Reviews For Fish Bird
Name: ghrnb y4yv (Anonymous) · Date: 05/09/07 - 04:34 am · For: Chapter 1: Out of the thicket and into the woods
one of the best fics i've ever came across.read it months ago and still keep checking if you updated past chapter 10.the best part is that you kept them in character.mean,it's really believable.kept them out of the kissing spree that seems to invade nxs fics.please update soon.
Author's Response: xD try my LJ it's actually updated to chapter 12 on there, I don't really like posting here all that much!
Name: weasel paper fan (Anonymous) · Date: 02/06/07 - 03:21 pm · For: Chapter 9: Within Striking Distance
I love your writing stye. oo I can't wait to see what happens to Naruto and Sasukes' relationship. I hope it has a rather happy ending to it. I love happy ending.
~ weasel papaer fan ~
Name: KaiPhoenix (Signed) · Date: 30/05/07 - 10:05 am · For: Chapter 9: Within Striking Distance
beautifully demented...when you can't think and you can only feel and you can'yt control yourself, but you know you should and you hate yourself for it and it feels like there's nothing left inside of you...someone proves you wrong and you just know that you can never forgive yourself and you want everyone to hate you as much as you hate yourself...
very well written
Name: dont_cry_emo_child (Anonymous) · Date: 24/05/07 - 06:02 pm · For: Chapter 9: Within Striking Distance
Ive been loving this all the way through, the way you write is amazing! I had to reveiw especially this chapter because it was quite dark all the way through but was ended so incredibly well! Really beautiful last paragraph. =)
Name: Ilkar (Signed) · Date: 09/04/07 - 01:04 am · For: Chapter 8: Better Luck Next Time
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! Nothing else need to said! Can't wait to read more, you've made me love Kiba too, bravo ^^ xxx
Name: Cympedig Eirlys (Signed) · Date: 08/04/07 - 08:38 pm · For: Chapter 8: Better Luck Next Time
Wow, this story's amazing ^__^
Stumbled across it at 11pm, stayed up reading till 4am and just had to review. [^_^; I'm a slow reader]
I really like how you describe everything with so much detail, it gives your story a certain uniqeness that kept me hooked!
Oh, and it's well balanced out with all the angst, humour, etc.
I found some parts so amusing that I started laughing out loud, at 4am. Hopefully my parents didn't hear XD
Love the story and can't wait for the next Chapter!
- Cympedig Eiryls x
[P.S Sorry if I sound too formal +_+;]
Name: Landagoshin (Signed) · Date: 21/03/07 - 06:43 am · For: Chapter 7- Beautiful Madness
The fight scene in Chapter 6 was written brilliantly. You used excellent wording and gorgeous descriptions and I could almost feel the pain that their bodies felt because it was written so realistically.
And one thing I have noted in all of your chapters but especially these past 4, is that you masterfully manipulate body language in this story. Description is the lifeblood of a story and you could probably succeed if you just wrote this story with body language and no verbal dialogue. Not that I'm suggesting it though, because I love the dialogue in this story :3
*On a lighter note*
OMG sasunaru yaoi *SQUEEEEEEEEE!!*
IT'S ABOUT TIME THEY KISSED. Took seven chapters but it was all worth it!!
*glompshugstackles*
Keep up the great work on this story. Oh, and happy either belated 18th birthday or nearing 18th birthday.
-Landagoshin
Name: Landagoshin (Signed) · Date: 21/03/07 - 06:34 am · For: Chapter 3: Dying, Living, Waking, Lying
Wow. I haven't gotten this good of a laugh from a fanfic in a while. Most authors attempt and fail miserably at adding humor into a yaoi-fic. And even less authors can pull off adding both humor and angst in the same story because one mood bogs down the other mood and ruins it. You do a perfect job of balancing this story.
And of course, your description skills are amazing. I really can only name a handful of people in the Naruto category who write with such skill in fanfics as you do.
I enjoyed this story thouroughly and hope finish another chapter soon.
Name: Gcbella19 (Signed) · Date: 19/03/07 - 10:07 am · For: Chapter 7- Beautiful Madness
OMG finally!!!!!!!! the best chapter ever!!!!! i loved it!!!!
Name: Ilkar (Signed) · Date: 19/03/07 - 08:51 am · For: Chapter 7- Beautiful Madness
God this is good!!
I've read most of theses chapters before but never reviewed. I'm sorry about that, I really should have- the story's awesome. Makes me want to shout: "EVERYONE READ AND REVIEW THIS STORY IT'S SO SO GOOD!!!" very very loudly. ^^
Very origional title and the characters seem to have strong & believable relationships- I can't wait to find out what they are going to do next!! xxx
p.s I hope you had a good birthday! (You mentioned it at the end of chapter 6- I'm not some kind of crazy psychic stalker ^_^!)
Name: akatsukieyes (Anonymous) · Date: 25/02/07 - 08:37 pm · For: Chapter 6: We used to be friends
I'm well and trully hooked. I've read the story more than once. I love your writing style and language use. This is one of my favoutite pairings and it's great to read a thoughtful and well written story about them. Please update soon!