Reviews For Kakusareta Kage: Reawakened
Name: X3Dee (Signed) · Date: 05/12/14 - 04:06 pm · For: Chapter One
Well, this was certainly a different kind of chapter than the opening, but still I find myself enjoying the kind of classical feel to the beginning of this chapter. Anyway, Neji is always a fun character to open up with because of his perception of the world around him, really dig into that, and I can't wait to see more of these three because Gai's team just has a special place on my heart :)
Good work on this one!
Author's Response: Hey, X3Dee! I'm glad you liked it and I know it's short but bear with me, I've got tons of ideas for this story. Thanks for your review. Much appreciated.
Name: X3Dee (Signed) · Date: 05/12/14 - 03:59 pm · For: PROLOGUE: The Nightmare.
I don't normally read fictions that haven't been updated recently for fear of them being awesome, and then never updating again -_-
In spite of usual behaviors, however, I dropped in and so far I really like this. I like the harshness of the first few paragraphs, the dark roll that hits a sudden stop, bringing us to the waking world. Better yet was the rollback into the nightmarish opening, very nice.
Now, I personally avoid dreamscape openings, but I did like this, and am looking forward to reading what comes next :3
Name: mst88 (Signed) · Date: 14/05/14 - 01:33 pm · For: PROLOGUE: The Nightmare.
This is intensely good!
Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm really happy you liked it.
Name: Fire_and_Ice (Signed) · Date: 13/05/14 - 10:02 am · For: PROLOGUE: The Nightmare.
Woah. Okay so I think you missed the s when you described his bottomless eyes, but it really wasn't a big deal. I got what you meant. But yeah woah. Did not expect that... Good work, I like the description and the feelings I got from it. I'm looking forward to more chapters! :) thanks for writing!
Author's Response: My first reviewer! Yay!XD thanks for the comment. I'm really happy you enjoyed it. Next time, though, I'll triple check before I submit so don't make that silly mistake again. Thank you soOoo much!