Reviews For Spiral Falling
Name: MikoKriszty (Signed) · Date: 09/12/07 - 06:01 am · For: Chapter 9 - Solace
w00t loved the ending... It was funny and hot and romantic at the same time :3
I'm so glad they get along so well... And will have the opportunity to do more that make-out ^^
Will they be discovered?
Name: MikoKriszty (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 - 01:56 pm · For: Chapter 8 - When the fox grins
Short, but cute chapter. It's funny how they started with sexuality, and now they're romantic, hugging, and afraid of thir feelings. It makes it realistic.
Name: MikoKriszty (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 - 01:50 pm · For: Chapter 7 - The fear of expectations and resigned loneliness.
Aww... I was so certain Sasuke would call...
When will they start calling each other by their given names?
(ps. I finally decided to register! yay!)
Name: MikoKriszty (muveszno@citromail.hu) (Anonymous) · Date: 08/12/07 - 12:44 pm · For: Chapter 6 - Intertwined knots
Waaaah so nice to see them finding each other in that loneliness :)
Pendant? Lemon? *grin*
Is this up on fanfiction.net? I could not find it....
Name: MikoKriszty (Anonymous) · Date: 08/12/07 - 12:15 pm · For: Chapter 5b - Interlude – Essential Empathy part two
Will you explain about the pendant? Why is it so important to naruto (something family related, I presume)? How come Sasuke has it?
Name: MikoKriszty (Anonymous) · Date: 08/12/07 - 11:08 am · For: Chapter 5a - Interlude – Essential empathy part one
WOW. Unexpected turn! Love this fic. Wish Naruto decided to spend more time w/ Sasuke. He needs it... I guess both of them need it...
P.S.: You made me want to play basketball XD
Name: MikoKriszty (Anonymous) · Date: 08/12/07 - 10:58 am · For: Winter hot chocolate
OMG this fic is astonishingly hot
Name: madisn (Anonymous) · Date: 04/09/07 - 09:59 am · For: Waking
awsome ! totally lemony yet it has a twist that most yaoi dont have ...
Name: SaraCakes (Signed) · Date: 23/06/07 - 01:58 pm · For: Chapter 15 - Lulls
Bahaha, curious Naruto. I love him. XD!
Continue soon, I love the story so faaaaar!~
Name: SaraCakes (Signed) · Date: 23/06/07 - 01:46 pm · For: Chapter 14 - Blood on the snow
Omg, I cried on this chapter. I actually cried when Naruto was starting to explain how 'he' killed his family. Omgsh. *wipes tear* I read until chapter 8 a long time ago, then I lost the link and couldn't get back again, luckily google is amazing haha. Good sotry so far. :) x
Name: Geryfon (Anonymous) · Date: 24/05/07 - 11:43 am · For: Winter hot chocolate
Excellant work,god you can feel the tension between them.I can't wait for the next installment ;)
Name: playin_lover (Signed) · Date: 11/02/07 - 01:09 am · For: Perplexing rivalry
My favorite line was when, I think it was Sakura, said:"I think love would feel like spinning... Spinning... Spinning until the whole world turns into a blur and all you could see is the person you love spinning along with you."
That is my most favorite line of all of time. You are an inspiration to me.
Name: Lili (Signed) · Date: 06/02/07 - 02:41 pm · For: Perplexing rivalry
so good i had to read it a second time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Name: sephirothsslave (Signed) · Date: 28/01/07 - 02:46 pm · For: Perplexing rivalry
OMG ive read this before and well i loved the whole story im gonna read it again
Name: SWSNB (Signed) · Date: 11/01/07 - 11:40 pm · For: Winter hot chocolate
Hey, could you upload the rest of this story here please? I've read your work in AFFN and I loved all of them but AFF doesn't have a favorites list feature (or rather, I cant find it anywhere) so it's difficult to keep track of your stories. Could you upload the rest of this and also your other fics here, pretty please??
Name: playin_lover (Signed) · Date: 04/10/06 - 12:05 am · For: Winter hot chocolate
why don't you put the rest of the chapters up?
I love this story, Its my first ever fanfic!
Name: _LeMoN_LoVe_ (Anonymous) · Date: 17/09/06 - 01:04 pm · For: Winter hot chocolate
this is my fav story on narutofic by far!
Name: Inner Hinata (Signed) · Date: 10/09/06 - 11:45 am · For: Stirrings
ewwww! i couldnt read past "touch me"! but nether the less i still like the story....;)
Name: Inner Hinata (Signed) · Date: 10/09/06 - 11:44 am · For: Perplexing rivalry
a little sick for me but hilirious, i like their insults to each other. please keep writing this story, i luv it, i luv it!! when you get the chance could you please read my story, Hinatas Change. please be honest, i have been. once again, absolutely luv the story. keep up the good work, and write on!!;)
Name: reckless_fire (Signed) · Date: 22/07/06 - 11:42 am · For: Winter hot chocolate
Keep on writing, will look for more of the chapter...if i can
^^; heh
Ja
Name: Raindriops17 (Signed) · Date: 20/07/06 - 02:22 pm · For: Winter hot chocolate
Love it! I hope you update soon!!! :)
Name: WTfizzle (Signed) · Date: 08/06/06 - 05:23 pm · For: Winter hot chocolate
i agree with paradyz! this stoory is amazing even if you dont like shounen-ai/yaoi because its so well written and i like how they're not completely ooc. the part where sasuke was going to go to that school made it seam like a modern version of the original story ^_^ keep up the goo work i totally luff it!
Name: Paradyz (Anonymous) · Date: 03/05/06 - 06:44 am · For: Winter hot chocolate
Your creation never ceases to amaze me. I've already seen this in ZH and AFF but its just so well made. The way they they start as rivals and end up becoming more than that was so well written. Details were explained and feelings and emotions were captured and conveyed. Its just so....PERFECT! The flashbacks and foreshadowing were excellent. It kept me on the edge of my seat(literally) just like it should. The controversies with Sakura and Itachi were so full of suspense. And the lemons....oh god the LEMONS! Absolutely flawless. A diamond. Whoever flames this brilliant masterpiece is either crazy or high on crack.
Name: DRT (Signed) · Date: 14/09/05 - 05:36 am · For: Winter hot chocolate
Good story O.O.UH >_>Made me to write ;D blah.
Author's Response: Thank you ^^ Write! writing is good.
Name: Nidaba (Anonymous) · Date: 25/06/05 - 01:55 pm · For: Perplexing rivalry
I really hope you haven't given up on this story. You have done a fantastic job of portraying the confusion and uncertainty one would expect from rivals suddenly becoming something else entirely. Please update this. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. Actually, this story is already finished (there are 30 chapters). Old news, but just in case you didn't know. ^_^ I should post the rest. As soon I find the time, I suppose. Thank you for your support.