Reviews For Naruto and Sasuke Vs. Kabuto
Name: MissyQuill (Signed) · Date: 11/11/09 - 01:28 pm · For: CHECK IT!!!
Umm.. this ran like a summary more than a story. If you actually stretch this out and include a few effects, this might become a pretty good drabble (I consider drabbles to be up to 500 words).
Also, you need to fix your grammar and some spellings too though I guess English spellings of Japanese words are always up for debate.
Your title was unimaginative, your script was rushed, your technicalities needed polishing and... and now I'm putting more effort into this review than that which went into the entire drabble...
Name: SpiritOak (Signed) · Date: 05/09/09 - 05:17 pm · For: CHECK IT!!!
Yeeks... It's one paragraph long story.... It's not really a story. More like a summary describing the events of a story.
I'm sorry, but I can't rate this higher than a three. You spelled the names right, but it seems not much effort was put into the story at all.
Name: eldertensa (Signed) · Date: 08/08/09 - 12:53 pm · For: CHECK IT!!!
Wow
Name: neji23 (Signed) · Date: 09/04/07 - 05:11 am · For: CHECK IT!!!
that's good. keep it up i'll review some more of your stories if you like.
Name: Moi (Anonymous) · Date: 12/03/07 - 03:07 pm · For: CHECK IT!!!
Lol, what a load of shit.