, and I pray you're gonna kill Itachi at the end coz the bastard deserves nothing better...apart from torture maybe. lol. i sound horrible. now poor Naru really...hope everything will be fine for you alex, just take care;)
Author's Response: aww thanks sweetie, im sad to hear that it has happened to you to. But i dont think my mums regretting it, she expects me to say sorry...i didnt do anything wrong... im happy you think my chapters are great, i always suspected that they were sick and twisted haha. Yes Itachi will get whats coming to him dont worry. thanks for the concern, im sure ill get over it.
Name: nellie330 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/07 - 09:35 am · For: Chapter 7: Caught Out
I have to wonder what they will say when they find out that sasuke is goin' to give BIRTH to ITACHI'S kid!
Author's Response: haha, gawdddd its going to be quite a shock I would say, I'm looking forward to writing it. But as for you :) you just have to keep reading and find out. thankyou!
Name: nellie330 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/07 - 09:17 am · For: Chapter 7: Caught Out
I have to wonder what they will say when they find out that sasuke is goin' to give BIRTH to ITACHI'S kid!
Name: Satoyuki (Signed) · Date: 21/05/07 - 08:58 pm · For: Chapter 7: Caught Out
-shudders- Oh, boy, this is bad. Itachi now knows that Sasuke has been 'cheating' on him? Let's all head to a safe house and pray for the best....
Author's Response: haha, yeh it is poor Sasuke!! yes Itachi now knows and hell its gonna be one good chapter to write! cant wait muahahaha all my evilness can come out :)
Name: Nao_angel (Signed) · Date: 21/05/07 - 04:46 am · For: Chapter 7: Caught Out
OMFG that's bad, damn Itachi always here to break the mood GODDAMN HIM!!!! Alex! I loved the chap!! *huggles* haha, i loved the little tournament between both teams, and all the sasunaru parts were hot^^ well i fear Itachi is gonna hurt the dobe now *sigh* and hic hic, when is sasu going to tell Naru about being pregnant??? update soon;) *hugz*
Author's Response: lol well Itachi is great because of it I think! lol i loved this chapter too! Im so happy you continue to read my stoires Nikki! ahh our ones gonna rock! well dw because itachi is actually inside Sasuke's head atm, ahh i should have explained that better, but remember how he visits sasuke through his dreams well yer its that. anyway you will just have to see if Sasuke tells Naruto lol, but i wanna make this story pretty sad i warn u. ill update soon or try lol *hugs*
Name: Mya (Signed) · Date: 18/05/07 - 01:58 pm · For: Chapter 7: Caught Out
it's funny and scary at the same time lol...i really like it;)
errr, what's gonna happen...well i'd say Itachi's gonna rape Naru...bwahahaha...i'm joking;)
Author's Response: Yes! thats what I tried to put across, I wanted some humour seeing as it started off so dark, it sorta made me deppressive when I wrote it lol, so I had to add funny stuff too (although as it goes on it will just get darker and darker) And haha with your prediction your closer on the ball then you think!
Name: Oni_Chan (Signed) · Date: 18/05/07 - 12:53 pm · For: Chapter 7: Caught Out
Asuma is dense <
O.O Ita found 'em.. oh shit...
Author's Response: yhaha yeah but it was cute! I dont think people add Asuma in enough in fics! and yes Ita found them muahahhahaha, its going to be great!
Name: stylin_crimson (Signed) · Date: 18/05/07 - 11:06 am · For: Chapter 7: Caught Out
I love your stories. There so...professional.
Author's Response: lol im happy you love them, but professional XD you flatter me!! thankyou darl! I dont even have a beta haha
Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 18/05/07 - 04:14 am · For: Chapter 7: Caught Out
OMG, picturing that cat fight-scene must've be among the funniest things I've ever done! Shikamaru in a cat fight, now that is priceless. I still love this story, and I adore you for the fact that you make Sasuke want to go slow on the public bit. I just don't think he'd be running head over heals into a public relationship of any kind, and definitely not a gay one. As for what happens next I have no idea, you are just too unpredictable for me to guess. Write more and let me read instead, I'm developing an addiction for this fic. ^.~
Author's Response: OMG! writing the cat fight scene made my day, its wasnt very long but I didnt imagine that it would be! sometimes if you make scenes short they end out better, or thats what I think lol. and yes I didnt think sasuke would be all out about it either, infact he doesnt want people to know about their realtionship, his sorta a reserved guy or thats how I imagine him from the anime. lol and I will deffiantly write more! XD so please keep reading
Name: Sashori (Signed) · Date: 15/05/07 - 03:52 pm · For: Chapter 3: Visit from a madman
I've only gotten to Chapter 3 in the whole fanfic, but this is amazingly written so far. Sure, the whole concept is twisted in thoughts, but the perverse feeling is great. lolollol. I sound like some messed up pedophile. u-u;;;
Anyways, I really hope on reading more of your works~
Author's Response: hahahah i AGREE! The perverse feeling is good, well why else would I write this I wouldnt know lol, but yes it makes me feel a bit perverted everytijme I write it, but people read it so eh I write! I hope you continue to read it!
Name: i_lurve_pocky (Signed) · Date: 13/05/07 - 06:57 pm · For: Chapter 6: Cheating and forgiving
Thsi is the best!!!
Author's Response: why thankyou :) I wouldnt say the best haha, but I think it is very diffrent. XD
Name: secretkitsune (Signed) · Date: 13/05/07 - 06:56 am · For: Chapter 6: Cheating and forgiving
XXXDDD this is the best thing ive read in a llllllllloooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnggggggggggggg time XD (and it gets updated) yeah..i love this so much....i got my friend to read it too....so...>>...
Author's Response: lol awwwww you think so! Im wrapped, ahhh Im getting so much flattering reviews! it makes me wantb to write more! I would have already updated but I just got back from my mothers house. and im sick right now :S ahhhh we will see! I have a page so far.
Name: Mya (Signed) · Date: 12/05/07 - 02:49 am · For: Chapter 6: Cheating and forgiving
I love this fic^^ awesome plot and it screams sex:P incest all the way baby lol, but sasunaru is HOT too;) update soon;)
Author's Response: hahahaha, im happy you love it :) yeah I know so much sex and incest, but eh I guess I like to write disturbing things! I shall try to update as soon as possible!
Name: stylin_crimson (Signed) · Date: 11/05/07 - 11:17 am · For: Chapter 6: Cheating and forgiving
Loving your stories read 4 of them and loved both Ai Shite Imas and Ai Shite Imas:The Birth. Just wondering if you would read my story and review. i think your stories rock!
Author's Response: awwww thanks! you read 4, wow your a fan hey? THANKYOU! you dont know how pleased I am, yes of course I will read your stories!
Name: Landagoshin (Signed) · Date: 07/05/07 - 09:26 pm · For: Chapter 6: Cheating and forgiving
I love you man, I really do, but I have a few problems with this chapter that were really bugging me through its entirety...
You described Naruto and Sasuke's little fight ferociously. I was almost expecting Naruto to just say "screw you Sasuke!" and move out right then and there. But he just storms out. And for such a lash-out from Sasuke, I was a little surprised when the mood of the story went from unbridled anger to the foofy-lu-lu'ness of Sasuke and Sakra. But thennnn you have Naruto throw a shuriken at Sasuke. Now, I can expect Naruto to regret doing that, because he is a softy. But I just don't find the cutesy ending plausible for what Sasuke said to Naruto. Hell, if I was Naruto, I would've thrown another shuriken at the bastard for ripping my heart out.
But I'm going to just keep my little petpeeves to myself for awhile and let things unfold. Because I respect you and your ability to surprise me with near perfection when I'm in doubt of a story. ;D
Thought I had to say something :/
Keep up the good work, I really like the premise of this story!
-Landagoshin
Author's Response: Well I really dont know what to say... I guess you have some points, and Im thankful you are being honest. I wanted to set across the instabability of Sasuke, I guess and that was why his moode swings around alot, as for Naruto well he loved Sasuke and in a way he is more able to forgive Sasuke because he knows about the whole Itachi incident. Yeah I know its all crazy but I'm going to try and describe it better. Im sorry if you didnt like the chapter, Ill try harder next time.
Name: Oni_Chan (Signed) · Date: 07/05/07 - 01:01 pm · For: Chapter 6: Cheating and forgiving
>> Course Sasuke doesnt have issues I mean come on why would he have issues? The fact that HIS BROTHER got HIM PREGNANT nothing to have issues over nope nope course not happens every day >> hehe This chapter was really cute and like how SasUKE goes back to Naru mhm he seems to be very UKE-esque in this story..love it
Author's Response: Yeah exzactly Oni that was what I was thinking, of COURSE he doesnt have issues....lol I feel bad for the guy his emotions are up in the air! oh and yes wasnt it lovely? haha I like the uke Sasuke, I just LOVE IT, lol
Name: invisible_habits (Signed) · Date: 07/05/07 - 04:01 am · For: Chapter 6: Cheating and forgiving
I am so sorry Alex! I totally forgot to save this as a favorite ((cause I'm stupid like that)), thus I didn't read the updates. I love this, it's amazing! The balance of confusion and denial, love and hatred, lust and longing, friendship and...something more...it's gorgeous! This time, I'm definitely adding it to favorites! ^.^
Author's Response: Awwww dont be sorry! Im just happy you read it lol! I'm going to try and update as much as possible now :) I'm so flattered that you would think of this fiction like that! I mean when I started I thought people would think I was sick, but heh thats what makes a story good the drama therefor I had to add it all!
Name: Nao_angel (Signed) · Date: 07/05/07 - 03:52 am · For: Chapter 6: Cheating and forgiving
*nods frantically* yes yes yes it is, i love the ending...HOLY SHIT Alex i need TISSUES!! *nosebleed* wondeful chap, there are too many things that i love! at first i was like "Sasuke YOU WHORE!!" when he kicked Naru out, but then, seeing him struggling becoz of his hormones, lmao, poor him really, who can blame him? he's my whore haha *pats Sasu*...and i freaked out with the shuriken part...and OMG ima start writing down my Alex fav quotes!! the first one will be: "Heat and flesh, sweat and soft sheets, panting and calling of names. Black hair and blonde hair, hands grasping each other, hot breath and fastening of breathing and then ecstasy, pure ecstasy"...OMG i told you you were a genius, i'm so gonna quote you in my fics lol^^ so hot hot hot hot...i'm glad you update fast, keep it up like this;)
Author's Response: :) awww Nikki I'm so happy you liked it! I know I loved the ending :)hahaha yeyyy I made you nosebleed :P and yes I just love making Sasuke seem mean then good then mean lol and you liked that quote XD well why thankyou! that was my poetic side coming out haha I wanted to describe a sex dream memory but in a really nice way and thats how it came out, when I wrote it on word it was all underlined with green haha cause the grammer sucked, but meh art is mistake! Your going to quote me :) awww thanks nikki! and not to worry I will continue the fast updates! :)
Name: Oni_Chan (Signed) · Date: 06/05/07 - 07:37 pm · For: Chapter 5: Unity
Alex! How could you! Omg! Naru no omg *snuggles Naru* Sasu is a bitch >> I swear bitchy lil bitch bitch is the Uchiha...meh runs in the family >>
Author's Response: YOUR BACK ONI-CHAN!!! XD ohh and how could I, :( well you see *sheepish look* I coulds not help myself! I want drama, horror! DEATH! muahahahaha
Name: Nao_angel (Signed) · Date: 05/05/07 - 01:07 am · For: Chapter 5: Unity
flamers? who would dare to give you a flame? naaah they wouldn't know you got me *hisses at everybody* haha, lmao, THIS CHAP WAS AWESOME, i'm soooo going to write a fic with Sasuke UKE, my god, he's beautiful when he's submissive^^ and I loved the kiss that turned into a fuck haha, it really surprised me coz i wasnt expecting sasu to kiss naru at all...but shit, that last sentence freaked me out, you better update soon Aleeeeeeeeeex PWEASE^^ *huggles*
Author's Response: hahaha AWWWW NIKKI XD you would be amazed, I have got flamers in the past... like someone threatening to hunt me down if I didnt update :S I'm so happy that you liked my chapter so much! But yeah things are going to get alot more better from now on! And ahhhh I couldnt help myself I wanted to have a fic where Sasuke looked like a complete and utter slut! :) I think I did really well haha. Oh and that last sentance heh heh heh the whole time when I wrote this chapter it was going through my head XD *evil author-ness* mwahahah
Name: gaara of the desert (Anonymous) · Date: 03/05/07 - 06:08 pm · For: Chapter 4: Lie of Love
hi it is the e-mailer again i say u should out all chapters up that are done plz i love this story
Author's Response: lol awww I remember you!! When I got your emails I felt so bad because I hadnt updated in a long time :S But be asured that I will update as much as possible! I have one on the way!!