Sorry it took me so long to get to this, but I finally did. First off, in my opinion you did OOC Haku, but only with his strong show of anger against Jena. He hates hurting people, even those targeting Zabuza. That's why he uses the needles usually - they don't kill. So if anything Haku may stop Jena, but I see him more just stopping her - not hurting her - and then hiding any anger he feels. I'm not even sure he ever showed real strong anger in the series. Though I could be wrong.

Poor Jena. Escaped capture before just for it to succeed this time. At least now she doesn't have to worry about being sent back to Konoha. More like worrying about getting back there. I love little rabbits. They're so cute. As soon as I saw it was a rabbit I knew Haku was there. Of course, I knew he'd appear soon, but that's not the point. Hm... Did Purple Shirt appear before? Because I don't remember if he did or not XD. I'm curious to how Kakashi and the others will react to Jena's predicament. So Jena is going to hear Haku's story now, hm? Fun.

Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: Purple Shirt was in TC sasa

Finally getting to this, but the review will be quick because I'm tired (yes, already) and highly distracted today.

I can't say I was surprised by Kakashi's alternative seeing as you already told me about it. I'm so used to this age that I keep expecting Jena to be scolded for smoking. I kept imagining how this could go and can see a lot of opportunities with the different version of the skill. The thing I'm wondering is why she's able to shout out about the rape but not the effect of it. I guess I can understand with thought, but right off I wasn't sure.

Oh. My. Gosh. Naruto needs slapped in the face. Not only does he overkill the slug (the poor, poor slug) but he just had to make a perverted comment. Tch tch tch.

Good chapter, Dino-chan. Off to read more.

By the way you talked I'd say you're moving in the same town, which is good. I've moved to a different town once, then back to my old town, and it was hard since I lost all the people I knew, so I'm glad you're at least sticking with your friends. Plus, you get a computer and basement.

Okay, to the actual chapter. It was sweet how Jena was acting toward Kakashi. It was like a gentler side to her. I wonder how she'll act around her own team after this mission. Then again, we didn't really get to see how her team acts, so I can't read guess how that would be. Since they're a team hopefully not bad.

Poor Inari. He was caught by her when she wasn't in a good mood. That's never good. Especially when the kid is small enough to be slammed against the wall. Tomi would kick (or try to kick) her butt for that. Of course, she's not there. Again, Sasuke shows his heart by going after Jena. Of course, he stills acts like a heartless jerk, but it's the thought the counts.

Yikes. Forgot about the whole messed up chakra thing. So there's on ability she won't be able to use, huh? Guess that'll mean the walking on water one, too. Wonder what Kakashi wants to talk about. Does he know something?

Great chapter, Dino-chan. I'm eager to find out where it goes.

In The Medic's Love, I said something about how I liked the writing more. It seems to have slipped over to this fanfic. Maybe the pace is better or something? I dunno. This chapter just appealed to me more than the ones before to be honest.

Anyway, I liked the way you have this. It's not that she got away - it's that Haku became preoccupied. She also didn't do it with ease. If anything, she got away because Haku was toying with her or something at first. A lot more realistic than her easily escaping.

Huh. Nice way to use senbon needles to give us a look into her past. So she used to be with Kankuro? Interesting. Wonder what will happen when he comes to the Leaf.

Aw. Sasuke is helping out. He does have a heart XD. Of course, I already knew this, but still. So nice of him. Maybe it is him trying to be friends, which would definitely be interesting. Nice update, Dino-chan!

This all seemed pretty rushed. Then again, you may have just done that since probably nearly all the people reading this remember what happened.

Ooh. Only Jena is going. Oops XD. But again with the clashing. Everyone just seems to seriously annoy her. Though she doesn't seem as annoyed by Naruto now. She even defended him. Nice little bit of action there, by the way. Wonder how Jena is going to affect the rest of the mission to come.

Haha. The Dani-Mimi thing really shocked me. I mean, I've read books with homosexual couples, but it still surprised me. Gosh, I need some soap for Jena's mouth. Both to get the cigarettes out and for the potty mouth.

Oh gosh. Jena was handed a fabulous bunch of ramen XD. I found it hilarious with Naruto since she totally scared him. And her calling Shikaku Scarface is always fun. Plus she had to deal with Ebisu. Now to make it all worse, Sasuke is next.

Sorry for the shorter review than normal. Kinda trying to fast read. A lot to catch up on.

I WANT STRAWBERRY JAM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! nice it doesnt suprize me that i would be the one to be takein hostage cant wait till the next chapter. so do you got any strawberry jam

HEY DONT WHINE ABOUT WANTING SLEEP I DIDNT SLEEP AND I damn it i did still i thought you liked L so that means no sleep for you...................... COLORFULL WORDS i had a hard time not laughing............. well those choise of words when i enter the house and reseve the money would be what i say more than likely. my foice sweet wow after the last four chapter i thought my sweetness was gone. also had a hard time sreaming when i found out well you know i wonder what will hapenn i spelled that wrong but who care couse i shure dont and YUMMY.....................RONFLMFAO. IT is for both sam and me cause we both laughed so hard i thought we were going to die. bye-bye

I love Shikamaru. After writing CS with Team 10, it's impossible not to like them all.

I'm a little iffy about Shikamaru caring much about Jena. He's a good guy, though, so it doesn't surprise me really that he'd take her to the hospital and all that. I can also understand the Hokage asking him this question, though I think it shouldn't have been up to him as much as it should have been his parents. Seeing as I'm not sure too much is known on Shikamaru's mom, it would have been easy to play on her being the one to say yes since everyone knows if she says that, nobody would argue. So maybe if you're worried about OOCing Shikamaru, that's a way to lessen it?

She can't use chakra in her feet? I want to ask what exactly her dad did to her to cause that, but at the same time.... I am not sure I want to know....... How exactly is she going to handle this new handicap? And Team 11? So people we don't know. I wonder just who they'll be. Also curious on her sensei, who is currently without a name.

Overall great chapter that I highly enjoyed, Dino-chan.

again with the white room............ o ya cause if it was black "it would scream death" CHAD STAY OUT OF THIS......... HE DIDN'T EVEN KNOW WHAT WE WERE TALKING ABOUT....................yawn............... it about 2 or 3 in the morning and i gotta get up at 6 so imma gonna go back to sleep. it took for ever to write this(or type it) cause im on my DSI XL

Hi Dino-chan!
Okay, here comes the review.
You showed Jena's insane-ness pretty well actually. Tis was interesting. In chapter one, I felt as though Iruka was too.. mean. I know he's strict, but he's not necessarily mean, especially to a new transfer. It's a bit OOC, so you'd have to give an explanation for it. Sasuke develops an interest in Jena a bit too quickly, as Sasaui said. I think he'd see her as troublesome... but it is plausible that he'd try to out-do her after she out-did him. Perhaps in a less showy way? He does dislike attention. He wants to be the best, and he doesn't care if he's seen as the best or not. He wants a challenge, and I guess you showed that with Jena.
Pretty well done. Interesting character, and storyline. Why did her family suddenly move?

Author's Response: It was by the actual Jenna's wishes that I get Sasuke interested in her skills. Besides I said it was my first shot at an OCXSasuke story I'm glad you liked it and this story grabbed your attention.

Hm.... First off, I must say be careful. Jena is starting to border Mary-Sue, unless there is a reason she's so strong. Also, if this is SasuOc, be careful not to rush it. I can understand the interest due to her five wind clones. But this is, well, Sasuke, so watch it. Naruto may immediately crush on someone from strength - maybe - but it'll take time with Sasuke. Sorry to say that when you haven't even really started, but I wanted to give a warning. Also, because this is your friend, you may always want to please her, but keep in mind if everything is perfect, again, Mary-Sue. And, also again, sorry for all the advice on only the first chapter. Please don't be angry U^_^.

Sheesh, Jena has a big temper. It's funny to read about. I just hope she doesn't hurt Shikamaru too much. After CS, I really like him. I wonder what team she'll be on. Probably Team 7, but still wondering if you'll do a twist and have her with Shikamaru or her own team.

Nice chapter, Dino-chan. I look forward to more.

Author's Response: I know lol I always tell myself that not to rush it and I told Jenna that I wouldn't make Sasuke fall in love with her automatically. I'm being super careful on this. And Jena never got much attention as a kid so all she knew was training. This will come into play later in the story :D. Also Jenna, if u read this response, know I will talk to u about this tomorrow.